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Talk:Stephen Chow

2012-03-04T22:28:14Z

CharlotteCharles:

You filmography seems to be very long, almost too much for the page. Perhaps when you add more content it will look more balanced but maybe trim the list down to a specific category of his films or figure out how to make it do columns? --[[User:Ming Ming|Ming Ming]] 03:22, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

It seems like he needs to keep the whole filmography though, if that's how many movies Chow has made. It doesn't seem fair to Chow to leave some out... I think this is looking great! The only thing I would look at is your references. I think we decided in class to do it MLA style, so with paranthetical citations. For example, (Xu) instead of the dashes like you currently have. Also, be sure to cite where you found the filmography (imdb probably, but you want to make sure that it shows on the filmography where you got it, not just at the bottom) and personal info section. Also I think with the new standard for MLA you don't need page numbers on your works cited page (which ends up being the references at the bottom for us). I would double check with the Purdue site, they are usually the most up to date with that stuff. Other than that, I think this is looking fantastic! Great job! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

I took out nearly 20 films as is. Mostly cameo appearances. But the list of movies included are all on top lists when discussing Chow's films. --Jon

Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon

Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] and [http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=stephen+chow&l=cc&ct=0&mt=all&adv=1 here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Stephen Chow

2012-03-04T22:21:12Z

CharlotteCharles:

You filmography seems to be very long, almost too much for the page. Perhaps when you add more content it will look more balanced but maybe trim the list down to a specific category of his films or figure out how to make it do columns? --[[User:Ming Ming|Ming Ming]] 03:22, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

It seems like he needs to keep the whole filmography though, if that's how many movies Chow has made. It doesn't seem fair to Chow to leave some out... I think this is looking great! The only thing I would look at is your references. I think we decided in class to do it MLA style, so with paranthetical citations. For example, (Xu) instead of the dashes like you currently have. Also, be sure to cite where you found the filmography (imdb probably, but you want to make sure that it shows on the filmography where you got it, not just at the bottom) and personal info section. Also I think with the new standard for MLA you don't need page numbers on your works cited page (which ends up being the references at the bottom for us). I would double check with the Purdue site, they are usually the most up to date with that stuff. Other than that, I think this is looking fantastic! Great job! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

I took out nearly 20 films as is. Mostly cameo appearances. But the list of movies included are all on top lists when discussing Chow's films. --Jon

Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon

Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Stephen Chow

2012-03-04T22:20:36Z

CharlotteCharles:

You filmography seems to be very long, almost too much for the page. Perhaps when you add more content it will look more balanced but maybe trim the list down to a specific category of his films or figure out how to make it do columns? --[[User:Ming Ming|Ming Ming]] 03:22, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

It seems like he needs to keep the whole filmography though, if that's how many movies Chow has made. It doesn't seem fair to Chow to leave some out... I think this is looking great! The only thing I would look at is your references. I think we decided in class to do it MLA style, so with paranthetical citations. For example, (Xu) instead of the dashes like you currently have. Also, be sure to cite where you found the filmography (imdb probably, but you want to make sure that it shows on the filmography where you got it, not just at the bottom) and personal info section. Also I think with the new standard for MLA you don't need page numbers on your works cited page (which ends up being the references at the bottom for us). I would double check with the Purdue site, they are usually the most up to date with that stuff. Other than that, I think this is looking fantastic! Great job! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

I took out nearly 20 films as is. Mostly cameo appearances. But the list of movies included are all on top lists when discussing Chow's films. --Jon

Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon

Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Stephen Chow

2012-03-04T22:20:10Z

CharlotteCharles:

You filmography seems to be very long, almost too much for the page. Perhaps when you add more content it will look more balanced but maybe trim the list down to a specific category of his films or figure out how to make it do columns? --[[User:Ming Ming|Ming Ming]] 03:22, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

It seems like he needs to keep the whole filmography though, if that's how many movies Chow has made. It doesn't seem fair to Chow to leave some out... I think this is looking great! The only thing I would look at is your references. I think we decided in class to do it MLA style, so with paranthetical citations. For example, (Xu) instead of the dashes like you currently have. Also, be sure to cite where you found the filmography (imdb probably, but you want to make sure that it shows on the filmography where you got it, not just at the bottom) and personal info section. Also I think with the new standard for MLA you don't need page numbers on your works cited page (which ends up being the references at the bottom for us). I would double check with the Purdue site, they are usually the most up to date with that stuff. Other than that, I think this is looking fantastic! Great job! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

I took out nearly 20 films as is. Mostly cameo appearances. But the list of movies included are all on top lists when discussing Chow's films. --Jon

Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon

Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch] I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Street Angel

2012-03-04T03:40:54Z

CharlotteCharles:

Will there be more content? Also, given the beauty of the movie, images would greatly help the paper. --[[User:Ming Ming|Ming Ming]] 03:24, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Holly, it's looking great! I agree that pictures would be fantastic, but have been having a hard time finding good ones for mine. Are you having the same problem? I think with your parenthetical citations you don't need commas though. Just (Palmer 187). <- example. It's also looking a little funky at the bottom. You've got a parenthetical citation with no citation, plus there are weird spacing issues. Also a couple grammatical issues at the top (no spaces after commas, the skyscraper "The skyscraper, etc.) Nice work with incorporating the actual Chinese characters though! I have no idea how to do that haha! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:40, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Stephen Chow

2012-03-04T03:35:39Z

CharlotteCharles:

Talk:Wong Kar Wai

2012-03-04T03:27:39Z

CharlotteCharles:

Good luck! [[User:Root|Root]] 19:18, 29 February 2012 (UTC)

Dear Karly, can you look into handout2.doc and try to add some more genuine thoughts, the article so far looks pretty descriptive and encyclopaedic to me. Thank you very much! [[User:Root|Root]] 19:25, 29 February 2012 (UTC)

Hey i noticed that you have a "[4]" in your rewards section "1997 Cannes Film Festival, Best Director (Happy Together)[4]." I would also add more to the thoughts section about maybe a few more things that you really enjoyed about the film. Can you think of specific scenes in which he demonstrated those great visual and intellectual brilliance? I say that because i agree with you on that part. [[User:Zhongwen dianying|Zhongwen dianying]] 20:58, 2 March 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! I went ahead and deleted the [4] and I tried to add a bit more to my thoughts section in regards to what I enjoyed about In the Mood for Love. --[[User:Keeley X.|Keeley X.]] 03:19, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Keeley, I think this looks so great! The only thing I would maybe change is that I don't think you need to use both names when crediting a source paranthetically. For example, instead of saying (Scott Tobias), I think you only need (Tobias). Everything else looks fantastic!! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:27, 4 March 2012 (UTC)