Talk:Street Angel - Revision history

Hollyspendlove at 05:35, 5 March 2012

2012-03-05T05:35:28Z

CharlotteCharles at 03:40, 4 March 2012

2012-03-04T03:40:54Z

Ming Ming: Created page with 'Will there be more content? Also, given the beauty of the movie, images would greatly help the paper. --~~~~'

2012-03-04T03:24:15Z

Created page with 'Will there be more content? Also, given the beauty of the movie, images would greatly help the paper. --~~~~'

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Will there be more content? Also, given the beauty of the movie, images would greatly help the paper. --[[User:Ming Ming|Ming Ming]] 03:24, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Hey Holly, it's looking great! I agree that pictures would be fantastic, but have been having a hard time finding good ones for mine. Are you having the same problem? I think with your parenthetical citations you don't need commas though. Just (Palmer 187). <- example. It's also looking a little funky at the bottom. You've got a parenthetical citation with no citation, plus there are weird spacing issues. Also a couple grammatical issues at the top (no spaces after commas, the skyscraper "The skyscraper, etc.) Nice work with incorporating the actual Chinese characters though! I have no idea how to do that haha! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 03:40, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Hey Holly, it's looking great! I agree that pictures would be fantastic, but have been having a hard time finding good ones for mine. Are you having the same problem? I think with your parenthetical citations you don't need commas though. Just (Palmer 187). <- example. It's also looking a little funky at the bottom. You've got a parenthetical citation with no citation, plus there are weird spacing issues. Also a couple grammatical issues at the top (no spaces after commas, the skyscraper "The skyscraper, etc.) Nice work with incorporating the actual Chinese characters though! I have no idea how to do that haha! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 03:40, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I think I was working on my wiki page about the time these comments were made. I added pictures and hopefully I fixed the funky things at the bottom and fixed the grammar issues. Thanks for the feedback and helpful comments.--[[User:Hollyspendlove\|Hollyspendlove]] 05:35, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Will there be more content? Also, given the beauty of the movie, images would greatly help the paper. --[[User:Ming Ming\|Ming Ming]] 03:24, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Will there be more content? Also, given the beauty of the movie, images would greatly help the paper. --[[User:Ming Ming\|Ming Ming]] 03:24, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Hey Holly, it's looking great! I agree that pictures would be fantastic, but have been having a hard time finding good ones for mine. Are you having the same problem? I think with your parenthetical citations you don't need commas though. Just (Palmer 187). <- example. It's also looking a little funky at the bottom. You've got a parenthetical citation with no citation, plus there are weird spacing issues. Also a couple grammatical issues at the top (no spaces after commas, the skyscraper "The skyscraper, etc.) Nice work with incorporating the actual Chinese characters though! I have no idea how to do that haha! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 03:40, 4 March 2012 (UTC)