Talk:Stephen Chow - Revision history

Xiaoyi at 02:17, 5 March 2012

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Xiaoyi at 01:06, 5 March 2012

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Xiaoyi at 01:00, 5 March 2012

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Zhongwen dianying at 23:11, 4 March 2012

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Zhongwen dianying at 23:10, 4 March 2012

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CharlotteCharles at 22:28, 4 March 2012

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CharlotteCharles at 22:21, 4 March 2012

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CharlotteCharles at 22:20, 4 March 2012

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CharlotteCharles at 22:20, 4 March 2012

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Jon at 19:34, 4 March 2012

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 You filmography seems to be very long, almost too much for the page. Perhaps when you add more content it will look more balanced but maybe trim the list down to a specific category of his films or figure out how to make it do columns? --[[User:Ming Ming|Ming Ming]] 03:22, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
-It seems like he needs to keep the whole filmography though, if that's how many movies Chow has made.  It doesn't seem fair to Chow to leave some out... I think this is looking great!  The only thing I would look at is your references.  I think we decided in class to do it MLA style, so with paranthetical citations.  For example, (Xu) instead of the dashes like you currently have.  Also, be sure to cite where you found the filmography (imdb probably--[[User:Xiaoyi|Xiaoyi]] 01:06, 5 March 2012 (UTC)--[[User:Xiaoyi|Xiaoyi]] 01:06, 5 March 2012 (UTC), but you want to make sure that it shows on the filmography where you got it, not just at the bottom) and personal info section.  Also I think with the new standard for MLA you don't need page numbers on your works cited page (which ends up being the references at the bottom for us).  I would double check with the Purdue site, they are usually the most up to date with that stuff.  Other than that, I think this is looking fantastic!  Great job! :)  [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
+It seems like he needs to keep the whole filmography though, if that's how many movies Chow has made.  It doesn't seem fair to Chow to leave some out... I think this is looking great!  The only thing I would look at is your references.  I think we decided in class to do it MLA style, so with paranthetical citations.  For example, (Xu) instead of the dashes like you currently have.  Also, be sure to cite where you found the filmography (imdb probably--- but you want to make sure that it shows on the filmography where you got it, not just at the bottom) and personal info section.  Also I think with theY new standard for MLA you don't need page numbers on your works cited page (which ends up being the references at the bottom for us).  I would double check with the Purdue site, they are usually the most up to date with that stuff.  Other than that, I think this is looking fantastic!  Great job! :)  [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
 I took out nearly 20 films as is. Mostly cameo appearances. But the list of movies included are all on top lists when discussing Chow's films.  --Jon

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 You filmography seems to be very long, almost too much for the page. Perhaps when you add more content it will look more balanced but maybe trim the list down to a specific category of his films or figure out how to make it do columns? --[[User:Ming Ming|Ming Ming]] 03:22, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
-It seems like he needs to keep the whole filmography though, if that's how many movies Chow has made.  It doesn't seem fair to Chow to leave some out... I think this is looking great!  The only thing I would look at is your references.  I think we decided in class to do it MLA style, so with paranthetical citations.  For example, (Xu) instead of the dashes like you currently have.  Also, be sure to cite where you found the filmography (imdb probably, but you want to make sure that it shows on the filmography where you got it, not just at the bottom) and personal info section.  Also I think with the new standard for MLA you don't need page numbers on your works cited page (which ends up being the references at the bottom for us).  I would double check with the Purdue site, they are usually the most up to date with that stuff.  Other than that, I think this is looking fantastic!  Great job! :)  [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
+It seems like he needs to keep the whole filmography though, if that's how many movies Chow has made.  It doesn't seem fair to Chow to leave some out... I think this is looking great!  The only thing I would look at is your references.  I think we decided in class to do it MLA style, so with paranthetical citations.  For example, (Xu) instead of the dashes like you currently have.  Also, be sure to cite where you found the filmography (imdb probably--[[User:Xiaoyi|Xiaoyi]] 01:06, 5 March 2012 (UTC)--[[User:Xiaoyi|Xiaoyi]] 01:06, 5 March 2012 (UTC), but you want to make sure that it shows on the filmography where you got it, not just at the bottom) and personal info section.  Also I think with the new standard for MLA you don't need page numbers on your works cited page (which ends up being the references at the bottom for us).  I would double check with the Purdue site, they are usually the most up to date with that stuff.  Other than that, I think this is looking fantastic!  Great job! :)  [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:35, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
 I took out nearly 20 films as is. Mostly cameo appearances. But the list of movies included are all on top lists when discussing Chow's films.  --Jon
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 Hey just a simple reminder not to forget to ''italicize'' your "Print" source in your References section. They have a button for it at the top of the text box.  [[User:Zhongwen dianying|Zhongwen dianying]] 23:11, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
-I like all of the info you have about Stephen Chow. You may want to make a claim and support it with the info you have learned about this director. How has he impacted the film world? Or society in general?
+I like all of the info you have about Stephen Chow. You may want to make a claim and support it with the info you have learned about this director. How has he impacted the film world? Or society in general? I'm also looking forward to read what you write about your thoughts on film.--[[User:Xiaoyi|Xiaoyi]] 01:06, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Hey just a simple reminder not to forget to ''italicize'' your "Print" source in your References section. They have a button for it at the top of the text box. [[User:Zhongwen dianying\|Zhongwen dianying]] 23:11, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Hey just a simple reminder not to forget to ''italicize'' your "Print" source in your References section. They have a button for it at the top of the text box. [[User:Zhongwen dianying\|Zhongwen dianying]] 23:11, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I like all of the info you have about Stephen Chow. You may want to make a claim and support it with the info you have learned about this director. How has he impacted the film world? Or society in general?

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	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] and [http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=stephen+chow&l=cc&ct=0&mt=all&adv=1 here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] and [http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=stephen+chow&l=cc&ct=0&mt=all&adv=1 here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

−	Hey just a simple reminder not to forget to ''italicize'' your "Print" source in your References section. They have a button for it at the top of the text box.	+	Hey just a simple reminder not to forget to ''italicize'' your "Print" source in your References section. They have a button for it at the top of the text box. [[User:Zhongwen dianying\|Zhongwen dianying]] 23:11, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] and [http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=stephen+chow&l=cc&ct=0&mt=all&adv=1 here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] and [http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=stephen+chow&l=cc&ct=0&mt=all&adv=1 here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Hey just a simple reminder not to forget to ''italicize'' your "Print" source in your References section. They have a button for it at the top of the text box.

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	Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon		Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon

−	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)	+	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] and [http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=stephen+chow&l=cc&ct=0&mt=all&adv=1 here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon		Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon

−	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)	+	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here]. I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon		Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon

−	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch] I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)	+	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! Try [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch here] I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon		Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon
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		+	Hey Jon! I had a hard time finding pictures for mine too :\ But I think I found some pictures for you! [http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?search=stephen+chow&title=Special%3ASearch] I kind of hate open source because the pictures aren't the best, but at least here's ''something'' :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 22:20, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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	I took out nearly 20 films as is. Mostly cameo appearances. But the list of movies included are all on top lists when discussing Chow's films. --Jon		I took out nearly 20 films as is. Mostly cameo appearances. But the list of movies included are all on top lists when discussing Chow's films. --Jon

−	Also I can't find any other pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon	+	Also I can't find any other open source pictures. If I could find my picture of him I would put that up but I haven't found it yet. -- Jon