Talk:Ouyang Xiu - Revision history

Licia K at 07:15, 5 March 2012

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Comment 6

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 I really like the style, it is very comforting and nice. I think you need to length some segments. You said you'll talk about how you were a writer and literary critic but that didn't really develop well. There is also a broken picture, I'm sure you'll fix that in no time. Besides that I'm really liking how its going.
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-: THanks for the vote of confidence, and the note about the picture. I'm still working on this. I'm afraid it is taking a lot longer than I expected.[[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 07:14, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
+: Thanks for the vote of confidence, and the note about the picture. I'm still working on this. I'm afraid it is taking a lot longer than I expected.[[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 07:14, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
 Instead of a simple list of facts, I think your paper should read more like an essay, with full sentences and paragraphs. [[User:Name|Name]] 07:51, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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 I really like the style, it is very comforting and nice. I think you need to length some segments. You said you'll talk about how you were a writer and literary critic but that didn't really develop well. There is also a broken picture, I'm sure you'll fix that in no time. Besides that I'm really liking how its going.
 --[[User:Checksum|Checksum]] 03:34, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
 Instead of a simple list of facts, I think your paper should read more like an essay, with full sentences and paragraphs. [[User:Name|Name]] 07:51, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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		+	I'm Sorry Professor, but, I'm afraid there is no way I'll have this finished by midnight. I've saved my most recent work and I'll keep working on both my papers until they are done. I'll take whatever late penalty you decide is fair.[[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] 07:12, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
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 I added a references tab so you can get started :)!
 == Comment 6==
 Nice work so far. It would be nice to have some more pictures~ Also, one of the lines of the poem is formatted weirdly, maybe fix that? --[[User:Whatisthis|Whatisthis]] 03:54, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
 : I'm still working on this. Thanks for the heads up.[[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 07:08, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Nice work so far. It would be nice to have some more pictures~ Also, one of the lines of the poem is formatted weirdly, maybe fix that? --[[User:Whatisthis\|Whatisthis]] 03:54, 5 March 2012 (UTC)		Nice work so far. It would be nice to have some more pictures~ Also, one of the lines of the poem is formatted weirdly, maybe fix that? --[[User:Whatisthis\|Whatisthis]] 03:54, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
		+	: I'm still working on this. Thanks for the heads up.[[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] 07:08, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

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−	1. Licia, can you tell me what page in the textbook it says that Su Shi liked to write about manly things? Do you remember it saying that? It wasn't in the first section labeled Su Shi, but in a section afterwards I think.
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−	~~2. Can you find where it says that Su Shi argued to keep one of Wang Anshi's reforms?~~
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−	3. Is there a simple description of Su Shi's writing style? I want to say that he writes mainly autobiographically and also looks outside instead of just introspectively, but my internet souces aren't helping me too much on this.
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−	If you can find me any of these things, I would greatly appreciate it. And Professor Woesler should give you 100% for helping others. ;) Thanks! [[User:Alexis Sagen\|Alexis Sagen]] 18:48, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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	anyway like it allot. If you want you can have more picture but i like the airy look.		anyway like it allot. If you want you can have more picture but i like the airy look.
	also add a works cited or references at the bottom i can't see any		also add a works cited or references at the bottom i can't see any
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		+	Nice work so far. It would be nice to have some more pictures~ Also, one of the lines of the poem is formatted weirdly, maybe fix that? --[[User:Whatisthis\|Whatisthis]] 03:54, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

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	maybe add in a little section that you argue something with, i'm not sure what or maybe have a section by you that you analyze one of his peoem and support your claims, which i think is an argument.		maybe add in a little section that you argue something with, i'm not sure what or maybe have a section by you that you analyze one of his peoem and support your claims, which i think is an argument.
	anyway like it allot. If you want you can have more picture but i like the airy look.		anyway like it allot. If you want you can have more picture but i like the airy look.
		+	also add a works cited or references at the bottom i can't see any

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		+	I really like the style, it is very comforting and nice. I think you need to length some segments. You said you'll talk about how you were a writer and literary critic but that didn't really develop well. There is also a broken picture, I'm sure you'll fix that in no time. Besides that I'm really liking how its going.
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	Instead of a simple list of facts, I think your paper should read more like an essay, with full sentences and paragraphs. [[User:Name\|Name]] 07:51, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Instead of a simple list of facts, I think your paper should read more like an essay, with full sentences and paragraphs. [[User:Name\|Name]] 07:51, 4 March 2012 (UTC)