Talk:Farewell My Concubine - Revision history

Licia K at 00:18, 17 April 2013

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Linksys at 03:39, 16 April 2013

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Licia K at 02:49, 16 April 2013

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Licia K at 02:48, 16 April 2013

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Dekeo at 02:44, 16 April 2013

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Dekeo at 02:41, 16 April 2013

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Licia K at 01:47, 16 April 2013

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Melanie W: /* New comments in 2013 */

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New comments in 2013

Dekeo at 06:06, 2 March 2013

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Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth at 21:29, 1 March 2013

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	Use bullet points to organize lists (like your quotes section) this will help clean up those sections and make them easily readable. Otherwise looks good! I like the personal commentary. [[User:Linksys\|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys\|talk]]) 05:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST)		Use bullet points to organize lists (like your quotes section) this will help clean up those sections and make them easily readable. Otherwise looks good! I like the personal commentary. [[User:Linksys\|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys\|talk]]) 05:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
		+	:Good idea! I was wondering how I could clean that section up - Thanks! [[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K\|talk]]) 02:18, 17 April 2013 (CEST)

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	Much better than the list of quotes you first pasted on here! Still a little skimpy though - you really could use a little more information in the separate sections. Perhaps you could find some more info if you check out the class texts. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 04:41, 16 April 2013 (CEST)		Much better than the list of quotes you first pasted on here! Still a little skimpy though - you really could use a little more information in the separate sections. Perhaps you could find some more info if you check out the class texts. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 04:41, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
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		+	Use bullet points to organize lists (like your quotes section) this will help clean up those sections and make them easily readable. Otherwise looks good! I like the personal commentary. [[User:Linksys\|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys\|talk]]) 05:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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 You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)
-:I looked and looked, but I couldn't find more pictures that weren't copyrighted. Too bad I couldn't just run out with my camera and take some![[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 04:48, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
+:I looked and looked, but I couldn't find more pictures that weren't copyrighted. Too bad I couldn't just run out with my camera and take some! [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 04:48, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
 Well, here it is (the finished product). Hope you like it. [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 03:47, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
 Much better than the list of quotes you first pasted on here! Still a little skimpy though - you really could use a little more information in the separate sections. Perhaps you could find some more info if you check out the class texts. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo|talk]]) 04:41, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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 You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)
-:I looked and looked, but I couldn't find more pictures that weren't copyrighted. Too bad I couldn't just run out with my camera and take some!
+:I looked and looked, but I couldn't find more pictures that weren't copyrighted. Too bad I couldn't just run out with my camera and take some![[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 04:48, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
 Well, here it is (the finished product). Hope you like it. [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 03:47, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
 Much better than the list of quotes you first pasted on here! Still a little skimpy though - you really could use a little more information in the separate sections. Perhaps you could find some more info if you check out the class texts. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo|talk]]) 04:41, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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 You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)
-==I looked and looked, but I couldn't find more pictures that weren't copyrighted. Too bad I couldn't just run out with my camera and take some!
+:I looked and looked, but I couldn't find more pictures that weren't copyrighted. Too bad I couldn't just run out with my camera and take some!
 Well, here it is (the finished product). Hope you like it. [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 03:47, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
 Much better than the list of quotes you first pasted on here! Still a little skimpy though - you really could use a little more information in the separate sections. Perhaps you could find some more info if you check out the class texts. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo|talk]]) 04:41, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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	You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)		You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)
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		+	==I looked and looked, but I couldn't find more pictures that weren't copyrighted. Too bad I couldn't just run out with my camera and take some!

	Well, here it is (the finished product). Hope you like it. [[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K\|talk]]) 03:47, 16 April 2013 (CEST)		Well, here it is (the finished product). Hope you like it. [[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K\|talk]]) 03:47, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
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		+	Much better than the list of quotes you first pasted on here! Still a little skimpy though - you really could use a little more information in the separate sections. Perhaps you could find some more info if you check out the class texts. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 04:41, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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	You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)		You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)
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		+	Well, here it is (the finished product). Hope you like it. [[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K\|talk]]) 03:47, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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	Humm...needs some work, although I remember that you said you were working on the Wong Kar-wai article for the midterm, you still need to flesh this one out. I recognize the quotes from the movie, but you really should describe the scenes when they are said, and explain why you chose these particular quotes (as opposed to any others).		Humm...needs some work, although I remember that you said you were working on the Wong Kar-wai article for the midterm, you still need to flesh this one out. I recognize the quotes from the movie, but you really should describe the scenes when they are said, and explain why you chose these particular quotes (as opposed to any others).
	Good start.--[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 07:06, 2 March 2013 (CET)		Good start.--[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 07:06, 2 March 2013 (CET)
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		+	You have some good information here. Could use a bit more in the bodies though. And maybe add a few more pictures.--[[User:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|Zombies Don't Eat Vegans]] ([[User talk:Zombies Don't Eat Vegans\|talk]]) 01:42, 15 April 2013 (CET)

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	Good quotes, although you should point how who actually said them. Now say more about the film. --[[User:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth\|Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth]] ([[User talk:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth\|talk]]) 22:28, 1 March 2013 (CET)		Good quotes, although you should point how who actually said them. Now say more about the film. --[[User:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth\|Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth]] ([[User talk:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth\|talk]]) 22:28, 1 March 2013 (CET)
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		+	Humm...needs some work, although I remember that you said you were working on the Wong Kar-wai article for the midterm, you still need to flesh this one out. I recognize the quotes from the movie, but you really should describe the scenes when they are said, and explain why you chose these particular quotes (as opposed to any others).
		+	Good start.--[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo\|talk]]) 07:06, 2 March 2013 (CET)

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	This is a good beginning! Perhaps you could add how it was received in China as well as the United States. --[[User:Linksys\|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys\|talk]]) 07:59, 1 March 2013 (CET)		This is a good beginning! Perhaps you could add how it was received in China as well as the United States. --[[User:Linksys\|Linksys]] ([[User talk:Linksys\|talk]]) 07:59, 1 March 2013 (CET)

−	Good quotes. Now say more about the film. --[[User:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth\|Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth]] ([[User talk:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth\|talk]]) 22:28, 1 March 2013 (CET)	+	Good quotes, although you should point how who actually said them. Now say more about the film. --[[User:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth\|Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth]] ([[User talk:Professor Wiskers McMeowmouth\|talk]]) 22:28, 1 March 2013 (CET)