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=47. the Prodigal Explorer

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References

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Zhu Renduo: /* Introduction */

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Introduction

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References

Ma Xin: /* The comparative analyse of examples */

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The comparative analyse of examples

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The compare of Chinese and Japanese translations

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Introduction

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 ===References===
 *Champions-Universe of League of Legends 英雄-《英雄联盟》宇宙. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://universe.leagueoflegends.com/en_US/champions/
 *League of Legends Wiki，Nasus(the Curator of the Sands)/Lol/Audio. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://leagueoflegends.fandom.com/wiki/Nasus/LoL/Audio
 *Liu Chang 刘畅. (2019). 网络游戏本地化翻译研究 [Localized translation study on the online games]. 海外英语 [Overseas English].
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 *Xiao Zhiyan 肖志艳. (2011). 游戏名称翻译的目的论视角研究 [A study on the translation of names of games from the approach of skopo theory]. 咸宁学院学报 [Journal of Xianning University].
 *Yuan Yihao 袁一皓. (2020). 游戏本地化视阈下的“翻译”与“再创作” [The ‘translation’ and ‘re-creation’ in the view of the localization of games]. 海外英语 [Overseas English].
 *Zhang Wujiang 张武江. (2013). 译创在游戏本地化翻译中的应用 [The application of transcreation in the localized translation of games]. 现代传播 [Modern Communication].
 *Zheng Guozheng 郑国政. (2006). 软件本地化翻译质量面面观 [The aspects of the quality of the translation of softwares]. 科技资讯 [Science&Technology Information].
 Suggestion: you can find more prestigious academic journals or books to quote in this paper.--[[User:Ma Xin|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin|talk]]) 14:48, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
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 On this title Chinese translators used the strategy of transliteration and the translation is ‘铁铠冥魂’. They only added ‘铠’(armor) to extended the meaning of ‘iron’. But Japanese translators retained the ‘iron’(鋼) and turned ‘revenant’ into ‘魂奪者’, which means one who grab another’s soul. This can be referred to his ultimate ability which is to draw enemy’s soul out.
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 On this title Chinese translators lessened the ‘prodigal’ part which means ‘浪子’ in Chinese and only retain the ‘explorer’, which is the Chinese translation ‘探险家’. Japanese translators used the strategy of transcreation and the translation is ‘光の冒険心’, which means the spirit of adventure with light.

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	*Zheng Guozheng 郑国政. (2006). 软件本地化翻译质量面面观 [The aspects of the quality of the translation of softwares]. 科技资讯 [Science&Technology Information].		*Zheng Guozheng 郑国政. (2006). 软件本地化翻译质量面面观 [The aspects of the quality of the translation of softwares]. 科技资讯 [Science&Technology Information].
	Suggestion: you can find more prestigious academic journals or books to quote in this paper.--[[User:Ma Xin\|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin\|talk]]) 14:48, 11 December 2021 (UTC)		Suggestion: you can find more prestigious academic journals or books to quote in this paper.--[[User:Ma Xin\|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin\|talk]]) 14:48, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
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 ===References===
-*Zheng Guozheng 郑国政. (2006). 软件本地化翻译质量面面观 [The aspects of the quality of the translation of softwares]. 科技资讯 [Science&Technology Information].
+*Champions-Universe of League of Legends 英雄-《英雄联盟》宇宙. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://universe.leagueoflegends.com/en_US/champions/
-*Wang Baoqin 汪宝琴. (2012). 从目的论看游戏名称的英译汉策略 [The EtoC tranlastion strategies of names of games from skopo theory]. 海外英语 [Overseas English]
+*League of Legends Wiki，Nasus(the Curator of the Sands)/Lol/Audio. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://leagueoflegends.fandom.com/wiki/Nasus/LoL/Audio
 *Liu Chang 刘畅. (2019). 网络游戏本地化翻译研究 [Localized translation study on the online games]. 海外英语 [Overseas English].
 *Yuan Yihao 袁一皓. (2020). 游戏本地化视阈下的“翻译”与“再创作” [The ‘translation’ and ‘re-creation’ in the view of the localization of games]. 海外英语 [Overseas English].
-*Champions-Universe of League of Legends 英雄-《英雄联盟》宇宙. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://universe.leagueoflegends.com/en_US/champions/
+*Zhang Wujiang 张武江. (2013). 译创在游戏本地化翻译中的应用 [The application of transcreation in the localized translation of games]. 现代传播 [Modern Communication].
-*Translation matters of LOL 联盟译事. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://lol.qq.com/search/index.shtml?order=sIdxTime&page=1&type=ALL&keyword=联盟译事
+*Zheng Guozheng 郑国政. (2006). 软件本地化翻译质量面面观 [The aspects of the quality of the translation of softwares]. 科技资讯 [Science&Technology Information].
 Suggestion: you can find more prestigious academic journals or books to quote in this paper.--[[User:Ma Xin|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin|talk]]) 14:48, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

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 ===References===
 *Zhang Wujiang 张武江. (2013). 译创在游戏本地化翻译中的应用 [The application of transcreation in the localized translation of games]. 现代传播 [Modern Communication].
 *Liu Chang 刘畅. (2019). 网络游戏本地化翻译研究 [Localized translation study on the online games]. 海外英语 [Overseas English].
 *Yuan Yihao 袁一皓. (2020). 游戏本地化视阈下的“翻译”与“再创作” [The ‘translation’ and ‘re-creation’ in the view of the localization of games]. 海外英语 [Overseas English].

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	The ideas of the design of legends crossed many countries and cultures. Such as ‘The Sheriff of Piltover’ that comes from the old west of America, ‘The Monkey King’ that comes from the traditional Chinese fiction, Journey to the West, ‘Ninjas’ that comes from Japanese culture, ‘The Mad Chemist’ and ‘The Plague Rat’ comes from European history. The game itself represents an aspect of cross-cultural communication. Nowadays in a globalizing world, the cross-cultural communication is becoming more and more often, in which translation plays a very important part. A good translation can make receivers understand the meaning immediately and show the beauty of foreign culture in the same time. In the translation of cross-cultural communication, localization is the important part. If compare the localization strategies which is used in different culture or language in cross-cultural communication with another culture, the understanding of the compared cultures could be deepened.		The ideas of the design of legends crossed many countries and cultures. Such as ‘The Sheriff of Piltover’ that comes from the old west of America, ‘The Monkey King’ that comes from the traditional Chinese fiction, Journey to the West, ‘Ninjas’ that comes from Japanese culture, ‘The Mad Chemist’ and ‘The Plague Rat’ comes from European history. The game itself represents an aspect of cross-cultural communication. Nowadays in a globalizing world, the cross-cultural communication is becoming more and more often, in which translation plays a very important part. A good translation can make receivers understand the meaning immediately and show the beauty of foreign culture in the same time. In the translation of cross-cultural communication, localization is the important part. If compare the localization strategies which is used in different culture or language in cross-cultural communication with another culture, the understanding of the compared cultures could be deepened.

−	Many studies on translation of game started with the localization of software. But most of those studies analyze the process of software localization from the approach of technology. ~~Zheng~~ stated a series of strategies of localized translation of games from the approaches of the localization standards of the translation of technology and software. In ~~Xiao’s~~ study of translation of game in cross-cultural communication she stated that ‘The translation of game is not only a transformation of language, but also a commercial activity.’ Besides, ~~Wang~~ analyzed the four values in the name of games, which are value of information transmission, the value of culture, the value of aesthetic, and the value of business. She also explained how to fulfill those four values in the translation of the name of games. Today’s studies in the translation of League of Legends are mostly the evaluation of the existing translation and the exploration of translation strategies through the approach of localization. Besides those studies are limited in Chinese language, some of them compared the simplified Chinese translation in mainland with the Traditional Chinese translation in Taiwan Province. But the comparation with another whole different language can not be seen by now. Therefore this article is aiming to compare the translation of legends’ titles of League of Legends between simplified Chinese and Japanese, through which to explore the similarities and differences between the selection of Chinese and Japanese translation strategies.	+	Many studies on translation of game started with the localization of software. But most of those studies analyze the process of software localization from the approach of technology. Zheng（2006：124） stated a series of strategies of localized translation of games from the approaches of the localization standards of the translation of technology and software. In Xiao（2011：189-190）’s study of translation of game in cross-cultural communication she stated that ‘The translation of game is not only a transformation of language, but also a commercial activity.’ Besides, Wang（2012：159-160） analyzed the four values in the name of games, which are value of information transmission, the value of culture, the value of aesthetic, and the value of business. She also explained how to fulfill those four values in the translation of the name of games. Today’s studies in the translation of League of Legends are mostly the evaluation of the existing translation and the exploration of translation strategies through the approach of localization. Besides those studies are limited in Chinese language, some of them compared the simplified Chinese translation in mainland with the Traditional Chinese translation in Taiwan Province. But the comparation with another whole different language can not be seen by now. Therefore this article is aiming to compare the translation of legends’ titles of League of Legends between simplified Chinese and Japanese, through which to explore the similarities and differences between the selection of Chinese and Japanese translation strategies.

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	*Translation matters of LOL 联盟译事. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://lol.qq.com/search/index.shtml?order=sIdxTime&page=1&type=ALL&keyword=联盟译事		*Translation matters of LOL 联盟译事. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://lol.qq.com/search/index.shtml?order=sIdxTime&page=1&type=ALL&keyword=联盟译事
	*League of Legends Wiki，Nasus(the Curator of the Sands)/Lol/Audio. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://leagueoflegends.fandom.com/wiki/Nasus/LoL/Audio		*League of Legends Wiki，Nasus(the Curator of the Sands)/Lol/Audio. Accessed December 1, 2021. https://leagueoflegends.fandom.com/wiki/Nasus/LoL/Audio
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		+	Suggestion: you can find more prestigious academic journals or books to quote in this paper.--[[User:Ma Xin\|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin\|talk]]) 14:48, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

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	In this chapter, we seperate the translations into 3 kinds which are transliteration, paraphrase and transcreation. If translation is totally corresponding with source language text, it will be considered as transliteration. If only part of it is correspongding with source language text, it will be considered as paraphrase. If it is totally out of source language text, it will be considered as trancreation.		In this chapter, we seperate the translations into 3 kinds which are transliteration, paraphrase and transcreation. If translation is totally corresponding with source language text, it will be considered as transliteration. If only part of it is correspongding with source language text, it will be considered as paraphrase. If it is totally out of source language text, it will be considered as trancreation.
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		+	'''Suggestion: it's perhaps better to summarize the translation of terms into 3 types mentioned above and give each one a more detailed analysis.'''--[[User:Ma Xin\|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin\|talk]]) 14:42, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

	====1. The Minotaur====		====1. The Minotaur====

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 .	the Gloomist	愁云使者	終わりなき憂鬱
-Suggestion: put those titles in the appendix, not in the main body. it is also better to analyze one or two terms in detail.--[[User:Ma Xin|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin|talk]]) 14:35, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
+Suggestion: put those titles in the appendix, not in the main body of the paper. it is also better to analyze one or two terms in detail.--[[User:Ma Xin|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin|talk]]) 14:35, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
 ===The comparative analyse of examples===

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 '''--the key point of this part is to show the multicultural concept blended in LOL, so foreignization and domestication should be taken into consideration in the process of translating the leagend's titles. What is important is that you need to add relative research of translation  in order to polish this study.'''
-Many studies on translation of game started with the localization of software. But most of those studies analyze the process of software localization from the approach of technology. Zheng '''(# year, page)''' stated a series of strategies of localized translation of games from the approaches of the localization standards of the translation of technology and software. In Xiao’s  '''(# year, page)''' study of translation of game in cross-cultural communication she stated that ‘The translation of game is not only a transformation of language, but also a commercial activity.’ Besides, Wang  '''(# year, page)''' analyzed the four values in the name of games, which are value of information transmission, the value of culture, the value of aesthetic, and the value of business. She also explained how to fulfill those four values in the translation of the name of games. Today’s studies in the translation of League of Legends are mostly the evaluation of the existing translation and the exploration of translation strategies through the approach of localization. Besides those studies are limited in Chinese language, some of them compared the simplified Chinese translation in mainland with the Traditional Chinese translation in Taiwan Province. But the comparation with another whole different language can not be seen by now. Therefore this article is aiming to compare the translation of legends’ titles of League of Legends between simplified Chinese and Japanese, through which to explore the similarities and differences between the selection of Chinese and Japanese translation strategies.
+Many studies on translation of game started with the localization of software. But most of those studies analyze the process of software localization from the approach of technology. Zheng '''(# year, page)''' stated a series of strategies of localized translation of games from the approaches of the localization standards of the translation of technology and software. In Xiao’s  '''(# year, page)''' study of translation of game in cross-cultural communication she stated that ‘The translation of game is not only a transformation of language, but also a commercial activity.’ Besides, Wang  '''(# year, page)''' analyzed the four values in the name of games, which are value of information transmission, the value of culture, the value of aesthetic, and the value of business. She also explained how to fulfill those four values in the translation of the name of games. Today’s studies in the translation of League of Legends are mostly the evaluation of the existing translation and the exploration of translation strategies through the approach of localization. Besides those studies are limited in Chinese language, some of them compared the simplified Chinese translation in mainland with the Traditional Chinese translation in Taiwan Province. But the comparation with another whole different language can not be seen by now. Therefore this article is aiming to compare the translation of legends’ titles of League of Legends between simplified Chinese and Japanese, through which to explore the similarities and differences between the selection of Chinese and Japanese translation strategies.--[[User:Ma Xin|Ma Xin]] ([[User talk:Ma Xin|talk]]) 14:35, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
 ===Generality of the translation in China and Japan===