Talk:5th Generation Director: Zhang Yimou - Revision history

Root at 02:45, 22 April 2013

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Linksys at 03:42, 16 April 2013

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Dekeo at 02:33, 16 April 2013

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Dekeo at 01:56, 16 April 2013

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Dekeo at 01:56, 16 April 2013

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Melanie W: Created page with "You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--Zombies Don't Eat Vegans ([[User talk:Zombies..."

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Created page with "You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--Zombies Don't Eat Vegans ([[User talk:Zombies..."

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You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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	I would actually like to see his filmography and awards in an easy list. This will help other students find his other films. The article has a lot of interesting information though [[User:Linksys\|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys\|talk]]) 05:42, 16 April 2013 (CEST)		I would actually like to see his filmography and awards in an easy list. This will help other students find his other films. The article has a lot of interesting information though [[User:Linksys\|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys\|talk]]) 05:42, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
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		+	Dear Melanie, This is pretty good, could just be a little bit longer and more than one journal article cited as a source. Best, --[[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 04:45, 22 April 2013 (CEST)

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	I see a lot of information, but no citations (except for the pictures). The article was supposed to be in first person too. For references, I only see one listed. It would be good to have at least 2 references (he is a famous director; there is certain to be more than one source of info on him - for example, check out the books we use in class). In short, it's not bad for a rough draft.<br/>		I see a lot of information, but no citations (except for the pictures). The article was supposed to be in first person too. For references, I only see one listed. It would be good to have at least 2 references (he is a famous director; there is certain to be more than one source of info on him - for example, check out the books we use in class). In short, it's not bad for a rough draft.<br/>
	Also, there is an article from last year's class about Zhang Yimou. According to the instructions for this assignment, if there was an existing article, we were supposed to revise and add to it - not create a new article. I know it isn't easy to start with another person's material, but that was part of the assignment. Maybe it's not to late to fix this. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 03:56, 16 April 2013 (CEST)		Also, there is an article from last year's class about Zhang Yimou. According to the instructions for this assignment, if there was an existing article, we were supposed to revise and add to it - not create a new article. I know it isn't easy to start with another person's material, but that was part of the assignment. Maybe it's not to late to fix this. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 03:56, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
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		+	I would actually like to see his filmography and awards in an easy list. This will help other students find his other films. The article has a lot of interesting information though [[User:Linksys\|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys\|talk]]) 05:42, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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	You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)		You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)

−	I see a lot of information, but no citations (except for the pictures). The article was supposed to be in first person too. For references, I only see one listed. It would be good to have at least 2 references (he is a famous director; there is certain to be more than one source of info on him - for example, check out the books we use in class). In short, it's not bad for a rough draft. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 03:56, 16 April 2013 (CEST)	+	I see a lot of information, but no citations (except for the pictures). The article was supposed to be in first person too. For references, I only see one listed. It would be good to have at least 2 references (he is a famous director; there is certain to be more than one source of info on him - for example, check out the books we use in class). In short, it's not bad for a rough draft.<br/>
		+	Also, there is an article from last year's class about Zhang Yimou. According to the instructions for this assignment, if there was an existing article, we were supposed to revise and add to it - not create a new article. I know it isn't easy to start with another person's material, but that was part of the assignment. Maybe it's not to late to fix this. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 03:56, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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	You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)		You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)

−	I see a lot of information, but no citations (except for the pictures). The article was supposed to be in first person too. For references, I only see one listed. It would be good to have at least 2 references (he is a famous director; there is certain to be more than one source of info on him - for example, check out the books we use in class). In short, it's not bad for a rough draft.[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 03:56, 16 April 2013 (CEST)	+	I see a lot of information, but no citations (except for the pictures). The article was supposed to be in first person too. For references, I only see one listed. It would be good to have at least 2 references (he is a famous director; there is certain to be more than one source of info on him - for example, check out the books we use in class). In short, it's not bad for a rough draft. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 03:56, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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	You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)		You have some good info. Perhaps expand more on his movies, and maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 1 March 2013 (CET)
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		+	I see a lot of information, but no citations (except for the pictures). The article was supposed to be in first person too. For references, I only see one listed. It would be good to have at least 2 references (he is a famous director; there is certain to be more than one source of info on him - for example, check out the books we use in class). In short, it's not bad for a rough draft.[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 03:56, 16 April 2013 (CEST)