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Humm...This was a very interesting class presentation. Could you write something about it? And maybe put in a picture or two? [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 22:25, 11 October 2012 (UTC)

Dear Telmar, this paper looks good but could be elaborated more. You have mostly covered the main actions between the kingdoms, but you could also have told us a little bit more about the differences of the kingdoms and their kings and maybe connect it a little bit to the other topics in class, like about the philosophers who lived there or how the kingdoms won their wars. Also it would be good to have more than one picture, although the one you chose is absolutely essential to understand the geography. It would also be good not to use Wikipedia as a source, but e.g. the Cambridge Illustrated History of China, which is available in the library. But overall a good start. [[User:Root|Root]] 10:58, 23 October 2012 (UTC)