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Talk:Ling Shuhua (1900-1990)

2012-10-10T13:17:20Z

Ellafitzgerald:

Very well organized, except the first block. I think you put too much in the Childhood section. I noticed she was born in 1900, yet you included stuff all the way into the 1920's in that section. I would put the stuff from her teenage years on up into a different section. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 17:30, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

It looks good, but you have a lot more information in the first section than all the rest. I would just add more to the other sections. And I agree with the comment above.[[User:Pips|Pips]] 17:38, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

I think that it looks really good! I noticed that you changed the childhood section to life, good call! [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 13:17, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Qian Zhongshu (1910

2012-10-10T13:14:20Z

Ellafitzgerald:

Okay, you've got some really good stuff here. A lot of commentary, a few grammar problems to work out, though, but otherwise a great article. You also did a really good job on giving credit to your sources. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 17:25, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

You have a lot of good information but you really need to revise the grammar. The entire article is filled with grammar issues which is really distracting.[[User:Pips|Pips]] 17:40, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

You presented a lot of really good information with good images, I would maybe give it another read through to make sure that your writing is clear. Great job though! [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 13:14, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Zhang Ailing

2012-10-09T05:34:15Z

Ellafitzgerald: Created page with 'That first line is looking kind of funky... ~~~~'

That first line is looking kind of funky... [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:34, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Guo Moruo (1892 -1978)

2012-10-09T05:33:17Z

Ellafitzgerald: Created page with 'Your first section is looking good. ~~~~'

Your first section is looking good. [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:33, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Xiao Hong (1911-1942)

2012-10-09T05:32:23Z

Ellafitzgerald: Created page with 'It looks good! Do you have any images? ~~~~'

It looks good! Do you have any images? [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:32, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Lu Xun (1881-1936)

2012-10-09T05:30:09Z

Ellafitzgerald:

This article is a stub! [[User:Root|Root]] 21:13, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

It looks really good! Great format and images! [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:30, 9 October 2012 (UTC)