Talk:Han Feizi - Revision history

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Root: Created page with "=New comments in 2013= Dear Raleigh, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version ..."

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Dear Raleigh, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 13:33, 25 February 2013 (CET)

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 I think adding some pictures could help, and adding some more text. [[User:Leo1299|Leo1299]] ([[User talk:Leo1299|talk]]) 06:44, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
-==There does not seem to be much at all about Han Feizi's life except for the Legalism teachings. Do we know anything about him?[[User:Anonymous5|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5|talk]]) 21:20, 27 February 2013 (CET)==
+There does not seem to be much at all about Han Feizi's life except for the Legalism teachings. Do we know anything about him?[[User:Anonymous5|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5|talk]]) 21:20, 27 February 2013 (CET)
 Change it to the first person like you did on your powerpoint presentation. That alone should give you a significant boost to your content. I agree that you need to add more about the individual.[[User:Oprah wind fury| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)

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	+	Dear Raleigh, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 13:33, 25 February 2013 (CET)

	+	Add some pictures and more text for each section. Each section is pretty bare at this point.[[User:Oprah wind fury\| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 01:57, 28 February 2013 (MST)
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	+	I think adding some pictures could help, and adding some more text. [[User:Leo1299\|Leo1299]] ([[User talk:Leo1299\|talk]]) 06:44, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
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	+	==There does not seem to be much at all about Han Feizi's life except for the Legalism teachings. Do we know anything about him?[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:20, 27 February 2013 (CET)==
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	+	Change it to the first person like you did on your powerpoint presentation. That alone should give you a significant boost to your content. I agree that you need to add more about the individual.[[User:Oprah wind fury\| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)

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−	Dear Raleigh, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 13:33, 25 February 2013 (CET)

−	==There does not seem to be much at all about Han Feizi's life except for the Legalism teachings. Do we know anything about him?[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:20, 27 February 2013 (CET)==
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−	Change it to the first person like you did on your powerpoint presentation. That alone should give you a significant boost to your content. I agree that you need to add more about the individual.[[User:Oprah wind fury\| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)

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	==There does not seem to be much at all about Han Feizi's life except for the Legalism teachings. Do we know anything about him?[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:20, 27 February 2013 (CET)==		==There does not seem to be much at all about Han Feizi's life except for the Legalism teachings. Do we know anything about him?[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:20, 27 February 2013 (CET)==
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		+	Change it to the first person like you did on your powerpoint presentation. That alone should give you a significant boost to your content. I agree that you need to add more about the individual.[[User:Oprah wind fury\| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)

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	Dear Raleigh, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 13:33, 25 February 2013 (CET)		Dear Raleigh, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 13:33, 25 February 2013 (CET)
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		+	==There does not seem to be much at all about Han Feizi's life except for the Legalism teachings. Do we know anything about him?[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:20, 27 February 2013 (CET)==