Talk:6th century Literature in the south - Revision history

Root at 23:17, 4 March 2013

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Ignatius J Reilly: /* Comments for 2013 */

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Comments for 2013

Joshua B. at 18:34, 1 March 2013

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Samantha S at 23:04, 28 February 2013

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TaraDFroisland at 23:47, 27 February 2013

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A Nonny Mouse: Created page with "Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important wor..."

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Created page with "Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important wor..."

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Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important works of that time. Also provide a picture or two. Try and find some stuff from the time period that will really wow the class. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 00:21, 28 February 2013 (CET)

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		+	Dear Matt, I fixed a broken picture description. This is more or less a summary of the required reading of that day. Please do not only indicate the page numbers, but also which book they refer to (you mention 2 books, I know that it is from the Cambridge History, but the reader does not know this). Also, please give better image references, you can read . Altogether it is still too short for a mid term paper, like the presentation was. It would be good to add some judgment, comments, putting into context, comparison etc. from your perspective in a separate section. Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 00:17, 5 March 2013 (CET)
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	Matt! The information is interesting. I would suggest adding more information though. The second paragraph particularly felt like a list rather than an actual paragraph so I would suggest using bullet points when you list information that way. Also the article is rather short so I wouls also suggest adding more information so the article is more complete. [[User:Samantha S\|Samantha S]] ([[User talk:Samantha S\|talk]]) 00:04, 1 March 2013 (CET)		Matt! The information is interesting. I would suggest adding more information though. The second paragraph particularly felt like a list rather than an actual paragraph so I would suggest using bullet points when you list information that way. Also the article is rather short so I wouls also suggest adding more information so the article is more complete. [[User:Samantha S\|Samantha S]] ([[User talk:Samantha S\|talk]]) 00:04, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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	Matt, the information here is great. I would like to see you expound a bit more of the influential people and why they are so important. A bit more detail would be great along with some pictures to help illustrate the story and topic. --[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 19:34, 1 March 2013 (CET)		Matt, the information here is great. I would like to see you expound a bit more of the influential people and why they are so important. A bit more detail would be great along with some pictures to help illustrate the story and topic. --[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 19:34, 1 March 2013 (CET)
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		+	Mat- Fix the few broken links, as stated above. Maybe show us the actual text of some of the "Important Works" you've mentioned? [[User:Ignatius J Reilly\|Ignatius J Reilly]] ([[User talk:Ignatius J Reilly\|talk]]) 22:48, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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	Mat- Some images would be nice so that the reader can get a better feel of whats going on. I think it would also be nice to know a little more about the prominent people of the time and maybe examples of their works. You also have a couple broken links in the page, but those are easy to fix.--[[User:TaraDFroisland\|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland\|talk]]) 00:47, 28 February 2013 (CET)		Mat- Some images would be nice so that the reader can get a better feel of whats going on. I think it would also be nice to know a little more about the prominent people of the time and maybe examples of their works. You also have a couple broken links in the page, but those are easy to fix.--[[User:TaraDFroisland\|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland\|talk]]) 00:47, 28 February 2013 (CET)
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		+	Matt, the information here is great. I would like to see you expound a bit more of the influential people and why they are so important. A bit more detail would be great along with some pictures to help illustrate the story and topic. --[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 19:34, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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 ==Comments for 2013==
 Matt,  You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects.  I want to know more about all of them.  Give more quotes and poems of the important works of that time.  Also provide a picture or two.  Try and find some stuff from the time period that will really wow the class. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 00:21, 28 February 2013 (CET)
 Mat- Some images would be nice so that the reader can get a better feel of whats going on. I think it would also be nice to know a little more about the prominent people of the time and maybe examples of their works. You also have a couple broken links in the page, but those are easy to fix.--[[User:TaraDFroisland|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland|talk]]) 00:47, 28 February 2013 (CET)

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	Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important works of that time. Also provide a picture or two. Try and find some stuff from the time period that will really wow the class. [[User:A Nonny Mouse\|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse\|talk]]) 00:21, 28 February 2013 (CET)		Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important works of that time. Also provide a picture or two. Try and find some stuff from the time period that will really wow the class. [[User:A Nonny Mouse\|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse\|talk]]) 00:21, 28 February 2013 (CET)
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		+	Mat- Some images would be nice so that the reader can get a better feel of whats going on. I think it would also be nice to know a little more about the prominent people of the time and maybe examples of their works. You also have a couple broken links in the page, but those are easy to fix.--[[User:TaraDFroisland\|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland\|talk]]) 00:47, 28 February 2013 (CET)