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Xiao Na: /* 肖娜 Xiao Na */

2022-12-19T13:48:41Z

肖娜 Xiao Na

Chen Siyang: /* 陈彦希 Chen Yanxi */

2022-12-16T06:13:26Z

陈彦希 Chen Yanxi

Guan Na: /* 郝天钰 Hao Tianyu */

2022-12-16T04:31:56Z

郝天钰 Hao Tianyu

Wang Zhibi: /* 王智灵 Wang Zhiling */

2022-12-16T02:18:25Z

王智灵 Wang Zhiling

Hao Tianyu: /* 侯永芬 Hou Yongfen */

2022-12-15T18:13:38Z

侯永芬 Hou Yongfen

Hao Tianyu: /* 郝天钰 Hao Tianyu */

2022-12-15T18:12:50Z

郝天钰 Hao Tianyu

Lu Yuqin 1: /* 马明宇 Ma Mingyu */

2022-12-15T17:26:59Z

马明宇 Ma Mingyu

Li Ziyu: /* 梁昕璐 Liang Xinlu */

2022-12-15T16:17:08Z

梁昕璐 Liang Xinlu

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−	~~Links to~~ the other parts:《岭南万户皆春色》[[Lingnan Englisch]] Part 1, [[Lingnan_Englisch_2]] Part 2, [[Lingnan_Englisch_3]] Part 3, [[Lingnan_Englisch_4]] Part 4, [[Lingnan_Englisch_5]] Part 5, [[Lingnan_Englisch_6]] Full final version~~. For CNPIEC~~.	+	This is the final version of the full translation of Lingnan into English.

		+	=Link to the Chinese original and the translation history=
		+	《岭南万户皆春色》[[Lingnan Englisch]] Part 1, [[Lingnan_Englisch_2]] Part 2, [[Lingnan_Englisch_3]] Part 3, [[Lingnan_Englisch_4]] Part 4, [[Lingnan_Englisch_5]] Part 5, [[Lingnan_Englisch_6]] Part 6, [[Lingnan_Englisch_7]] Part 7. Full final version. For CNPIEC.

	==== Wellsand, Benjamin====		==== Wellsand, Benjamin====

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 出门跑步。从斜周村到扶溪镇，中间是10公里的246省道。路途中，每每遇到去赶集的村民，他们都要停下脚步，带着炫耀的神情过来问候——“漆书记，坐我的摩托车吧？”“漆书记，我稍您吧？”他向村民们摆摆手，满嘴“谢谢，不用了”，可心里却想，“人知从太守游而乐，而不知太守之乐其乐也。”路过大印头村小组时，他发现祠庙里聚集了不少村民。原来，今天是祠堂祭祀“吃庙会”的日子。现在，他对斜周村的各个村小组都已了如指掌，知道这个小组住着三四十户人家，很多年轻人都去珠江三角洲一带打工，而在祠庙里祭祀的是蔡十八郎。相传，是蔡十八郎日夜看守着锦江，守护着斜周村，才保得这里风调雨顺。每天，都有虔诚的老奶奶到庙里来烧香祭拜。
-When Qi repeatedly stared at this sentence--"4,768 households of dilapidated housing transformation", unconsciously a smile was curved in the corner of mouth because of his samll contribution for this number. He still got up at five o'clock a.m. that day and then went running immediately after reading Recipes in Rhymes and  Baizheng Fu(a composition about the treatments of various diseases) . There was  provincial highway 246 about 10 kilometers from Xiezhou village to Fuxi town. Every time the villagers who went to the market met him on the way, they would stop and come over with an air of triumph to greet, "Secretary Qi, take my motorcycle?" he said, "No,thanks." And then he would think that people only know the happiness of playing with the prefecture but they don't know he takes the tourists' joy as happiness.  While passing the group of  Da Yintou village, he found that  not a few villagers gathered in the temple. And it turned out that today was the day for sacrificing  in ancestral temple and "Eating in temple fair".   Nowadays, he knew all about groups of Xiezhou village and the facts that this group was made up of thirties or fourties households, and many young people came to the Pearl River Delta Region to work and Cai Shi-ba-lang (the 18th  son in the Cai's family) was worshipped in the temple. Cai Shi-ba-lang, according to legend, watched over the Jin Jiang River and Xiezhou village from day and night  and that was why it was good weather for crops here, therefore, there were old pious women caming to the temple to burn incense and worship every day.
+When Qi repeatedly stared at this sentence--"4,768 households of dilapidated housing transformation", unconsciously a smile was curved in the corner of mouth because of his samll contribution for this number. He still got up at five o'clock a.m. that day and then went running immediately after reading Recipes in Rhymes and  Baizheng Fu(a composition about the treatments of various diseases) . There was  provincial highway 246 about 10 kilometers from Xiezhou village to Fuxi town. Every time the villagers who went to the market met him on the way, they would stop and come over with an air of triumph to greet, "Secretary Qi, take my motorcycle?" he said, "No,thanks." And then he would think that people only know the happiness of playing with the prefecture but they don't know he takes the tourists' joy as happiness.  While passing the group of  Da Yintou village, he found that  not a few villagers gathered in the temple. And it turned out that today was the day for sacrificing  in ancestral temple and "Eating in temple fair".   Nowadays, he knew all about groups of Xiezhou village and the facts that this group was made up of thirties or fourties households, and many young people came to the Pearl River Delta Region to work and Cai Shi-ba-lang (the 18th  son in the Cai's family) was worshipped in the temple. Cai Shi-ba-lang, according to legend, watched over the Jin Jiang River and Xiezhou village from day and night  and that was why it was good weather for crops here, therefore, there were old pious women coming to the temple to burn incense and worship every day.
 When Qi repeatedly stared at this sentence--"4,768 households of dilapidated housing transformation", unconsciously a smile was curved in the corner of mouth because of his small contribution for this number. He still got up at five o'clock a.m. that day and then went to run immediately after reading Tang verse and Baizheng Fu (a composition about the treatments of various diseases). There was provincial highway 246 about 10 kilometers from Xiezhou village to Fuxi town. Every time the villagers who went to the market met him on the way, they would stop and come over with an air of ostentation to greet, "Secretary Qi, would you like to ride my motorcycle?" or "Can I give you a lift?". He waved them away, "No, thanks." and then he would think that people only know the happiness of playing with him but don't know he takes the villagers' joy as happiness. While passing the group of Da Yintou village, he found that a few villagers gathered in the ancestral temple. It turned out that it was the day for sacrificing. Nowadays, he knew all about groups of Xiezhou village and the facts that this group was made up of around forty households, and many young people came to the Pearl River Delta Region to work and Cai Shi-ba-lang (the 18th son in the Cai's family) was worshipped in the temple. Cai Shi-ba-lang, according to legend, watched over the Jinjiang River and Xiezhou village from day and night and that was why it was good weather for crops here. therefore, there were old pious women coming to the temple to burn incense and worship every day.

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	You can't help but wonder -- maybe sometimes an international financial storm has little impact on farmers in remote areas; however, an accidental traffic accident or a disease can hit them very hard. Researchers have found that even in normal years, industrial incomes can vary obviously from year to year. In any normal year in Bangladesh, industrial wages can be 18% above or below the average wage; while industrial wages in India vary 21 times as much as in the United States, where farmers are insured and even in bad years they receive subsidies, without a sharp drop in their livelihoods. For the poor, the risks are not limited to salaries or food, but also health. Nevertheless, in remote villages in China, where so few people can be insured for their health, once there’s a crisis, it can be devastating for the family.		You can't help but wonder -- maybe sometimes an international financial storm has little impact on farmers in remote areas; however, an accidental traffic accident or a disease can hit them very hard. Researchers have found that even in normal years, industrial incomes can vary obviously from year to year. In any normal year in Bangladesh, industrial wages can be 18% above or below the average wage; while industrial wages in India vary 21 times as much as in the United States, where farmers are insured and even in bad years they receive subsidies, without a sharp drop in their livelihoods. For the poor, the risks are not limited to salaries or food, but also health. Nevertheless, in remote villages in China, where so few people can be insured for their health, once there’s a crisis, it can be devastating for the family.
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		+	You can't help but wonder--maybe sometimes, an international financial storm had little impact on farmers in remote areas, but a traffic accident, or a disease, can cause serious blow to them. Some researchers have found that even in normal years, agricultural incomes vary greatly from year to year. In any normal year in Bangladesh, industrial wages can be 18% above or below the average wage; while industrial wages in India vary 21 times as much as in the United States, where farmers are insured and even in bad years they receive subsidies, without a sharp drop in their livelihoods. For the poor, the risks are not limited to income or food, but also to health. But in China's remote mountain villages, where there are so few people to insure their health, a crisis can be devastating for the family.

	==== 陈思阳 Chen Siyang====		==== 陈思阳 Chen Siyang====

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	Looking out, your heart may quiver for the huge project by thousands of bagged fruits, which means that the bagging action has been repeated by Huang Xiaoxiong more than 10,000 times, that’s why he has such a dark complexion. His whole face, neck, and arms were repeatedly scorched by the sun from his long exposure to the fields, bagging the fruit of these trees. You may feel distressed for the drops of sweat he has left in this field, because not only he is a man in his late 60s, but a patient going through chemotherapy. In the city he would have been a man about to retire, but here he has made himself the main worker.		Looking out, your heart may quiver for the huge project by thousands of bagged fruits, which means that the bagging action has been repeated by Huang Xiaoxiong more than 10,000 times, that’s why he has such a dark complexion. His whole face, neck, and arms were repeatedly scorched by the sun from his long exposure to the fields, bagging the fruit of these trees. You may feel distressed for the drops of sweat he has left in this field, because not only he is a man in his late 60s, but a patient going through chemotherapy. In the city he would have been a man about to retire, but here he has made himself the main worker.
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		+	With you looking out, your heart may quiver for the huge project by thousands of bagged fruits, which means that this action of bagging has been repeated by Huang Xiaoxiong more than 10,000 times. That's why he has such a dark complexion. His whole face, neck, and arms were repeatedly scorched by the sun from his long exposure to the fields because of bagging the fruit of these trees. You may feel distressed for his numerous drops of sweat that he has left in this field, because he is not only a man in his late 60s, but a patient suffering from chemotherapy. In the city he would have been a man about to retire, but here he has made himself the main worker.

	==== 关娜 Guan Na====		==== 关娜 Guan Na====

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 Alone in Haifeng
 In Haifeng, history exists in a telescoping way——you can witness not only the present but also the history of 100 years ago. This county is like a mere illusion in the time of the castle, still continuing the hustle and bustle of the revolution. Haifeng is the ancient capital of the red revolution of Guangdong Province. Zhou Enlai, He Long, Liu Bocheng, Xu Xiangqian, and other older revolutionaries have all left footprints here.  Haifeng is also a symbolic city——just as London is still Dickens' London, Haifeng is still Pengpai's Haifeng. Through the streets and alleys, through rows of shops, crowded in bustling markets, you can not escape the eyes of Peng Pai. In Haifeng, Peng Pai is everywhere-his name appears in people's gossip, and also on plaques in schools, hospitals and parks. Peng Pai was born in this land by the South China Sea. Of course, he loves his hometown, but his love is different from others because he sees the cause of the painful lesions in his hometown. As the best youth in Haifeng, Peng Pai has brought great changes to this county. So if you don't know Peng Pai, you cannot know Haifeng—— Haifeng is characterized by the feature of Pengpai.
 ==== 王植碧 Wang Zhibi====

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	Now, the guava trees growing on both sides of the ridge are more than one meter height, with huge leaves and green fruits. Walking through the ridge, you feel like you've come to a small suburban park -- the woodland is perfectly manicured, there are no more weeds, and the trees are spaced equidistant. You sigh how lucky you are to see a guava in bloom! In your line of sight, the group of white petals have five pieces which are tightly squeezed next to each other. The the cluster of stamens in the middle is like a blooming milky fireworks. In that tender core, all the sweetness of the world is concentrated. You see that the branches are covered with fruit. However, the fist-sized things are not turquoise but white. It turns out that in order to protect the fruit from harm, with great patience, all the fruit outside are wrapped in a layer of white plastic bags. Growers need to be extremely careful to do this -- to make sure that the bag covers all the fruit without damaging the side fruit in the process.		Now, the guava trees growing on both sides of the ridge are more than one meter height, with huge leaves and green fruits. Walking through the ridge, you feel like you've come to a small suburban park -- the woodland is perfectly manicured, there are no more weeds, and the trees are spaced equidistant. You sigh how lucky you are to see a guava in bloom! In your line of sight, the group of white petals have five pieces which are tightly squeezed next to each other. The the cluster of stamens in the middle is like a blooming milky fireworks. In that tender core, all the sweetness of the world is concentrated. You see that the branches are covered with fruit. However, the fist-sized things are not turquoise but white. It turns out that in order to protect the fruit from harm, with great patience, all the fruit outside are wrapped in a layer of white plastic bags. Growers need to be extremely careful to do this -- to make sure that the bag covers all the fruit without damaging the side fruit in the process.
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		+	Nowadays, guava trees growing on both sides of the ridge are more than one meter high, with huge leaves and green fruits. Walking through the ridge, you feel like you've come to some small suburban park: The woodland is perfectly manicured without unwanted weeds, and the trees are spaced equidistant. You exclaim how lucky you are to see a guava in bloom. In the line of sight, the group of white petals have five pieces that are tightly squeezed next to each other, the middle clustered stamens are just like a group is blooming milky fireworks. All the sweetness of the world is concentrated in the tender core. You may notice that although the branches are covered with fruit, the fist-sized object is not turquoise, but white. Originally, fruit farmers wrap a layer of white plastic bags with great patience in all the fruit surface to protect the fruit from harm. Growers need to be extremely careful to keep the bags all over the fruit without damaging the side fruit in the process.

	==== 郝天钰 Hao Tianyu====		==== 郝天钰 Hao Tianyu====

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	放眼望去，你的心里微微一抖——这个工程真不算小！那些上万颗的果实，都被套上了袋子，这便意味着套袋子这个动作，被黄小雄重复了一万次以上。你终于恍然大悟——何以他的肤色会那么黝黑！因他长时间暴露在田野，为这些树上的果实套袋子，所以他的整个面孔、脖颈和胳膊，都被阳光反复地炙烤过。你不觉心疼起来——这个男人在这块地里留下了多少汗滴？要知道，他不仅是一个接近六旬的老人，还是一个要做化疗的病人！若在城里，他是个马上要过退休生活的人，而在这里，他还拿自己当主劳力呢！		放眼望去，你的心里微微一抖——这个工程真不算小！那些上万颗的果实，都被套上了袋子，这便意味着套袋子这个动作，被黄小雄重复了一万次以上。你终于恍然大悟——何以他的肤色会那么黝黑！因他长时间暴露在田野，为这些树上的果实套袋子，所以他的整个面孔、脖颈和胳膊，都被阳光反复地炙烤过。你不觉心疼起来——这个男人在这块地里留下了多少汗滴？要知道，他不仅是一个接近六旬的老人，还是一个要做化疗的病人！若在城里，他是个马上要过退休生活的人，而在这里，他还拿自己当主劳力呢！
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		+	Looking out, your heart may quiver for the huge project by thousands of bagged fruits, which means that the bagging action has been repeated by Huang Xiaoxiong more than 10,000 times, that’s why he has such a dark complexion. His whole face, neck, and arms were repeatedly scorched by the sun from his long exposure to the fields, bagging the fruit of these trees. You may feel distressed for the drops of sweat he has left in this field, because not only he is a man in his late 60s, but a patient going through chemotherapy. In the city he would have been a man about to retire, but here he has made himself the main worker.

	==== 关娜 Guan Na====		==== 关娜 Guan Na====

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	Explore the delicious source of the store, you know that Lian 'An County is not only Haifeng's most important granary, vegetable production base, but also seafood base. The cream crab, black feather crab, double membrane crab, sand shrimp, white thorn shrimp, flower shrimp, oysters, turtles, etc. produced here are all hot goods in the aquatic market. The food in the stall was naturally very fresh and cooked by country hand, certainly more flavorful than the food produced by the assembly line in the city hotel. In fact, when modern industrial technology has provided people with a large number of cheap fast foods, there is not much nutritional value in those instant noodles and canned foods. Moreover, these foods have greatly damaged the original taste system of human beings. People living in cities have become pale and weak from eating too much junk food.		Explore the delicious source of the store, you know that Lian 'An County is not only Haifeng's most important granary, vegetable production base, but also seafood base. The cream crab, black feather crab, double membrane crab, sand shrimp, white thorn shrimp, flower shrimp, oysters, turtles, etc. produced here are all hot goods in the aquatic market. The food in the stall was naturally very fresh and cooked by country hand, certainly more flavorful than the food produced by the assembly line in the city hotel. In fact, when modern industrial technology has provided people with a large number of cheap fast foods, there is not much nutritional value in those instant noodles and canned foods. Moreover, these foods have greatly damaged the original taste system of human beings. People living in cities have become pale and weak from eating too much junk food.
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		+	Explored why the food of the store is delicious and you knew that Lian 'An County was not only Haifeng's most important granary, vegetable production base, but also seafood base. The cream crab, black feather crab, double membrane crab, sand shrimp, white thorn shrimp, flower shrimp, oysters, turtles, etc. produced here were all hot goods in the aquatic market. The food in the stall was naturally very fresh and cooked by hand, which was a method used in the countryside. So it was certainly more flavorful than the food produced by the assembly line in the city hotel. In fact, when modern industrial technology has provided people with a large number of cheap fast foods, there is not much nutritional value in those instant noodles and canned foods. Moreover, these foods have greatly damaged the original taste system of human beings. People living in cities have become pale and weak from eating too much junk food.

	==== 陆玉琴 Lu Yuqin ====		==== 陆玉琴 Lu Yuqin ====

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 在海丰县203个行政村中，坡平村的历史是红彤彤的。怎样才能用好这笔历史遗产呢？原来，海丰县已投入1015万元，用于全县所有行政村的建设规划。县里决定在联安镇、莲花山、大湖湿地、黄羌林场、南粤古驿道等周边农村大力发展“农业观光”“民俗农庄”“休闲运动”等乡村旅游产业，以激发乡村新活力。县里将联安镇的坡平村、附城镇的新山村、黄羌林场的富足园村等红色村庄进行升级打造，最终建成特色村。目前，全县有省级文化和特色村1个，省级乡村旅游精品路线1条，省级休闲与乡村旅游示范点5个。由海丰县扶贫办整合全县有劳动能力贫困户的扶贫资金，投入红色旅游扶贫项目，按年收益7%分给贫困户。目前，坡平村36户有劳动能力的贫困户，每年每户的分红可达1400元。
-Among the 203 administrative villages in Haifeng County, Poping Village enjoys a red history. How can we make good use of this historical legacy? Originally, Haifeng County has invested 10.15 million yuan for the construction planning of all administrative villages in the county. The county decided to vigorously develop rural tourism industries such as "agricultural sightseeing," "folk farmstead" and "leisure sports" in the surrounding villages such as Lian'an Town, Lianhua Mountain, Dahu Wetland, Huangqiang Forest Farm, Nanyue Ancient Post Road, etc., in order to stimulate new vitality in the countryside. In the county, the red villages such as Poping Village in Lian'an Town, Xinshan Village in Attached Town and Fuzuyuan Village in Huangqiang Forest Farm were upgraded and built into special villages. At present, the county has 1 provincial culture and characteristic village, 1 provincial village tourism boutique route, 5 provincial leisure and rural tourism demonstration sites. The Poverty Alleviation Office of Haifeng County integrates the poverty alleviation funds of the poor households with the ability to work throughout the county and invests in the red tourism poverty alleviation project to distribute 7% of the annual income to the poor households. At present, 36 poor households with working capacity in Poping Village have an annual dividend of RMB 1,400 per household.
+Among the 203 administrative villages in Haifeng County, Poping Village enjoys a red history. How can we make good use of this historical legacy?
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 The Haifeng County government’s approach was to invested 10.15 million yuan in the construction planning of all administrative villages in the county. The county government decided to actively promote the rural tourism industry, and activities such as "agricultural sightseeing," "folk farmstead", and "leisure sports" were developed in the surrounding rural areas, including Lian'an Town, Lianhua Mountain, Dahu Wetland, Huangqiang Forest Farm, Nanyue Ancient Post Road, etc., thus successfully stimulating new vitality in the rural areas. Moreover, the county government upgraded the red revolutionary villages such as Poping Village in Lian'an Town, Xinshan Village in Attached Town, and Fuzuyuan Village in Huangqiang Forest Farm, and they were all finally transformed into distinctive tourist villages.
 ==== 李梓玉 Li Ziyu====