Talk:The Warring States Period - Revision history

Root at 16:40, 4 March 2013

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Leo1299 at 01:39, 1 March 2013

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Dr who at 19:52, 28 February 2013

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Oprah wind fury at 23:14, 27 February 2013

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Oprah wind fury at 23:13, 27 February 2013

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Anonymous5: Created page with "== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track ..."

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Created page with "== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track ..."

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== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track down.[[User:Anonymous5|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5|talk]]) 21:29, 27 February 2013 (CET)

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-== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track down.[[User:Anonymous5|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5|talk]]) 21:29, 27 February 2013 (CET)
+:I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track down.[[User:Anonymous5|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5|talk]]) 21:29, 27 February 2013 (CET)
 Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. [[User:Oprah wind fury| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)
-== I like your brevity and incorporation of pictures.  It flowed well.[[User:Dr_who|Dr_who]] ([[User talk:Dr_who|talk]]) 28 February 2013
+:I like your brevity and incorporation of pictures.  It flowed well.[[User:Dr_who|Dr_who]] ([[User talk:Dr_who|talk]]) 28 February 2013
-== I like the maps that show the differences in the kingdoms. I agree it could maybe be a little longer [[User:Leo1299|Leo1299]] ([[User talk:Leo1299|talk]]) 02:39, 1 March 2013 (CET)
+:I like the maps that show the differences in the kingdoms. I agree it could maybe be a little longer [[User:Leo1299|Leo1299]] ([[User talk:Leo1299|talk]]) 02:39, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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	Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. [[User:Oprah wind fury\| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)		Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. [[User:Oprah wind fury\| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)
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	== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track down.[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:29, 27 February 2013 (CET)		== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track down.[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:29, 27 February 2013 (CET)

−	Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. User:Oprah wind fury\|Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)	+	Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. [[User:Oprah wind fury\| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)

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	== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track down.[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:29, 27 February 2013 (CET)		== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track down.[[User:Anonymous5\|Anonymous5]] ([[User talk:Anonymous5\|talk]]) 21:29, 27 February 2013 (CET)
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		+	Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. User:Oprah wind fury\|Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury\|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)