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Talk:Ba Jin

2012-12-05T08:23:46Z

Mingemperor:

Looks great, could use some more pictures though. [[User:Pips|Pips]] 04:16, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Love the length of this paper and the depth. I agree with the pictures, but I understand because I couldnt find sufficient pictures to use myself. Overall a good paper.--[[User:Foot|Foot]] 06:57, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

I was wondering if people today still see Ba Jin as a traitor or they have changed their mind. I did enjoyed they way you wrote this paper, thanks. Reddragon [[User:Reddragon|Reddragon]] 07:02, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Not bad, but you could still cite your sources better. And I agree with them, it could use more pictures than just the one portrait of him. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 08:23, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Mo Yan

2012-12-05T06:58:02Z

Mingemperor:

Looks good so far... obviously it's not finished though. [[User:Pips|Pips]] 04:17, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. I like the outline, and look forward to seeing more.

Yes, It looks like some work still needs to be done. But what I see, I like. Seriously though, you should hurry.
There isn't much time left! [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 06:58, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Mo Yan

2012-12-05T06:57:39Z

Mingemperor:

Talk:Zhang Jie (born 1937)

2012-12-05T06:54:48Z

Mingemperor:

Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Zhang Jie (born 1937)

2012-12-05T06:53:28Z

Mingemperor:

Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it doesn't really apply specifically to this author. But if not, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Wang Meng

2012-12-05T06:42:09Z

Mingemperor:

I think that the size of the picture illuminaties the sheer length and depth that the author went into to compose this work of art. Also, maybe suggestions on how to increase the size of the picture would help.--[[User:Foot|Foot]] 06:33, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

A good summary and description of his life. But what about his personality? tell me something inspiring that he said. One of your sources said something that I think captured this man. speaking of his childhood in poverty he jokingly wrote, "If I were a tiger, I would eat rich people" That is something that shows the soul of this guy. Show me a little more of that. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 06:42, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Xiao Hong (1911-1942)

2012-10-09T17:34:39Z

Mingemperor:

It looks good! Do you have any images? [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:32, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

yeah, it doesn't look too bad, but kind of lacking on pictures. Did you look on Wiki Commons or Flickr? [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 17:34, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Ling Shuhua (1900-1990)

2012-10-09T17:30:24Z

Mingemperor: Created page with 'Very well organized, except the first block. I think you put too much in the Childhood section. I noticed she was born in 1900, yet you included stuff all the way into the 1920's…'

Very well organized, except the first block. I think you put too much in the Childhood section. I noticed she was born in 1900, yet you included stuff all the way into the 1920's in that section. I would put the stuff from her teenage years on up into a different section. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 17:30, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Qian Zhongshu (1910

2012-10-09T17:25:42Z

Mingemperor: Created page with 'Okay, you've got some really good stuff here. A lot of commentary, a few grammar problems to work out, though, but otherwise a great article. You also did a really good job on gi…'

Okay, you've got some really good stuff here. A lot of commentary, a few grammar problems to work out, though, but otherwise a great article. You also did a really good job on giving credit to your sources. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 17:25, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Guo Moruo (1892 -1978)

2012-10-09T17:23:05Z

Mingemperor:

Your first section is looking good. [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:33, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

At first it looks great, then I noticed you copied the entire Motivations section from the Liu Xun article! And you thought we wouldn't notice? Sorry to be so blunt, but you've got some revising to do. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 17:23, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Talk:Lu Xun (1881-1936)

2012-10-09T17:18:26Z

Mingemperor:

This article is a stub! [[User:Root|Root]] 21:13, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

It looks really good! Great format and images! [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:30, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

Not bad, formatting looks ok, but did it meet all the requirements? Mr. Woesler said he wanted more commentary and not just "the facts." [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 17:18, 9 October 2012 (UTC)