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Talk:A Beautiful Life

2013-04-16T03:47:08Z

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Looks like you've put some work into this. Is this a revised article, one that was first created last year? The second name seems to imply that it is, but the history says it was just created two days ago. Anyway, I have a couple of points to bring up on the plot synopsis: It's a plumber, not cook that Fang is passed off as and he uses the police car to follow the married lover (boss); not exactly smart (it is using the vehicle for personal use) but not exactly shady either. 
OK, on to more serious matters. I don't see any citations. Not on the pictures and not in the written parts. Unless you personally created all this material, you really do need to tell us where you got it; to give credit to the original sources. And, unless you got all the info from one source, you should have a citation after every section, if not every paragraph. Also, while online sources can be good, it doesn't hurt to add a written one or two (the texts used for class mention a few things related to this show). Don't give up! It is a good article, or will be when you get the citations in! [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo|talk]]) 04:05, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

You have so much information! Its great! The major sections of text could be broken up with pictures/screenshots of the scenes being talked about. Also, you should include any awards the film won/was nominated for. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 05:47, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

Talk:5th Generation Director: Zhang Yimou

2013-04-16T03:42:44Z

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You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)

I see a lot of information, but no citations (except for the pictures). The article was supposed to be in first person too. For references, I only see one listed. It would be good to have at least 2 references (he is a famous director; there is certain to be more than one source of info on him - for example, check out the books we use in class). In short, it's not bad for a rough draft. 
Also, there is an article from last year's class about Zhang Yimou. According to the instructions for this assignment, if there was an existing article, we were supposed to revise and add to it - not create a new article. I know it isn't easy to start with another person's material, but that was part of the assignment. Maybe it's not to late to fix this. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo|talk]]) 03:56, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

I would actually like to see his filmography and awards in an easy list. This will help other students find his other films. The article has a lot of interesting information though [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 05:42, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

Talk:Farewell My Concubine

2013-04-16T03:39:27Z

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=New comments in 2013=
Dear Licia, please start to paste your notes and extend it into a paper. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 14:03, 25 February 2013 (CET)

This is just a sketch to start out with- more is coming.--[[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)

These are great quotes! I'll have to take a look at it when there's more content. Can't wait to see the finished product!--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)

This is a good beginning! Perhaps you could add how it was received in China as well as the United States. --[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 07:59, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Good quotes, although you should point how who actually said them. Now say more about the film. --[[User:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth|Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth]] ([[User talk:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth|talk]]) 22:28, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Humm...needs some work, although I remember that you said you were working on the Wong Kar-wai article for the midterm, you still need to flesh this one out. I recognize the quotes from the movie, but you really should describe the scenes when they are said, and explain why you chose these particular quotes (as opposed to any others).
Good start.--[[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo|talk]]) 07:06, 2 March 2013 (CET)

You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)

:I looked and looked, but I couldn't find more pictures that weren't copyrighted. Too bad I couldn't just run out with my camera and take some! [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 04:48, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

Well, here it is (the finished product). Hope you like it. [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 03:47, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

Much better than the list of quotes you first pasted on here! Still a little skimpy though - you really could use a little more information in the separate sections. Perhaps you could find some more info if you check out the class texts. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo|talk]]) 04:41, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

Use bullet points to organize lists (like your quotes section) this will help clean up those sections and make them easily readable. Otherwise looks good! I like the personal commentary. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 05:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

Talk:The role of meals in Ang Lee's Eat, Drink, Man, Woman

2013-03-01T07:15:50Z

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=New comments in 2013=
Dear Hannah, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then paste it into the article. The final version should be 7 pages. You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 14:08, 25 February 2013 (CET)

I had this problem with another article, but nothing loaded up when I clicked on your link. If you have not yet started your article then I guess I do not have much to say. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 01:22, 28 February 2013 (CET)

I'll have to read this when there's content. I'm sure it'll turn out great! [[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:22, 28 February 2013 (CET)

Don't forget to add pictures to your finished work! --[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 08:15, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Talk:Jackie Chan

2013-03-01T07:10:38Z

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Really great start with tons of really interesting and useful information. I think you are supposed to write the article in the same way you are presenting by referring to yourself as "I" When referring to Jackie Chan. I really like the section where you list out his different injuries. He really is such an interesting guy with such an interesting film career. Maybe offer some more pictures and also maybe some video clips of some of Jackies best moments in action. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 01:25, 28 February 2013 (CET)

You have some really great info. I would like to see some clips of Jackie doing some stunts though. [[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:25, 28 February 2013 (CET)

The biography section has a lot of text, which could be broken up with sub-headings or media like pictures. Otherwise it's great :) --[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 08:10, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Talk:Jackie Chan

2013-03-01T07:10:08Z

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Really great start with tons of really interesting and useful information. I think you are supposed to write the article in the same way you are presenting by referring to yourself as "I" When referring to Jackie Chan. I really like the section where you list out his different injuries. He really is such an interesting guy with such an interesting film career. Maybe offer some more pictures and also maybe some video clips of some of Jackies best moments in action. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 01:25, 28 February 2013 (CET)

You have some really great info. I would like to see some clips of Jackie doing some stunts though. [[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:25, 28 February 2013 (CET)

The biography section has a lot of text, which could be broken up with sub-headings or media like pictures. --[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 08:10, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Talk:Farewell My Concubine

2013-03-01T06:59:14Z

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Talk:Jet Li

2013-03-01T06:53:51Z

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Dear Matt, good start.
*Please also upload your powerpoint presentation and then extend the existing article. Now it is still too short. It is about 1 screen page now, the rest are lists of films etc. The final version should be 7 pages.
*You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator:" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.).
*If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures.
*Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp."
*Of course, if you write something you created yourself (like a conclusion, comment etc.) you cannot indicate a source.
*In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==".
*In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph.
*For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal our Wiki steps].
*Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 04:36, 28 February 2013 (CET)

I like this. it's enough information for me. i just want some links to clips of his videos or something. like a best of clip or something like that. maybe wiki isn't the place for that. so good work for now fellow classmate. --[[User:143robertb|143robertb]] ([[User talk:143robertb|talk]]) 04:50, 28 February 2013 (CET)

I agree with 143robertb. Some more clips would be great! --[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 04:50, 28 February 2013 (CET)

Maybe you could put up some screenshots from his movies and add them to the article to make it more engaging. --[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 07:53, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Talk:Ideology in Chinese Films

2013-03-01T06:40:29Z

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=New comments in 2013=
Dear Melanie, good start. Please also upload your powerpoint presentation and then extend the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 14:05, 25 February 2013 (CET)

Great start. Definitely go into more depth about each little subject that you have. A pretty fascinating read that informs really well. Probably give more of your own opinions and ideas about the subject. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 01:20, 28 February 2013 (CET)

I also really enjoyed the article. easy to read and follow along. just get a picture and it'll do just nicely.
--[[User:143robertb|143robertb]] ([[User talk:143robertb|talk]]) 04:48, 28 February 2013 (CET)

This seems like a good start. Some more info about the 5th and 6th generations would be nice. Cool pictures! It's awesome that you took most of these pictures yourself when you were in China. --[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 04:48, 28 February 2013 (CET)

Looks great! The headings could be in lowercase to make the article more inviting. Also the 6th generation heading could be reformatted so it fits in with the rest of the article --[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys|talk]]) 07:40, 1 March 2013 (CET)

Kung Fu

2012-03-05T06:49:58Z

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'''Chinese Martial arts'''

Kung Fu is considered the origin of martial arts. Having studied Shotokan Karate for nine years, I am very passionate about martial arts and the way they work. In the ''Guide to Kung Fu Fighting Styles'', it says that "Kung Fu is merely a skill... that anyone can learn."1 Yes it requires diligent training, as does any skill, but Kung Fu is not limited to only those who have a certain body shape. What is more important is the use of the skill, and the morals and philosophy of the person bearing the name of any style of martial art. If the morals and philosophy do not live up to the expectations of the Sifu, he/she will turn down and not teach those that cannot uphold them.

== '''Definitions''' ==

'''Kung Fu''': Means a skill in anything, including cooking or painting. It was taken by westerners to mean someone who was adept at fighting after observing daoist monks. It is also called Wu Shu and is the modern Chinese term for martial arts, although it is more of an exercise and dance in communist China. 3

[[File:Kungfuchara.jpg|800px|thumb|right|The Chinese characters for Kung Fu.]]

'''Sifu''': Master or teacher.

'''Long arm''': Using the full extent of the arm

'''Short arm''': Using part of the arm, usually using the rest of the body to be the power behind the punch.

'''Hard''': Powerful/ Fast

'''Soft''': Flowing/ Slow

'''External Power''': Focuses on outward power, without the buildup of chi.

'''Internal Power''': Focuses on internal power, building up chi.

== '''History''' ==

Chinese martial arts Pre date the [[Shang Dynasty|Shang Dynasty]]. The art of hand to hand combat became very practical and necessary in the warring states period. It was a time that called for assassins and mercenaries as the separate states vied for power. This time, as well as being a time for developing philosophies, became a time of perfecting the body. Rulers required escorts and protection at all times, bringing forth those who were very proficient in and studied martial arts.

This came to an end when [[Qin Shihuangdi|Emperor Qin]] prohibited the practice of martial arts by citizens and prohibited the citizens from carrying weapons. [[File:Takashi_saito.jpg|200px|thumb|left|Gaozu, the peasant who became emperor. Photo courtesy of Takashi Saito.]]

The next emperor, Liu Pang, also known as Gaozu, an escort and prominent martial artist, brought the study of martial arts back to China. It is said he was escorting a band of prisoners, set them free and took over, becoming the first Han emperor.[[File:Liutao.jpg|250px|thumb|right|Physician, and co founder of Kung Fu?. Photo courtesy of LiuTao]]

During this time period Hua-tuo, a physician, made a series of exercises modeled after five animals. The tiger, deer, monkey, bird, and bear became the precursors to the later five animals of shaolin kung-fu.

Bodhidharma brought Buddhism to China. When he saw that the monks were not keeping themselves fit and healthy, because they were not exercising properly, he taught the monks how to keep their bodies physically fit, and to be prepared to defend their monasteries. Being a non-violent religion, the Buddhist monks did not engage in fighting unless necessary, but did give sanctuary to refugees. These refugees took the exercises and combined them with the already established Chinese martial art. The fighting styles that came from that were taught by these fighters disguised as monks. Thus the Shaolin Style was born.1
[[File:Infinite_Jeff.jpg|200px|thumb|right|This traveller contributed greatly to the Shaolin Style. Photo courtesy of Infinite Jeff]]

During the Tang dynasty, the martial arts flourished, as well as the perfection of weapons out of necessity. The government used the resources and expertise in the temples to protect the surrounding towns. This helped the government fight off invasions from all sides, especially from the north.

The first emperor of the Song dynasty, Zhao Kuangyin was also a martial artist that used a three sectioned staff. He also created the chang quan ( long fist) martial arts system. It is the grandfather of most modern styles.
In southern Song, General Yue Fei, took spear techniques and changed them into empty fist techniques, something that can be found in most styles.3

In Kung Fu, philosophy is very important. It gives meaning and cause to the martial artist. The main philosophy of most styles is to be straightforward, honest and morally correct. Martial arts in general teach self-control and to use whatever is learned properly. Most styles use a combination of [[Confucius|Confucian]], Daoist, and [[Buddhism|Buddhist]] philosophies to govern their styles.

== '''Two systems''': Northern and Southern 1 ==

==== Southern System ====

[[File:Hunggar.jpg|100px|thumb|right|Hung Gar 1 pp 80-85]]
It is characterized by complex body maneuvers and an emphasis on leg techniques. It is straight forward and focuses on power.

'''Styles''':

'''Hung Gar''': Developed in the Shaolin temple of Fukien. This style uses wide, low stances, which make for a good solid base of fighting. It has slow training, which makes it popular to learn. The strikes are slow, but powerful. It is very internal, using the buildup of chi to turn the body into a fortress.

'''Wing Chun''': This style is believed to be founded by a woman. It uses high stances, allowing for quicker movements. It utilizes short aggressive attacks to the opponents core. It is purely a style for self-defense, with no fancy moves or forms. This style, unlike most in Kung Fu, uses little weapons.
'''Interesting Fact''': The practitioners of this style would build up their wrist sensitivity, by rubbing against other students wrists while walking in a circle, attempting to predict the other student's moves. The students then use this sensitivity on an opponent to predict moves.[[File:Wingchun.jpg|100px|thumb|right|Wing Chun 1 pp 86-91]]

'''Tibetan White Crane''': This is a very exclusive style, and is only taught to those deemed worthy to learn. It is a long arm style, with shifting and quick footwork. The arm is never recoiled, and constantly remains in a long arm position. Using momentum from the opponent’s attacks, the arm is powered by the waist, hips and back like a missile being launched, or a birds wing being swung.

'''White Eyebrow''': Created by Bak Mei, a revolutionary during the Ching Dynasty. The style is so called because the creator had white eyebrows. This is a short hand style. The point of it is to be soft and flexible in movement until contact is made and then the energy is released, or the hit is made. Uses pressure points as the main attacking point.

'''Special Southern Technique''': A seldom taught technique called the Southern Praying Mantis, or Jew Gar. It was taught to the royal family in the Ming dynasty. It is also called the machine gun technique, because it utilizes short fast and powerful punches.
[[File:Whiteeyebrow.jpg|100px|thumb|right|White Eyebrow 1 pp 98-103]][[File:Whitecrane.jpg|200px|thumb|center|Tibetan White Crane 1 pp 92-97]] [[File:Nprayingmantis.jpg|100px|thumb|right|Northern Praying Mantis 1 pp 34-39]]
==== Northern System ====
[[File:Monkey.jpg|100px|thumb|right|Tai Sing 1 pp 40-45]]
[[File:Dragonclaw.jpg|100px|thumb|left|Dragon Claw 2 pp 7-11]]
[[File:Eagleclaw.jpg|100px|thumb|right|Eagle Claw 1 pp 46-52]]
[[File:Crane.jpg|100px|thumb|left|Crane 2 pp 25-29]]
[[File:Hsingi.jpg|100px|thumb|right|Hsing I 1 pp 52-55]]
[[File:Snake.jpg|150px|thumb|left|Snake Strike 2 pp 19-22]]
[[File:Tigerclaw.jpg|100px|thumb|left|Tiger Claw 2 pp 13-17]]
[[File:Leopardfist.jpg|100px|thumb|left|Leopard Fist 2 pp 31-34]]
[[File:Pakwa.jpg|100px|thumb|right|Pa Kwa 1 pp 56-59]]
[[File:Taichi.jpg|100px|thumb|right|Tai Chi 1 pp 60-69]]

It is characterized by intricate body maneuvers and an emphasis on hand techniques. It is circular and softer.

'''Styles'''

'''Northern Praying Mantis''': Originated in East Shan-Tung province by Wong Long. Uses quick monkey like footwork, while utilizing arm and hand strength. This style combined many styles into one.

'''Monkey or Tai Sing''': The founder was Kao Tze. He was a prisoner in a prison where one exit was guarded by fierce monkeys. Many tried to escape through the monkeys, but would be defeated. So Kao Tze simply observed the monkeys and developed a martial art style based from monkey fighting. The founder believed that to be taught the monkey style, one must become a monkey in spirit. There were five monkeys he observed:
*'''The drunken monkey'''- This monkey appears incompetent and fun. It is elusive and uses low stances and fast attacks. This is a style for a smaller person, as it uses rolling techniques which may be awkward for average individuals.
*'''The Stone Monkey'''- This monkey uses pure physical force. This is a style for a larger person.
*'''The lost monkey'''- This monkey is tricky, and deceiving. It uses light footwork, and is unpredictable in its striking patterns. This style is also for a smaller person.
*'''The standing monkey'''- This style uses a more conventional, long arm technique. It is good for a taller person because it seldom requires rolls or low stances.
*'''The wooden monkey'''- This monkey is aggressive with controlled attacks. It is a very deadly style. It is good for the average sized person.
This is a good example of the wide variety of body types that can learn Kung Fu, for neither monkey style is the right one, as they are all for different body types.

'''Eagle Claw''': This is another very exclusive style. It uses pressure points, joint locks and similar techniques to control, immobilize or even kill an opponent. There are 108 points of attack in this style. Of these, 36 are secret, and lethal. The other 72 are just pressure point attacks that are taught to the students. This style relies on speed and concentrated power of attack, like the eagle from which is is modelled.

'''Hsing-I''': This style is very simple and straightforward. It is also a very internal style. It uses the five elements: earth, metal, water, wood, fire,which represent different parts of the body, to illustrate how to strengthen the body by using chi. It uses twelve animals (dragon, tiger, falcon, snake, bear, tai bird, lizard, swallow, eagle) for form.

'''Pa Kwa'''- This means eight directions. The style is characterized by curved steps, and open handed or concentrated strikes. It has a soft stage of training, where one learns the internal style and strengthens che. Then later a hard stage where one learns the external style. Unlike most martial art styles, both hands are used equally, and so double weapons are used in this style.

'''Tai Chi'''- Uses Ying and Yang in combat. In other words it is slow and flows for flexibility in fighting, and then changes to a hard and fast strike once the opportunity presents itself. Like Pa Kwa, there are two stages to learning, a soft then a hard. This way of teaching helps the student remain relaxed throughout the entire training process, because being too tense causes a disadvantage. Most students and masters do not go past the soft stage of training, because it is used in some places as a relaxation exercise and not for self defence.

== '''Five Shaolin animals''' 2 ==

In all Kung Fu styles, animals have been observed and their fighting techniques have been applied to human abilities. Each animal is ideal for different people, and one should not force their body to learn a style that is not natural. These are the main five animals used in Shaolin Kung Fu.

*'''Dragon-''' Uses a combination of hard and soft techniques. Characterized by a grabbing claw hand technique. Dragon is ideal for a lean, but strong person.

*'''Tiger-''' Has the strongest influence in Kung Fu. The techniques are hard and fast, creating a very powerful style. It is characterized by a tearing claw hand technique. One of the reasons Tiger is so popular because it the average person can learn it, and it is ideal for the larger individual.

*'''Snake-''' Is a soft style and is used to cultivate the inner energy or chi. A successful practitioner will be a very relaxed fighter, striking once, releasing all of the built up energy. Snake is ideal for a smaller person.

*'''Crane-''' Like the snake, it is a soft style, with the purpose of building up chi. Unlike the snake, it is circular, utilizing both short and long attacks. Crane is ideal for a taller person.

*'''Leopard-''' This is a style that uses a combination of hard and soft. It uses of balance, agility, speed, combined with power, requiring much chi for endurance. It is characterized by the leopard fist. This is also ideal for the average person.

== '''Media''' ==

For more in-depth information on the forms and styles, please refer to the books in the reference section.

[[File:Kung_fu.pptx|200px|thumb|left|.]]

[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bp2eSsLOXnA Avatar:The last airbender]is a good visual representation of the flow of energy desired in different styles of Kung Fu. It also shows four of the main styles of Kung Fu.

== References ==

1 ''The Complete Guide to Kung Fu Fighting Styles'',Hallander,Jane. Unique Publications, Burbank, CA 1985.

2 ''Shaolin Five-Animals Kung Fu, Hallander'', Jane and Doc-Fai, Wong. Unique Publications, Burbank, CA 1988.

3'' Martial Arts: Traditions, History, People'', Corcoran,John and Farkas, Emil. Gallery Books, New York, NY 1983 (pp 88-102).

Talk:Qin Shihuangdi

2012-03-05T05:09:07Z

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= Scope =
I know, it's just a start. More pictures, words and citations will be added.[[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 05:33, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
:This is not even a start, it is just a stub. Can anybody help Licia with it? [[Special:Contributions/161.28.159.52|161.28.159.52]] 22:37, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
::Who is IP 161.28.159.52? Please login with your user name first! [[Special:Contributions/161.28.159.52|161.28.159.52]] 22:38, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

=Content=
Where is all that great information from your presentation? I feel that becoming a ruler at such a young age and accomplishing so much in such short time, a timeline of some sort would be very useful in putting Qin Shihuangdi's life in perpective. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:33, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
: I'm working on it- slowly, but I will get back to this article. Good idea about a time line- we'll have to see how it works out. [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 09:12, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Also, you should look into uploading the powerpoint, Then you could use different pictures in the article. And, don't forget to proof read the final article. But, definitely, finish writing this. You started almost a month ago and should be further along than you are- especially since the paper is due in less than 24 hours! [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:53, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

If you put it in the perspective of Qin, you still need to address the faults of the Emperor, such as killing of philosophers, and the book burnings. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 17:48, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

The dates when Qin unified China are informative, but they do need to be tied into the rest of the page. Put it in a sentence or paragraph about his conquerings, this will help it make sense. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 05:09, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

= Credits =
*You have quoted from one of my books. Why don't you mention the sources? [[Special:Contributions/161.28.159.52|161.28.159.52]] 22:38, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
* Cite! Cite! Cite! [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:53, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
After you get more content, you should add your references using MLA format. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:33, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
: Yup. It's in the works. I'm looking for better sources for the pictures (you know, free of copy-write issues.) [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 09:12, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Buddhism

2012-03-05T05:04:42Z

Linksys: /* Content */

=Format=
You may want to break up your paper into categories and separate them by lines. Then, add a 'content' box towards the beginning of your document thus allowing readers to more easily navigate your page. [[Jimmerica]] 02:22, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

=Photos=
It would be nice if you could add photos. They would make your article more interesting and easier to understand. However, make sure you avoid violating any copyright issues. [[User:Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:24, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

= Content =
So far, this is just a description of how Buddhism came to be. Where is your argument? Also, you might want to consider the way you write some of the lists. For example, under the heading "Four Noble Truths" you have a whole lot more than 4 things listed. The Four Noble Truths are usually listed as:
* 1- Life is suffering.
* 2- Suffering is caused by attachments.
* 3- Suffering can be overcome.
* 4- Suffering can be overcome by following the Eight-fold path.
(Or some closely written variation of this.)

If you want to add a little explanation about one of the items, remove the asterisk in front of your comment. That way, it doesn't look like the comment is one of the "Truths".

Don't forget the citations and references!

Also, make sure you proof read the final article. Try reading it out loud, it's a good way to catch the mistakes that need correcting before the Teacher does! [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:47, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

You need a thesis, maybe you could make the statement that Buddhism is a great religion, or maybe that it is a confusing religion, but a great philosophy. What ever you choose, just make sure that the rest of your paper backs it up. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 18:06, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Some of your sentences are very fragmented. In order to create a better flow in your paper,elaborate on these fragments. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 05:04, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Kung Fu

2012-03-04T18:08:05Z

Linksys: /* Description vs. Arguments/original thoughts */

=Copyright issues of film clips=
I will be adding citations soon, also, if anyone sees this, can I put that Avatar clip on here, or would there be copyright issues? [[User:Hannah A|Hannah A]] 02:22, 1 March 2012 (UTC)
=Description vs. Arguments/original thoughts=
This is a very good description of Kungfu, however it would be great to have some more argumentation in it, see the handout. [[Special:Contributions/161.28.159.52|161.28.159.52]] 22:18, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
:Who wrote this? [[Special:Contributions/161.28.159.52|161.28.159.52]] 22:19, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
Perhaps an opening paragraph before the 'contents' box would give you a chance to introduce your topic and establish a thesis? [[Jimmerica]] 02:31, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Have a thesis to create a better argumentive paper.[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 18:08, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

=References=
*You need to list your references. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:29, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
* And don't forget your citations in the body of your paper. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:29, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

= Proof Read! =
Little things, like china instead of China (should always be capitalized), punctuation and the flow of your sentences. Some of them are written rather awkwardly. Try reading your paper out loud. Sometimes that helps you find the awkward spots. (Check out the paragraph just before the section on two systems- the one about philosophy) [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:29, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Buddhism

2012-03-04T18:06:14Z

Linksys: /* Content */

Talk:Terra Cotta Army

2012-03-04T18:01:38Z

Linksys: /* Content */

=References=
You should add your references using MLA format. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:27, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

=Content=
If you are looking for more content, I think it may be interesting to read more about the production process- what terra cotta is, how it is made, and how each soldier was assembled. Also, what kept this artwork preserved for such a long period of time. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:28, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Another comment on Content, where is your argument? So far, this is just a description of what happened. And, be sure to proofread this. You have some punctuation issues and many of your sentences don't make sense, the way they are written. Try reading it out loud, I think you'll see what I mean. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:21, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Add the video you found on youtube. Also, I can see your statement on the top that this is one of the greatest discoveries, but where is the content to support that strong statement? Be more descriptive in the size of the army and where it is kept. It would be good to describe the surrounding area or that there are possibly more armies and the tomb of Qin on that land. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 17:59, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

And say why they haven't uncovered the rest of the burial place.[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 18:00, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Terra Cotta Army

2012-03-04T18:01:17Z

Linksys: /* Content */

=References=
You should add your references using MLA format. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:27, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

=Content=
If you are looking for more content, I think it may be interesting to read more about the production process- what terra cotta is, how it is made, and how each soldier was assembled. Also, what kept this artwork preserved for such a long period of time. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:28, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Another comment on Content, where is your argument? So far, this is just a description of what happened. And, be sure to proofread this. You have some punctuation issues and many of your sentences don't make sense, the way they are written. Try reading it out loud, I think you'll see what I mean. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:21, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Add the video you found on youtube. Also, I can see your statement on the top that this is one of the greatest discoveries, but where is the content to support that strong statement? Be more descriptive in the size of the army and where it is kept. It would be good to describe the surrounding area or that there are possibly more armies and the tomb of Qin on that land. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 17:59, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

:And say why they haven't uncovered the rest of the burial place.[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 18:00, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Terra Cotta Army

2012-03-04T18:00:49Z

Linksys: /* Content */

=References=
You should add your references using MLA format. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:27, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

=Content=
If you are looking for more content, I think it may be interesting to read more about the production process- what terra cotta is, how it is made, and how each soldier was assembled. Also, what kept this artwork preserved for such a long period of time. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:28, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Another comment on Content, where is your argument? So far, this is just a description of what happened. And, be sure to proofread this. You have some punctuation issues and many of your sentences don't make sense, the way they are written. Try reading it out loud, I think you'll see what I mean. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:21, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Add the video you found on youtube. Also, I can see your statement on the top that this is one of the greatest discoveries, but where is the content to support that strong statement? Be more descriptive in the size of the army and where it is kept. It would be good to describe the surrounding area or that there are possibly more armies and the tomb of Qin on that land. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 17:59, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
:And say why they haven't uncovered the rest of the burial place.[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 18:00, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Terra Cotta Army

2012-03-04T17:59:08Z

Linksys: /* Content */

Talk:Qin Shihuangdi

2012-03-04T17:48:45Z

Linksys: /* Content */

= Scope =
I know, it's just a start. More pictures, words and citations will be added.[[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 05:33, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
:This is not even a start, it is just a stub. Can anybody help Licia with it? [[Special:Contributions/161.28.159.52|161.28.159.52]] 22:37, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
::Who is IP 161.28.159.52? Please login with your user name first! [[Special:Contributions/161.28.159.52|161.28.159.52]] 22:38, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

=Content=
Where is all that great information from your presentation? I feel that becoming a ruler at such a young age and accomplishing so much in such short time, a timeline of some sort would be very useful in putting Qin Shihuangdi's life in perpective. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:33, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
: I'm working on it- slowly, but I will get back to this article. Good idea about a time line- we'll have to see how it works out. [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 09:12, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Also, you should look into uploading the powerpoint, Then you could use different pictures in the article. And, don't forget to proof read the final article. But, definitely, finish writing this. You started almost a month ago and should be further along than you are- especially since the paper is due in less than 24 hours! [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:53, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

If you put it in the perspective of Qin, you still need to address the faults of the Emperor, such as killing of philosophers, and the book burnings. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 17:48, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

= Credits =
*You have quoted from one of my books. Why don't you mention the sources? [[Special:Contributions/161.28.159.52|161.28.159.52]] 22:38, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
* Cite! Cite! Cite! [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:53, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
After you get more content, you should add your references using MLA format. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:33, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
: Yup. It's in the works. I'm looking for better sources for the pictures (you know, free of copy-write issues.) [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 09:12, 4 March 2012 (UTC)