Talk:Philosophical Discourses - Revision history

TaraDFroisland: /* New comments in 2013 */

2013-04-16T14:45:20Z

New comments in 2013

Joshua B. at 18:29, 1 March 2013

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Samantha S at 02:27, 1 March 2013

2013-03-01T02:27:00Z

A Nonny Mouse: /* New comments in 2013 */

2013-02-27T23:38:45Z

New comments in 2013

Root: Created page with "=New comments in 2013= Dear Tara, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version sho..."

2013-02-25T12:45:28Z

Created page with "=New comments in 2013= Dear Tara, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version sho..."

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Dear Tara, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 13:45, 25 February 2013 (CET)

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	My only problem with this article is its empty.....maybe you have not uploaded it yet. If so, keep up the great work.--[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 19:29, 1 March 2013 (CET)		My only problem with this article is its empty.....maybe you have not uploaded it yet. If so, keep up the great work.--[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 19:29, 1 March 2013 (CET)
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		+	I did my midterm on Confucius, so I do not know why I am listed here. I just found this today. Please see [[Confucius]]for my midterm work. Thank you, Tara. --[[User:TaraDFroisland\|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland\|talk]]) 16:45, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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	When I tried to look at it just barely nothing was loading so if you have not put any information up yet a good start would be to do that... [[User:A Nonny Mouse\|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse\|talk]]) 00:38, 28 February 2013 (CET)		When I tried to look at it just barely nothing was loading so if you have not put any information up yet a good start would be to do that... [[User:A Nonny Mouse\|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse\|talk]]) 00:38, 28 February 2013 (CET)
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		+	My only problem with this article is its empty.....maybe you have not uploaded it yet. If so, keep up the great work.--[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 19:29, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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	Dear Tara, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 13:45, 25 February 2013 (CET)		Dear Tara, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 13:45, 25 February 2013 (CET)
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		+	When I tried to look at it just barely nothing was loading so if you have not put any information up yet a good start would be to do that... [[User:A Nonny Mouse\|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse\|talk]]) 00:38, 28 February 2013 (CET)

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 =New comments in 2013=
 Dear Tara, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You need not only to describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 13:45, 25 February 2013 (CET)
 When I tried to look at it just barely nothing was loading so if you have not put any information up yet a good start would be to do that... [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 00:38, 28 February 2013 (CET)