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Chen Kun: /* Chen Cheng 陈诚 */

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Chen Cheng 陈诚

Chen Kun: /* Chen Cheng 陈诚 */

2022-06-28T06:01:14Z

Chen Cheng 陈诚

Xu Zhiyuan: /* Wei Jingting 魏静婷 */

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Wei Jingting 魏静婷

Deng Lulu: /* Chen Xinyi 陈心怡 */

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Chen Xinyi 陈心怡

Deng Lulu: /* Deng Lulu 邓鲁露 */

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Deng Lulu 邓鲁露

Chen Cheng: /* Zou Xiangrui 邹享睿 */

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Zou Xiangrui 邹享睿

Chen Cheng: /* Chen Cheng 陈诚 */

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Chen Cheng 陈诚

Yan Ni: /* Xu Zhiyuan 徐致远 */

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Xu Zhiyuan 徐致远

Yan Ni: /* Xu Zhiyuan 徐致远 */

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Xu Zhiyuan 徐致远

Li Siwen: /* Li LinYu 李琳玉 */

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Li LinYu 李琳玉

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 His words haven't been finished.His face turned some pieces of golden paper because of his anger, shouting, "Take Precious Jade here! At the same time,he went to the study room, ordering, "Today, if someone tries to persuade me again, I will offer these things to him and Precious Jade! I have to be the sinner, shave these troubling sideburns, look for a clean place to take my own life, avoid insulting my ancestors and  boring the rebellious son!" Seeing Jia Zheng's condition, the servants, knowing that it is because of Precious Jade again, each bit his fingers and tongue, and hastily withdrew. Jia Zheng panted and sat upright on the chair, full of tears, and saying again and again:
-With his words not finished,his face was fulfilled by anger,turned like golden paper , shouting, "Take Precious Jade here!"At the same time,he went to the study room, ordering, "Today, if someone tries to persuade me, I will offer these things as punishment to him and Precious Jade! I have to be the sinner, shave these troubling sideburns, look for a peaceful place to take my own life, avoid insulting my ancestors and  boring the rebellious son!" Seeing Politic Merchant's condition, the servants, knowing that it is because of Precious Jade again, they bit their fingers and tongues, and hastily withdrew. Politic Merchant panted and sat upright on the chair, full of tears, and saying again and again.
+With his words not finished,his face was fulfilled by anger,turned like golden paper , shouting, "Take Precious Jade here!"At the same time,he went to the study room, ordering, "Today, if someone tries to persuade me, I will offer these things as punishment to him and Precious Jade! I have to be the sinner, shave these troubling sideburns, look for a peaceful place to take my own life, avoid insulting my ancestors and  boring the rebellious son!" Seeing Politic Merchant's condition, the servants, knowing that it is because of Precious Jade again, they bit their fingers and tongues, and hastily withdrew. Politic Merchant panted and sat upright on the chair, full of tears, and saying again and again.--[[User:Chen Kun|Chen Kun]] ([[User talk:Chen Kun|talk]])
 ==Chen Kun 陈锟==

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	His words haven't been finished.His face turned some pieces of golden paper because of his anger, shouting, "Take Precious Jade here! At the same time,he went to the study room, ordering, "Today, if someone tries to persuade me again, I will offer these things to him and Precious Jade! I have to be the sinner, shave these troubling sideburns, look for a clean place to take my own life, avoid insulting my ancestors and boring the rebellious son!" Seeing Jia Zheng's condition, the servants, knowing that it is because of Precious Jade again, each bit his fingers and tongue, and hastily withdrew. Jia Zheng panted and sat upright on the chair, full of tears, and saying again and again:		His words haven't been finished.His face turned some pieces of golden paper because of his anger, shouting, "Take Precious Jade here! At the same time,he went to the study room, ordering, "Today, if someone tries to persuade me again, I will offer these things to him and Precious Jade! I have to be the sinner, shave these troubling sideburns, look for a clean place to take my own life, avoid insulting my ancestors and boring the rebellious son!" Seeing Jia Zheng's condition, the servants, knowing that it is because of Precious Jade again, each bit his fingers and tongue, and hastily withdrew. Jia Zheng panted and sat upright on the chair, full of tears, and saying again and again:
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		+	With his words not finished,his face was fulfilled by anger,turned like golden paper , shouting, "Take Precious Jade here!"At the same time,he went to the study room, ordering, "Today, if someone tries to persuade me, I will offer these things as punishment to him and Precious Jade! I have to be the sinner, shave these troubling sideburns, look for a peaceful place to take my own life, avoid insulting my ancestors and boring the rebellious son!" Seeing Politic Merchant's condition, the servants, knowing that it is because of Precious Jade again, they bit their fingers and tongues, and hastily withdrew. Politic Merchant panted and sat upright on the chair, full of tears, and saying again and again.

	==Chen Kun 陈锟==		==Chen Kun 陈锟==

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	Not to say Grandma Merchant is that we look, heart also ...... "just said half a sentence, and busy swallowed, self-repentant to say the words too quickly, do not feel red face, lowered his head. The first time I heard the words so kind and thick, there is a deep meaning; suddenly see him again swallowed, do not go on, red face, lowered his head, just get the sash, that a kind of shyness and timidity, it is difficult to describe, the more I feel touched in the heart, the pain has long been left in the ninth cloud to go. I thought: "I just received a few beatings, they all have such a compassionate attitude, which is relatable and respectable.--[[User:Wei Jingting\|Wei Jingting]] ([[User talk:Wei Jingting\|talk]]) 10:42, 21 May 2022 (UTC)		Not to say Grandma Merchant is that we look, heart also ...... "just said half a sentence, and busy swallowed, self-repentant to say the words too quickly, do not feel red face, lowered his head. The first time I heard the words so kind and thick, there is a deep meaning; suddenly see him again swallowed, do not go on, red face, lowered his head, just get the sash, that a kind of shyness and timidity, it is difficult to describe, the more I feel touched in the heart, the pain has long been left in the ninth cloud to go. I thought: "I just received a few beatings, they all have such a compassionate attitude, which is relatable and respectable.--[[User:Wei Jingting\|Wei Jingting]] ([[User talk:Wei Jingting\|talk]]) 10:42, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
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		+	Not to say Grandma Merchant is said that we look, heart also ...... " he just said half a sentence, and busy swallowed, self-repentant to say the words too quickly, do not feel red face, lowered his head. The first time I heard the words so kind and thick, there is a deep meaning; suddenly see him again swallowed, do not go on, red face, lowered his head, just get the sash, that a kind of shyness and timidity, it is difficult to describe, the more he feel touched in the heart, the pain has long been left in the ninth cloud to go. he thought: "I just received a few beatings, they all have such a compassionate attitude, which is relatable and respectable.--[[User:Xu Zhiyuan\|Xu Zhiyuan]] ([[User talk:Xu Zhiyuan\|talk]]) 15:53, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

	==Xu Zhiyuan 徐致远==		==Xu Zhiyuan 徐致远==

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	He didn’t blame Precious Jade Merchant who outside acquainted with an actor and exchanged private thing with him, besides inside neglected his studies and made the maids of his mother prostitute. He scolded, “Jamming his mouth and you bat him heavily!” Servants had no choice but to put Precious Jade upon the desk, rise the plank and beat several times. Precious Jade knew that he couldn’t give in and cry in anguish. Policy Merchant was discontent with servant’s gentleness, kicking the one off, seized the plank and beat Precious Jade lethally. Precious Jade didn’t suffer such roughness. At first, he felt so painful that he cried out. Then generally his breath shortened even seemingly lost.—[[User:Chen Xinyi1\|Chen Xinyi1]] ([[User talk:Chen Xinyi1\|talk]]) 16:30, 20 May 2022 (UTC)		He didn’t blame Precious Jade Merchant who outside acquainted with an actor and exchanged private thing with him, besides inside neglected his studies and made the maids of his mother prostitute. He scolded, “Jamming his mouth and you bat him heavily!” Servants had no choice but to put Precious Jade upon the desk, rise the plank and beat several times. Precious Jade knew that he couldn’t give in and cry in anguish. Policy Merchant was discontent with servant’s gentleness, kicking the one off, seized the plank and beat Precious Jade lethally. Precious Jade didn’t suffer such roughness. At first, he felt so painful that he cried out. Then generally his breath shortened even seemingly lost.—[[User:Chen Xinyi1\|Chen Xinyi1]] ([[User talk:Chen Xinyi1\|talk]]) 16:30, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
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		+	He didn’t blame Precious Jade Merchant who outside acquainted with an actor and exchanged private thing with him, besides inside neglected his studies and made the maids of his mother prostitute. He scolded, “Jamming his mouth and you bat him heavily!” Servants had no choice but to put Precious Jade upon the desk, rise the plank and beat several times. Precious Jade knew that he couldn’t give in and cry in anguish. Policy Merchant was discontent with servant’s gentleness, kicking the one off, seized the plank and beat Precious Jade lethally. Precious Jade didn’t suffer such roughness. At first, he felt so painful that he cried out. Then generally his breath shortened even seemingly lost。--[[User:Deng Lulu\|Deng Lulu]] ([[User talk:Deng Lulu\|talk]]) 15:22, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

	==Deng Lulu 邓鲁露==		==Deng Lulu 邓鲁露==

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 ==Deng Lulu 邓鲁露==
 众门客见打的不祥了，赶着上来，恳求夺劝。贾政那里肯听？说道：“你们问问他干的勾当，可饶不可饶！素日皆是你们这些人把他酿坏了，到这步田地，还来劝解。明日酿到他弑父弑君，你们才不劝不成？”众人听这话不好听，知道气急了，忙乱着觅人进去给信。王夫人不敢先回贾母，只得忙穿衣出来，也不顾有人没人，忙忙扶了一个丫头，赶往书房中来。慌得众门客小厮等避之不及。
 ==Deng Ruixin 邓蕊欣==
 贾政方要再打，一见王夫人进来，更加火上浇油，那板子越下去的又狠又快。按宝玉的两个小厮，忙松手走开，宝玉早已动弹不得了。贾政还欲打时，早被王夫人抱住板子。贾敢道：“罢了，罢了！今日必定要气死我才罢！”王夫人哭道：“宝玉虽然该打，老爷也要保重。且炎暑天气，老太太身上又不大好，打死宝玉事小，倘或老太太一时不自在了，岂不事大？”贾政冷笑道：“倒休提这话！

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	"This is indeed strange!" exclaimed Precious Jade as he laid hold of her and tried to detain her. "How is it that you've deliberately started living in fear and trembling of her!" Mascara Jade Forest grew impatient and stamped her feet. "Look at my eyes!" she added in an undertone. "Must those people amuse themselves again by poking fun at me?" After this response, Precious Jade speedily let her go. Mascara Jade Forest with hurried step withdrew behind the bed; and no sooner had she issued into the back-court, than Sister Phoenix made her appearance in the room by the front entrance." Are you better?" she asked Precious Jade. "If you fancy anything to eat, mind you send some one over to my place to fetch it for you." Thereupon Aunt Marshgrass also came to pay him a visit. Shortly after, a messenger likewise arrived from Grandma Marchant (to inquire after him).When the time came to prepare the lights, Precious Jade had a couple of mouthfuls of soup to eat, but he felt so drowsy and heavy that he fell asleep.-[[User:Zou Xiangrui\|Zou Xiangrui]] ([[User talk:Zou Xiangrui\|talk]]) 09:38, 26 May 2022 (UTC)		"This is indeed strange!" exclaimed Precious Jade as he laid hold of her and tried to detain her. "How is it that you've deliberately started living in fear and trembling of her!" Mascara Jade Forest grew impatient and stamped her feet. "Look at my eyes!" she added in an undertone. "Must those people amuse themselves again by poking fun at me?" After this response, Precious Jade speedily let her go. Mascara Jade Forest with hurried step withdrew behind the bed; and no sooner had she issued into the back-court, than Sister Phoenix made her appearance in the room by the front entrance." Are you better?" she asked Precious Jade. "If you fancy anything to eat, mind you send some one over to my place to fetch it for you." Thereupon Aunt Marshgrass also came to pay him a visit. Shortly after, a messenger likewise arrived from Grandma Marchant (to inquire after him).When the time came to prepare the lights, Precious Jade had a couple of mouthfuls of soup to eat, but he felt so drowsy and heavy that he fell asleep.-[[User:Zou Xiangrui\|Zou Xiangrui]] ([[User talk:Zou Xiangrui\|talk]]) 09:38, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
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		+	"This is indeed strange!" exclaimed Precious Jade as he laid hold of her and tried to detain her. "Why are you afraid of these?" Mascara Jade Forest grew impatient and stamped her feet. "Look at my eyes!" she added in an undertone. "Must those people amuse themselves again by poking fun at me?" Hearing this response, Precious Jade quickly let her go. Mascara Jade Forest with hurried steps withdrew behind the bed, and no sooner had she issued into the backcourt than Sister Phoenix made her appearance in the room by the front entrance." Are you better?" she asked Precious Jade. "If you fancy anything to eat, mind you send someone over to my place to fetch it for you?" Thereupon Aunt Marshgrass also came to pay him a visit. Shortly after, a messenger likewise arrived from Grandma Marchant (to inquire after him). When the time came to prepare the lights, Precious Jade had a couple of mouthfuls of soup to eat, but he felt so drowsy and heavy that he fell asleep.--[[User:Chen Cheng\|Chen Cheng]] ([[User talk:Chen Cheng\|talk]]) 14:41, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

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 ==Chen Cheng 陈诚==
 话未说完，把个贾政气得面如金纸，大喝：“拿宝玉来！”面说，一面便往书房去，喝命：“今日再有人来劝我，我把这冠带家私一应就交与他与宝玉过去，我免不得做个罪人，把这几根烦恼鬓毛剃去，寻个干净去处自了，也免得上辱先人、下生逆子之罪！”众门客仆从见贾政这个形景，便知又是为宝玉了，一个个咬指吐舌，连忙退出。贾政喘吁吁直挺挺的坐在椅子上，满面泪痕，一叠连声：
 ==Chen Kun 陈锟==
 “拿宝玉！拿大棍，拿绳捆上！把门都关上！有人传信到里头去，立刻打死！”众小厮们只得齐声答应着，有几个来找宝玉。那宝玉听见贾政吩咐他“不许动”，早知凶多吉少；那里知道贾环又添了许多的话？正在厅上旋转，怎得个人来往里头捎信，偏生没个人来，连焙茗也不知在那里。正盼望时，只见一个老妈妈出来，宝玉如得了珍宝，便赶上来拉他，说道：“快进去告诉：老爷要打我呢！快去，快去！要紧，要紧！”

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 If I die in an accident，I can’t imagine how sad they are！If I have the achievements like them，I won’t have pity even I die accidentally. As he was thinking，Precious Hairpin asked Aroma ：“Why you get angry and beat him？” Aroma just said what Junger Dienstbote said. Precious Jade didn’t know what Junger Dienstbote said until hearing Aroma said. So he pulled Dragon Marshgras for fear that making Precious Hairpin unhappy. Then he stopped Aroma and said，“Brother Marshgrass never be this，don’t be paranoid.”--[[User:Xu Zhiyuan|Xu Zhiyuan]] ([[User talk:Xu Zhiyuan|talk]]) 23:37, 22 May 2022 (UTC)
-If I were unlucky to die in an accident，I can’t imagine how sad they are！Since I have the adorement of them，I won’t have a pity even I die accidentally and lose my lifetime achivements. As he was thinking，Precious Hairpin asked Aroma ：“Why do you get angry and beat him without signs before？” Aroma just repeated what Junger Dienstbote said. Precious Jade didn’t know what Junger Dienstbote said until hearing that. So he pulled Dragon Marshgrass for fear that Precious Hairpin  was depressed. Then he hurried to stop Aroma and said，“Brother Marshgrass has never behaved like this，so you don’t be paranoid.”[[User:Yan Ni|Yan Ni]] ([[User talk:Yan Ni|talk]]) 12:42, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
+If I were unlucky to die in an accident，I can’t imagine how sad they are！Since I have the adorement of them，I won’t have a pity even I die accidentally and lose my lifetime achivements. As he was thinking，Precious Hairpin asked Aroma ：“Why do you get angry and beat him without signs before？” Aroma just repeated what Junger Dienstbote said. Precious Jade didn’t know what Junger Dienstbote said until hearing that. So he pulled Dragon Marshgrass for fear that Precious Hairpin  was depressed. Then he hurried to stop Aroma and said，“Brother Marshgrass has never behaved like this，so you don’t be paranoid.”--[[User:Yan Ni|Yan Ni]] ([[User talk:Yan Ni|talk]]) 12:54, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
 ==Yan Ni 燕妮==

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	If I die in an accident，I can’t imagine how sad they are！If I have the achievements like them，I won’t have pity even I die accidentally. As he was thinking，Precious Hairpin asked Aroma ：“Why you get angry and beat him？” Aroma just said what Junger Dienstbote said. Precious Jade didn’t know what Junger Dienstbote said until hearing Aroma said. So he pulled Dragon Marshgras for fear that making Precious Hairpin unhappy. Then he stopped Aroma and said，“Brother Marshgrass never be this，don’t be paranoid.”--[[User:Xu Zhiyuan\|Xu Zhiyuan]] ([[User talk:Xu Zhiyuan\|talk]]) 23:37, 22 May 2022 (UTC)		If I die in an accident，I can’t imagine how sad they are！If I have the achievements like them，I won’t have pity even I die accidentally. As he was thinking，Precious Hairpin asked Aroma ：“Why you get angry and beat him？” Aroma just said what Junger Dienstbote said. Precious Jade didn’t know what Junger Dienstbote said until hearing Aroma said. So he pulled Dragon Marshgras for fear that making Precious Hairpin unhappy. Then he stopped Aroma and said，“Brother Marshgrass never be this，don’t be paranoid.”--[[User:Xu Zhiyuan\|Xu Zhiyuan]] ([[User talk:Xu Zhiyuan\|talk]]) 23:37, 22 May 2022 (UTC)
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		+	If I were unlucky to die in an accident，I can’t imagine how sad they are！Since I have the adorement of them，I won’t have a pity even I die accidentally and lose my lifetime achivements. As he was thinking，Precious Hairpin asked Aroma ：“Why do you get angry and beat him without signs before？” Aroma just repeated what Junger Dienstbote said. Precious Jade didn’t know what Junger Dienstbote said until hearing that. So he pulled Dragon Marshgrass for fear that Precious Hairpin was depressed. Then he hurried to stop Aroma and said，“Brother Marshgrass has never behaved like this，so you don’t be paranoid.”[[User:Yan Ni\|Yan Ni]] ([[User talk:Yan Ni\|talk]]) 12:42, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

	==Yan Ni 燕妮==		==Yan Ni 燕妮==

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 “How can Precious Jade bear the hit of the board you use with such terrible force? Now that you say to give your son a lesson is to make him glorify and illuminate our ancestors, how did your father once do to you?” At saying, Grandma Merchant burst into tears uncontrollably. Master Merchant smiled again, “Mother, it’s not necessary for you to feel sad. That’s all my fault of impatience. From now on, I will never hit him any more.” And Grandma Merchant sneered, “It’s also unnecessary for you to say that. He is your son whom naturally you can hit arbitrarily. From this it seems that you are tired of the two of us. In this case, we’d better keep away from you, thus all of us will feel comfortable!” Then, she ordered, “Go find a sedan chair! I together with your wife and Precious Jade am going back to Nanjing right now.”—[[User:Li Linyu|Li Linyu]] ([[User talk:Li Linyu|talk]]) 10:28, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
-“How can Precious Jade bear the hit of the board you use with such terrible force? Now you allege that punishing your son is to make our ancestors illistrious, how did your father once treat you?” While speaking, Grandma Merchant burst into tears uncontrollably. Master Merchant smile apologetically again, “Mother, it’s not necessary for you to feel sad. That’s all my fault of impatience. From now on, I will never hit him any more.” And Grandma Merchant sneered, “It’s also unnecessary for you to say that. He is your son whom naturally you can hit arbitrarily. From this it seems that you are tired of the two of us. In this case, we’d better keep away from you, thus all of us will feel comfortable!” Then, she ordered, “Go find a sedan chair! I together with your wife and Precious Jade am going back to Nanjing right now.”
+“How can Precious Jade bear the hit of the board you use with such terrible force? Now you allege that punishing your son is to make our ancestors illistrious, how did your father once treat you?” While speaking, Grandma Merchant burst into tears uncontrollably. Master Merchant smile apologetically again, “Mother, it’s not necessary for you to feel sad. That’s all my fault of impatience. From now on, I will never hit him any more.” And Grandma Merchant sneered, “It’s also unnecessary for you to say that. He is your son whom naturally you can hit arbitrarily. From this it seems that you are tired of the two of us. In this case, we’d better keep away from you, thus all of us will feel comfortable!” Then, she ordered, “Go find a sedan chair! I together with your wife and Precious Jade am going back to Nanjing right now.”--[[User:Li Siwen|Li Siwen]] ([[User talk:Li Siwen|talk]]) 05:56, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
 ==Li Siwen 李思文==