Talk:Guo Moruo (1892 -1978) - Revision history

Mark at 07:03, 10 June 2016

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Root at 12:25, 23 October 2012

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Root at 11:53, 23 October 2012

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Root at 11:50, 23 October 2012

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Dekeo at 20:15, 12 October 2012

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Dekeo at 19:58, 12 October 2012

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Foot at 19:53, 10 October 2012

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Pips at 17:36, 9 October 2012

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Mingemperor at 17:23, 9 October 2012

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Ellafitzgerald: Created page with 'Your first section is looking good. ~~~~'

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Created page with 'Your first section is looking good. ~~~~'

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Your first section is looking good. [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:33, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

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	* Adding more about his fame as a translator of Goethe's "Sorrows of the Young Werther" as well as of his founding and work in the "Creation Society". I understand that you complained that your two books did not explain the Creation Society, but you easily find information about it on the web.		* Adding more about his fame as a translator of Goethe's "Sorrows of the Young Werther" as well as of his founding and work in the "Creation Society". I understand that you complained that your two books did not explain the Creation Society, but you easily find information about it on the web.
	Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] 11:50, 23 October 2012 (UTC)		Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] 11:50, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	The motivation part can be divided into several specific parts.--[[User:Mark\|Mark]] ([[User talk:Mark\|talk]]) 07:03, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

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 You have presented a lot of information, but it would be good for you to check the writing. The punctuation and grammar mistakes distract the reader from the content- instead of concentrating on what you say, it becomes too easy to concentrate on the mistakes instead. For example, you frequently change tenses ("he studies" instead of "he studied"- "they reach out" instead of "they reached out" etc.). Remember, a nation's name should always be capitalized ("Japan" not "japan" and "China" not "china")- you should check for proper capitalization and punctuation. It might help to print this out and look at it that way (or, perhaps, to have a friend read it to check for grammar and punctuation mistakes). When you say "as follows" you should use a colon (:) before you start with the list. It was very interesting- please don't misunderstand me about that. I would love to re-read this article after you get it cleaned up.[[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 20:15, 12 October 2012 (UTC)
-Dear Matt, looks generally good. Good comments of the peers. You can improve your paper by
+Dear David, looks generally good. Good comments of the peers. You can improve your paper by
 * Adding references to the text passages, referring to the two books you used.
 * Adding more about his fame as a translator of Goethe's "Sorrows of the Young Werther" as well as of his founding and work in the "Creation Society". I understand that you complained that your two books did not explain the Creation Society, but you easily find information about it on the web.
 Best, [[User:Root|Root]] 11:50, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

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 Dear Matt, looks generally good. Good comments of the peers. You can improve your paper by
 * Adding references to the text passages, referring to the two books you used.
 Best, [[User:Root|Root]] 11:50, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

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	You have presented a lot of information, but it would be good for you to check the writing. The punctuation and grammar mistakes distract the reader from the content- instead of concentrating on what you say, it becomes too easy to concentrate on the mistakes instead. For example, you frequently change tenses ("he studies" instead of "he studied"- "they reach out" instead of "they reached out" etc.). Remember, a nation's name should always be capitalized ("Japan" not "japan" and "China" not "china")- you should check for proper capitalization and punctuation. It might help to print this out and look at it that way (or, perhaps, to have a friend read it to check for grammar and punctuation mistakes). When you say "as follows" you should use a colon (:) before you start with the list. It was very interesting- please don't misunderstand me about that. I would love to re-read this article after you get it cleaned up.[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] 20:15, 12 October 2012 (UTC)		You have presented a lot of information, but it would be good for you to check the writing. The punctuation and grammar mistakes distract the reader from the content- instead of concentrating on what you say, it becomes too easy to concentrate on the mistakes instead. For example, you frequently change tenses ("he studies" instead of "he studied"- "they reach out" instead of "they reached out" etc.). Remember, a nation's name should always be capitalized ("Japan" not "japan" and "China" not "china")- you should check for proper capitalization and punctuation. It might help to print this out and look at it that way (or, perhaps, to have a friend read it to check for grammar and punctuation mistakes). When you say "as follows" you should use a colon (:) before you start with the list. It was very interesting- please don't misunderstand me about that. I would love to re-read this article after you get it cleaned up.[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] 20:15, 12 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Dear Matt, looks generally good. Good comments of the peers. You can improve your paper by
		+	* Adding references to the text passages, referring to the two books you used.
		+	Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] 11:50, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

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	I enjoyed your presentation and I thought it was well prepared. Reddragon		I enjoyed your presentation and I thought it was well prepared. Reddragon
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		+	You have presented a lot of information, but it would be good for you to check the writing. The punctuation and grammar mistakes distract the reader from the content- instead of concentrating on what you say, it becomes too easy to concentrate on the mistakes instead. For example, you frequently change tenses ("he studies" instead of "he studied"- "they reach out" instead of "they reached out" etc.). Remember, a nation's name should always be capitalized ("Japan" not "japan" and "China" not "china")- you should check for proper capitalization and punctuation. It might help to print this out and look at it that way (or, perhaps, to have a friend read it to check for grammar and punctuation mistakes). When you say "as follows" you should use a colon (:) before you start with the list. It was very interesting- please don't misunderstand me about that. I would love to re-read this article after you get it cleaned up.[[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] 20:15, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

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	I think the proper changes were made, and I enjoyed the article. --[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 19:53, 10 October 2012 (UTC)		I think the proper changes were made, and I enjoyed the article. --[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 19:53, 10 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I enjoyed your presentation and I thought it was well prepared. Reddragon

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	It looks good but the first thing I noticed was the picture of the Madman's diary by Lu Xun. Then of course I noticed you copied quite a bit.[[User:Pips\|Pips]] 17:36, 9 October 2012 (UTC)		It looks good but the first thing I noticed was the picture of the Madman's diary by Lu Xun. Then of course I noticed you copied quite a bit.[[User:Pips\|Pips]] 17:36, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I think the proper changes were made, and I enjoyed the article. --[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 19:53, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

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	At first it looks great, then I noticed you copied the entire Motivations section from the Liu Xun article! And you thought we wouldn't notice? Sorry to be so blunt, but you've got some revising to do. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 17:23, 9 October 2012 (UTC)		At first it looks great, then I noticed you copied the entire Motivations section from the Liu Xun article! And you thought we wouldn't notice? Sorry to be so blunt, but you've got some revising to do. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 17:23, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	It looks good but the first thing I noticed was the picture of the Madman's diary by Lu Xun. Then of course I noticed you copied quite a bit.[[User:Pips\|Pips]] 17:36, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

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	Your first section is looking good. [[User:Ellafitzgerald\|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:33, 9 October 2012 (UTC)		Your first section is looking good. [[User:Ellafitzgerald\|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:33, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	At first it looks great, then I noticed you copied the entire Motivations section from the Liu Xun article! And you thought we wouldn't notice? Sorry to be so blunt, but you've got some revising to do. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 17:23, 9 October 2012 (UTC)