20211110 homework - Revision history

EIMONKYAW: /* Asep Budiman 202111080020 */

2021-12-31T11:58:11Z

Asep Budiman 202111080020

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

2021-12-31T11:54:13Z

Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021

EIMONKYAW: /* Asep Budiman 202111080020 */

2021-12-31T11:40:16Z

Asep Budiman 202111080020

Li Xinxing: /* 李新星 Lǐ Xīnxīng 亚非语言文学女 202120081503 */

2021-12-31T11:18:10Z

李新星 Lǐ Xīnxīng 亚非语言文学女 202120081503

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

2021-12-31T11:13:41Z

Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

2021-12-31T10:59:09Z

Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

2021-12-31T10:21:02Z

Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

2021-12-31T09:46:35Z

Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021

Yang Liuqing: /* 杨堃 Yáng Kūn 法语语言文学女 202120081542 */

2021-12-31T07:45:57Z

杨堃 Yáng Kūn 法语语言文学女 202120081542

Yang Liuqing: /* 杨柳青 Yáng Liǔqīng 英语语言文学（英美文学）女 202120081543 */

2021-12-31T07:29:31Z

杨柳青 Yáng Liǔqīng 英语语言文学（英美文学）女 202120081543

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 Tan-tschun Smiled and said "you are such a familiar person, but have you read the "Ji Zi" book?--[[User:Asep Budiman|Asep Budiman]] ([[User talk:Asep Budiman|talk]]) 07:41, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
-Main character Tan Chun smiled and said: "You are such a familiar person, but haven't you read the book "Female entertainer Ji"? --[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 10:57, 7 November 2021 (UTC)Ei Mon Kyaw -Ei Mon Kyaw-[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 10:57, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
+Main character Tan Chun smiled and said: "You are such a familiar person, but haven't you read the book "Female entertainer's son"? --[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 10:57, 7 November 2021 (UTC)Ei Mon Kyaw -Ei Mon Kyaw-[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 10:57, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 ==Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021==

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 当日《姬子》有云：‘登利禄之场，处运筹之界者，穷尧舜之词，背孔孟之道。’”
-In the book "Female entertainer Ji" of that day, there was a saying: 'Those who ascend to the field of profit and loss, and those who are in the realm of transport and planning are poor in the words of  King Yao and King Shun and back in the ways of Philosopher Confucius and Philosopher Mencius.'"
+In the book "Female entertainer's son" of that day, there was a saying: 'Those who ascend to the field of profit and loss, and those who are in the realm of transport and planning are poor in the words of  King Yao and King Shun and back in the ways of Philosopher Confucius and Philosopher Mencius.'"
 --[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 13:52, 6 November 2021 (UTC)EI MON KYAW
 -EI MON KYAW-[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 13:52, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

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 Tan-tschun Smiled and said "you are such a familiar person, but have you read the "Ji Zi" book?--[[User:Asep Budiman|Asep Budiman]] ([[User talk:Asep Budiman|talk]]) 07:41, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
-Tan-tschun smiled and said: "You are such a familiar person, but haven't you read the book "Ji Zi"? --[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 10:57, 7 November 2021 (UTC)Ei Mon Kyaw -Ei Mon Kyaw-[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 10:57, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
+Main character Tan Chun smiled and said: "You are such a familiar person, but haven't you read the book "Female entertainer Ji"? --[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 10:57, 7 November 2021 (UTC)Ei Mon Kyaw -Ei Mon Kyaw-[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 10:57, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
 ==Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021==

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 而《红楼梦》版本的复杂性，又迫使我们不得不有所选择。《红楼梦》的创作和流传过程可以分为四个阶段：其一是曹雪芹的创作阶段。虽然曹雪芹自称“披阅十载，增删五次”，其实由于他溘然而逝，只留下了一部《红楼梦》的未完稿和未定稿。
-The complexity of the version of a Dream of Red Mansions forces us to make choices. The creation and spread of a Dream of Red Mansions can be divided into four stages: one is  Cao Xueqin Autor's creation stage. Although  Cao Xueqin Autor, claimed that "reading for ten years, adding and deleting five times", in fact, because of his death, leaving only a dream of red Mansions unfinished and unfinished.--[[User:Li Xinxing|Li Xinxing]] ([[User talk:Li Xinxing|talk]]) 08:59, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
+The complexity of the version of A Dream of Red Mansions forces us to make choices. The creation and spread of A Dream of Red Mansions can be divided into four stages: one is  Cao Xueqin Autor's creation stage. Although  Cao Xueqin Autor, claimed that "reading for ten years, adding and deleting five times", in fact, because of his death, leaving only A Dream of Red Mansions --[[User:Li Xinxing|Li Xinxing]] ([[User talk:Li Xinxing|talk]]) 11:18, 31 December 2021 (UTC)unfinished and unfinished.--[[User:Li Xinxing|Li Xinxing]] ([[User talk:Li Xinxing|talk]]) 08:59, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
 --[[User:Li Xinxing|Li Xinxing]] ([[User talk:Li Xinxing|talk]]) 13:16, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
 The complexity of the version of a ''dream of Red Mansions'' forces us to choose. The creation and spread of the ''dream of Red Mansions'' can be divided into four stages: one is the creation stage of  Cao Xueqin Autor. Although  Cao Xueqin Autor claimed to "read for ten years, add and delete five times", in fact, due to his death, only one unfinished and undecided version of a dream of Red Mansions was left.--[[User:Li Yi|Li Yi]] ([[User talk:Li Yi|talk]]) 14:16, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

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 当日《姬子》有云：‘登利禄之场，处运筹之界者，穷尧舜之词，背孔孟之道。’”
-On that day, "Female entertainer Ji" said a saying: 'Those who ascend to the field of profit and loss, and those who are in the realm of transport and planning are poor in the words of  King Yao and King Shun and back in the ways of Philosopher Confucius and Philosopher Mencius.'"
+In the book "Female entertainer Ji" of that day, there was a saying: 'Those who ascend to the field of profit and loss, and those who are in the realm of transport and planning are poor in the words of  King Yao and King Shun and back in the ways of Philosopher Confucius and Philosopher Mencius.'"
 --[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 13:52, 6 November 2021 (UTC)EI MON KYAW
 -EI MON KYAW-[[User:EIMONKYAW|EIMONKYAW]] ([[User talk:EIMONKYAW|talk]]) 13:52, 6 November 2021 (UTC)

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 However, the Zhi Yanzhai's critiques unexpectedly praised: "Snatch a little leisure from a busy writing , which is really big eyes and a big deal." If this is not an accidental mistake, it can only be said to be ungrateful. If "Cheng Yi version" deletes it, it can be regarded as a comment of "big eyes and a big deal". Example 5: in the sixty-third chapter of the original work, more than 1,000 words were used to capitalize the name of Precious Jade Merchant, Fragrant-cloud History and others, which is just for fun, and to describe how to dress Fragrant Official and Sunflower as "Xiao Tu Fan er" and how to change "the surname and name of Quan Rong".--[[User:Yang Kun|Yang Kun]] ([[User talk:Yang Kun|talk]]) 14:21, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
-However, critiques of Zhi Yanzhai(one of the earliest critics of "A Dream in Red Mansions" )  unexpectedly praised: "Snatch a little leisure from a busy writing , which is really weighty." If it is not an accidental mistake, it can only be said to be ungrateful. "Cheng Yi version" deletes it, thus it can be regarded as the comment of "weighty writings". Example 5: in the sixty-third chapter of the original work, more than 1,000 words were used to describe that how Precious Jade Merchant, Fragrant-cloud History and others dress Fang Guan and Kui Guan as "Xiao Tu Fan er" and how they change "the name of Quan Rong" just for fun.--[[User:Yang Liuqing|Yang Liuqing]] ([[User talk:Yang Liuqing|talk]]) 06:43, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
+However, critiques of Zhi Yanzhai(one of the earliest critics of "A Dream in Red Mansions" )  unexpectedly praised: "Snatch a little leisure from a busy writing , which is really weighty." If it was not an accidental mistake, it could only be said to be ungrateful. "Cheng Yi version" deleted it, thus it could be regarded as the comment of "weighty writings". Example 5: in the sixty-third chapter of the original work, more than 1,000 words were used to describe that how Precious Jade Merchant, Fragrant-cloud History and others dress  Fragrant Official and Sunflower as "Xiao Tu Fan er" and how they changed "the name of Quan Rong" just for fun.--[[User:Yang Liuqing|Yang Liuqing]] ([[User talk:Yang Liuqing|talk]]) 06:43, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
 ==杨柳青 Yáng Liǔqīng 英语语言文学（英美文学） 女 202120081543==

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 而且竟然让贾宝玉说出这样的话来：如今四海宾服，八方宁静，千载百载，不用武备。咱们虽一戏一笑，也该称颂，方不负坐享升平了。这种描写既十分无聊，又与贾宝玉的性格背道而驰，尤其侮辱了包括满族在内的少数民族，真可谓拙劣的文字，因此“程乙本”完全予以删除是绝对必要的。
-What's more, in Zhi Yangzhai's version, Precious Jade Merchant said that"Nowadays, people within Four Seas were all submitted and social stability was achieved in all directions. Weapons were not needed in nearly thousands of years. Therefore, our laughs and teases also deserved extolling thus we lived up to the prosperity." This kind of descriptions were very boring and ran counter to the characteristics of Jia Baoyu, and they particularly insulted national minorities including Manchu, which were really bad writings. Thus, it's quite necessary for "Cheng Yi's version" to delete these words.--[[User:Yang Liuqing|Yang Liuqing]] ([[User talk:Yang Liuqing|talk]]) 07:05, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
+What's more, in Zhi Yangzhai's version, Precious Jade Merchant said that"Nowadays, people within Four Seas were all submitted and social stability was achieved in all directions. Weapons were not needed in nearly thousands of years. Therefore, our laughs and teases also deserved extolling thus we lived up to the prosperity." This kind of descriptions were very boring and ran counter to the characteristics of Precious Jade Merchant, and they particularly insulted national minorities including Manchu, which were really bad writings. Thus, it's quite necessary for "Cheng Yi's version" to delete these words.--[[User:Yang Liuqing|Yang Liuqing]] ([[User talk:Yang Liuqing|talk]]) 07:05, 8 November 2021 (UTC)
 What's more, in Zhi Yangzhai's version, Baoyu even said things like this:"Nowadays, people from all over the world bow to our emperor, and social stability's greatly achieved. No military preparation's needed in the days ahead. Therefore, our laughs and teases also deserved extolling thus we lived up to the prosperity." Such descriptions are boring and against Baoyu's characteristic, and also insulted national minorities including Manchu, which are truly awful writings. Thus, it's quite necessary for Cheng&Gao's second version to delete these words.--[[User:Ye Weijie|Ye Weijie]] ([[User talk:Ye Weijie|talk]]) 06:07, 12 November 2021 (UTC)

20211110 homework - Revision history

EIMONKYAW: /* Asep Budiman 202111080020 */

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

EIMONKYAW: /* Asep Budiman 202111080020 */

Li Xinxing: /* 李新星 Lǐ Xīnxīng 亚非语言文学 女 202120081503 */

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

EIMONKYAW: /* Ei Mon Kyaw 202111080021 */

Yang Liuqing: /* 杨堃 Yáng Kūn 法语语言文学 女 202120081542 */

Yang Liuqing: /* 杨柳青 Yáng Liǔqīng 英语语言文学（英美文学） 女 202120081543 */

Li Xinxing: /* 李新星 Lǐ Xīnxīng 亚非语言文学女 202120081503 */

Yang Liuqing: /* 杨堃 Yáng Kūn 法语语言文学女 202120081542 */

Yang Liuqing: /* 杨柳青 Yáng Liǔqīng 英语语言文学（英美文学）女 202120081543 */