Dekeo at 06:49, 2 March 2013

2013-03-02T06:49:11Z

Root: Created page with "Dear Jenessa, please start by pasting a description of the company and their China relation. Please also add notes from the speaker's presentation. The final version of the ..."

2013-02-25T13:16:17Z

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Dear Jenessa,

please start by pasting a description of the company and their China relation. Please also add notes from the speaker's presentation. The final version of the article should be a few screen pages. You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures like the announcement poster, fotos from the presentation, company logo, company fotos or product fotos.

If you have anything from academic sources to add, please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition!

Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 14:16, 25 February 2013 (CET)

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		+	Great job! I'd suggest that you give it another proof reading though. Some of the sentences are a little awkward and I don't think that they say exactly what you meant them to say.
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		+	Also, I'd suggest that you start the article with the words on the left side (pictures on the right). Westerners are used to reading from left to right and the article seems a little unbalanced when you start right off on the right side.--[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 07:49, 2 March 2013 (CET)

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Dekeo at 06:49, 2 March 2013

Root: Created page with "Dear Jenessa, please start by pasting a description of the company and their China relation. Please also add notes from the speaker's presentation. The final version of the ..."