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	Chapter [[Theor_App_Lit_EN_1]]		Chapter [[Theor_App_Lit_EN_1]]
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		+	Criticism and Appreciation of Poetry Translation ——Taking ''A Psalm of Life'' as An Example=
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		+	诗歌翻译批评与鉴赏——以《人生礼赞》为例
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		+	朱素珍 Zhu Suzhen, 202120081561,Hunan Normal University, China
		+	===摘要===
		+	翻译诗歌并不难，一大批译者和作家为我们提供了无数优秀的诗歌译本。与诗歌翻译不同，诗歌翻译的批评和鉴赏要复杂得多。尽管诗歌翻译的批评和鉴赏很复杂，一些译者和批评家都投入其中，并取得了一些突破。郭沫若、闻一多、李明等译者提出了自己独特的、发人深省的诗歌翻译批评与鉴赏原则。这些原则在诗歌翻译的鉴赏中起着重要的作用。由于我们的生活和社会发生了巨大的变化，人们生活在一个高速发展的跨文化环境中。诗歌翻译的批评和欣赏是否有利于读者在跨文化背景下理解诗歌？对诗歌的批评和欣赏如何影响读者对于诗歌的理解？这些问题是本文的重点。本文作者主要通过对同一首诗的不同译本的比较分析来探讨诗歌翻译的批评与鉴赏——以亨利·沃兹沃思·朗费罗所著《生命礼赞》为例，通过对三个版本比较分析，可以一目了然地看到文化因素是否被考虑进去了。此外，读者在诗歌翻译批评与鉴赏的过程中，也能学会如何正确地翻译诗歌，这样的分析方法也有利于读者在跨文化背景下欣赏诗歌翻译，具有启发性。
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		+	===关键词===
		+	诗歌翻译; 批评与鉴赏；比较分析; 跨文化背景
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		+	===Abstract===
		+	It is not difficult to translate poetry, and large quantities of translators and writers have provided us uncountable excellent translations of poetry. Unlike poetry translation, the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation is far more complicated. Despite of the complexity of the cticism and appreciation of poetry translation, some of the translators and ctitics have devoted themselves to it, and some breakthroughs have been made. Translators like Guo Moruo, Wen Yiduo, Li Ming, etc put forward their unique and thought-provoking principles of criticism and appreciation of poetry translation. These principles play an important role in the appreciation of poetry translation.
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		+	Because of the great changes with our life and society, people live in a transcultural environment which develops in high speed.Is the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation conducive to the readers' understanding of the poetry in front of the transcultural background? How can criticism and appreciation of poetry influenced reader's understanding of poetry? These questions are the focus of this paper. The author of this paper would mainly discuss the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation based on the comparative analysis of different versions of translation of the same poetry——A Psalm of Life, written by Henry Wordsworth Long Fellow. After the comparative analysis of three versions, whether the cultural factor has been considered or not can be uncovered clearly. Furthermore, in the process of criticism and appreciation, readers can also learn how to translate the poetry properly. Besides, such a method of analysis is also conducive to readers' appreciation of poetry translation in front of the transcultural background, which is inspiring and instructive.
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		+	===Key words===
		+	poetry translation; criticism and appreciation; comparative analysis; transcultural background
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	===1. Introduction===		===1. Introduction===

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−	~~=1 Criticism and Appreciation of Poetry Translation ——Taking ''A Psalm of Life'' as An Example=~~
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−	~~诗歌翻译批评与鉴赏——以《人生礼赞》为例~~
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−	~~朱素珍 Zhu Suzhen, 202120081561,Hunan Normal University, China~~
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−	~~===Abstract===~~
−	It is not difficult to translate poetry, and large quantities of translators and writers have provided us uncountable excellent translations of poetry. Unlike poetry translation, the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation is far more complicated. Despite of the complexity of the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation, some of the translators and ctitics have devoted themselves to it, and some breakthroughs have been made. Translators like Guo Moruo, Wen Yiduo, Li Ming, etc put forward their unique and thought-provoking principles of criticism and appreciation of poetry translation. These principles play an important role in the appreciation of poetry translation. Because of the great changes with our life and society, people live in a transcultural environment which develops in high speed.Is the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation conducive to the readers' understanding of the poetry in front of the transcultural background? How can critisiam and appreciation of poetry influenced reader's understanding of poetry? These questions are the focus of this paper. The author of this paper would mainly discuss the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation based on the comparative analysis of different versions of translation of the same poetry——''A Psalm of Life'', written by Henry Wordsworth Long Fellow. After the comparative analysis of three versions, whether the cultural factor has been considered or not can be uncovered clearly. Furthermore, in the process of criticism and appreciation, readers can also learn how to translate the poetry properly. Besides, such a method of analysis is also conducive to readers' appreciation of poetry translation in front of the transcultural background, which is inspiring and instructive.
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−	~~===摘要===~~
−	翻译诗歌并不难，一大批译者和作家为我们提供了无数优秀的诗歌译本。与诗歌翻译不同，诗歌翻译的批评和鉴赏要复杂得多。尽管诗歌翻译的批评和鉴赏很复杂，一些译者和批评家都投入其中，并取得了一些突破。郭沫若、闻一多、李明等译者提出了自己独特的、发人深省的诗歌翻译批评与鉴赏原则。这些原则在诗歌翻译的鉴赏中起着重要的作用。由于我们的生活和社会发生了巨大的变化，人们生活在一个高速发展的跨文化环境中。诗歌翻译的批评和欣赏是否有利于读者在跨文化背景下理解诗歌？对诗歌的批评和欣赏如何影响读者对于诗歌的理解？这些问题是本文的重点。本文作者主要通过对同一首诗的不同译本的比较分析来探讨诗歌翻译的批评与鉴赏——以亨利·沃兹沃思·朗费罗所著《生命礼赞》为例，通过对三个版本比较分析，可以一目了然地看到文化因素是否被考虑进去了。此外，读者在诗歌翻译批评与鉴赏的过程中，也能学会如何正确地翻译诗歌，这样的分析方法也有利于读者在跨文化背景下欣赏诗歌翻译，具有启发性。
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−	~~===Key words===~~
−	~~poetry translation; appreciation and criticism; comparative analysis; transcultural background~~
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−	~~===关键词===~~
−	~~诗歌翻译; 批评与鉴赏；比较分析; 跨文化背景~~

	===1. Introduction===		===1. Introduction===

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 诗歌翻译批评与鉴赏——以《人生礼赞》为例

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 Later, there is no doubt that we need principles to prescribe our behavior of poetry translation appreciation and criticism. Some influential translators have put forward lots of meaningful poetry translation principles. Actually, the principles of poetry translation are one of the most important criteria of poetry translation appreciation and criticism. Under the guidance of such principles the translators have the possibility to smooth the process of translation without losing the original amaze of the poetry. At the same time, these important principles can also be used to check if the translators have obeyed them or not. Thus, one of the ways in which the critics do the literary criticism occurs. By the way, translator’s subjectivity can not be ignored at the same time. Because translation can be seen as a recreation process, thus the translators can make their subjectivity work in this process. Through the integrate consideration of the original poetry creation condition and the readers’ cultural background, translators are able to translate the poetry wonderfully thus making the purpose of transmitting culture and literature realized. (Zhou Yi & Luo Ping, 2005: 167)
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+===3.Comparative analysis of different translations of poetry===
 In this part, it is necessary to make some comparative analysis between different versions of translation so as to do the poetry translation appreciation and criticism. As we all known, translation is also a process in which the translators try to recreate and translate. Translators are the creators at the same time. Because of their different culture background, educational background, their translation experience and some other factors, different translators can create different versions of poetry. Therefore, in this process we can experience how the translators construct and create the translation based on their embodied experience and professional quality.

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 Later, there is no doubt that we need principles to prescribe our behavior of poetry translation criticism and appreciation . Some influential translators have put forward lots of meaningful poetry translation principles. Actually, the principles of poetry translation are one of the most important criteria of criticism and appreciation of poetry translation. Under the guidance of such principles the translators have the possibility to smooth the process of translation without losing the original amaze of the poetry. At the same time, these important principles can also be used to check if the translators have obeyed them or not. Thus, one of the ways in which the critics do the literary criticism occurs. By the way, translators' subjectivity can not be ignored at the same time. Because translation can be seen as a recreation process, thus the translators can make their subjectivity work in this process. Through the integrate consideration of the original poetry creation condition and the readers’ cultural background, translators are able to translate the poetry wonderfully thus making the purpose of transmitting culture and literature realized.(Xu Jun, 2009: 156)
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+====2.4 Principles of criticism and appreciation of poetry translation====
 Later, there is no doubt that we need principles to prescribe our behavior of poetry translation appreciation and criticism. Some influential translators have put forward lots of meaningful poetry translation principles. Actually, the principles of poetry translation are one of the most important criteria of poetry translation appreciation and criticism. Under the guidance of such principles the translators have the possibility to smooth the process of translation without losing the original amaze of the poetry. At the same time, these important principles can also be used to check if the translators have obeyed them or not. Thus, one of the ways in which the critics do the literary criticism occurs. By the way, translator’s subjectivity can not be ignored at the same time. Because translation can be seen as a recreation process, thus the translators can make their subjectivity work in this process. Through the integrate consideration of the original poetry creation condition and the readers’ cultural background, translators are able to translate the poetry wonderfully thus making the purpose of transmitting culture and literature realized. (Zhou Yi & Luo Ping, 2005: 167)

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 Moreover, some other translators put forward that poetry translation has two principles. Principle one is that poetry translation should pay attention to avoid the commonization of language. That is to say if translators translate poetry with plain and common even inflexible words and expressions and ignore the unique characteristics of poetic language and the individual poet’s language characteristics, which would not only fail to keep the original poetry’s expressional style but also fail to convey the spiritual soul of the original poetry (Liao Siping, Zhang Yu, 2007: 53). The other principle prescribes that the poetry translation should avoid the nationalization of poetry form. For example, it would make the poetry translation neither fish nor fowl even vulgarization if we translate the foreign poetry into our Chinese neat and uniform poetry forms like a poem with five characters in a line or with seven characters in a line or even the folk song style compulsively (Liao Siping, Zhang Yu, 2007: 53-54)
-====2.3 What is poetry translation appreciation and criticism====
+====2.3 What is criticism and appreciation of poetry translation====
 Later, there is no doubt that we need principles to prescribe our behavior of poetry translation criticism and appreciation . Some influential translators have put forward lots of meaningful poetry translation principles. Actually, the principles of poetry translation are one of the most important criteria of criticism and appreciation of poetry translation. Under the guidance of such principles the translators have the possibility to smooth the process of translation without losing the original amaze of the poetry. At the same time, these important principles can also be used to check if the translators have obeyed them or not. Thus, one of the ways in which the critics do the literary criticism occurs. By the way, translators' subjectivity can not be ignored at the same time. Because translation can be seen as a recreation process, thus the translators can make their subjectivity work in this process. Through the integrate consideration of the original poetry creation condition and the readers’ cultural background, translators are able to translate the poetry wonderfully thus making the purpose of transmitting culture and literature realized.(Xu Jun, 2009: 156)

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 ===Abstract===
-It is not difficult to translate poetry, and large quantities of translators and writers have provided us uncountable excellent translations of poetry. Unlike poetry translation, the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation is far more complicated. Despite of  the complexity of the cticism and appreciation of poetry translation, some of the translators and ctitics have devoted themselves to it, and some breakthroughs have been made. Translators like Guo Moruo, Wen Yiduo, Li Ming, etc put forward their unique and thought-provoking principles of criticism and appreciation of poetry translation. These principles play an important role in the appreciation of poetry translation. Because of the great changes with our life and society, people live in a transcultural environment which develops in high speed.Is the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation conducive to the readers' understanding of the poetry in front of the transcultural background? How can critisiam and appreciation of poetry influenced reader's understanding of poetry? These questions are the focus of this paper. The author of this paper would mainly discuss the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation based on the comparative analysis of different versions of translation of the same poetry——''A Psalm of Life'',  written by Henry Wordsworth Long Fellow. After the comparative analysis of three versions, whether the cultural factor has been considered or not can be uncovered clearly. Furthermore, in the process of cticism and appreciation, readers can also learn how to translate the poetry properly. Besides, such a method of analysis is also conducive to readers' appreciation of poetry translation in front of the transcultural background, which is inspiring and instructive.
+It is not difficult to translate poetry, and large quantities of translators and writers have provided us uncountable excellent translations of poetry. Unlike poetry translation, the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation is far more complicated. Despite of  the complexity of the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation, some of the translators and ctitics have devoted themselves to it, and some breakthroughs have been made. Translators like Guo Moruo, Wen Yiduo, Li Ming, etc put forward their unique and thought-provoking principles of criticism and appreciation of poetry translation. These principles play an important role in the appreciation of poetry translation. Because of the great changes with our life and society, people live in a transcultural environment which develops in high speed.Is the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation conducive to the readers' understanding of the poetry in front of the transcultural background? How can critisiam and appreciation of poetry influenced reader's understanding of poetry? These questions are the focus of this paper. The author of this paper would mainly discuss the criticism and appreciation of poetry translation based on the comparative analysis of different versions of translation of the same poetry——''A Psalm of Life'',  written by Henry Wordsworth Long Fellow. After the comparative analysis of three versions, whether the cultural factor has been considered or not can be uncovered clearly. Furthermore, in the process of criticism and appreciation, readers can also learn how to translate the poetry properly. Besides, such a method of analysis is also conducive to readers' appreciation of poetry translation in front of the transcultural background, which is inspiring and instructive.
 ===摘要===

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 莫向我吟唱，哀戚之词