Talk:Wang Anshi - Revision history

Samantha S at 04:17, 17 April 2013

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Joshua B. at 20:15, 16 April 2013

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TaraDFroisland at 05:25, 16 April 2013

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Brandon H: Created page with "Your page looks very good. The organization is specifically very strong. The layout is interesting and the information is presented in a logical and understandable way. I espe..."

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Created page with "Your page looks very good. The organization is specifically very strong. The layout is interesting and the information is presented in a logical and understandable way. I espe..."

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Your page looks very good. The organization is specifically very strong. The layout is interesting and the information is presented in a logical and understandable way. I especially liked the author notes on the biography. I think more commentary could definitely add to the piece. Also, I think you section "What is 'Ten Thousand Word Memorial?'" could be divided into smaller categories. You can make smaller headings by putting a different number of "=" around your headings. Five "=" marks
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which can be effectively added in to strengthen an already strong page. [[User:Cappuccino|Cappuccino]] ([[User talk:Cappuccino|talk]])

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	Thought the article was awesome. Only suggestion would be to maybe split up the 10K word Memorial if possible. As I saw that, It seemed a daunting task to read it. --[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 22:15, 16 April 2013 (CEST)		Thought the article was awesome. Only suggestion would be to maybe split up the 10K word Memorial if possible. As I saw that, It seemed a daunting task to read it. --[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 22:15, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
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		+	I wrote this article of course. I tried to make the "ten thousand word memorial" italic but it wouldn't work at all. Also I was debating only putting parts of the document...I don't like the way it looks because of all the writing in one place. [[User:Samantha S\|Samantha S]] ([[User talk:Samantha S\|talk]]) 06:17, 17 April 2013 (CEST)

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	Wow thats awesome information! Agreed that subheadings could help break it up. Love how you link to external sources--[[User:TaraDFroisland\|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland\|talk]]) 07:25, 16 April 2013 (CEST).		Wow thats awesome information! Agreed that subheadings could help break it up. Love how you link to external sources--[[User:TaraDFroisland\|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland\|talk]]) 07:25, 16 April 2013 (CEST).
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		+	Thought the article was awesome. Only suggestion would be to maybe split up the 10K word Memorial if possible. As I saw that, It seemed a daunting task to read it. --[[User:Joshua B.\|Joshua B.]] ([[User talk:Joshua B.\|talk]]) 22:15, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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	If the original 10k word memorial is a copy of the original document or primary text, perhaps a way to set that apart to make it more apparent? Otherwise, well done. As stated before, nice use of pictures. [[User:Ignatius J Reilly\|Ignatius J Reilly]] ([[User talk:Ignatius J Reilly\|talk]]) 02:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST)		If the original 10k word memorial is a copy of the original document or primary text, perhaps a way to set that apart to make it more apparent? Otherwise, well done. As stated before, nice use of pictures. [[User:Ignatius J Reilly\|Ignatius J Reilly]] ([[User talk:Ignatius J Reilly\|talk]]) 02:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
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		+	Wow thats awesome information! Agreed that subheadings could help break it up. Love how you link to external sources--[[User:TaraDFroisland\|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland\|talk]]) 07:25, 16 April 2013 (CEST).

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	I agree, the section "what is ten thousand word memorial" could be more broken up with smaller headings. Your page looks good though. I also wouldn't mind reading more under the biography section. It was kind of short, but maybe it's hard to find information about him, i don't know. But nicely done! It looks great and the pictures are fun. Good choice --[[User:Chameleon\|Chameleon]] ([[User talk:Chameleon\|talk]]) 22:10, 15 April 2013 (CEST)		I agree, the section "what is ten thousand word memorial" could be more broken up with smaller headings. Your page looks good though. I also wouldn't mind reading more under the biography section. It was kind of short, but maybe it's hard to find information about him, i don't know. But nicely done! It looks great and the pictures are fun. Good choice --[[User:Chameleon\|Chameleon]] ([[User talk:Chameleon\|talk]]) 22:10, 15 April 2013 (CEST)
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		+	If the original 10k word memorial is a copy of the original document or primary text, perhaps a way to set that apart to make it more apparent? Otherwise, well done. As stated before, nice use of pictures. [[User:Ignatius J Reilly\|Ignatius J Reilly]] ([[User talk:Ignatius J Reilly\|talk]]) 02:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST)

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		+	I agree, the section "what is ten thousand word memorial" could be more broken up with smaller headings. Your page looks good though. I also wouldn't mind reading more under the biography section. It was kind of short, but maybe it's hard to find information about him, i don't know. But nicely done! It looks great and the pictures are fun. Good choice --[[User:Chameleon\|Chameleon]] ([[User talk:Chameleon\|talk]]) 22:10, 15 April 2013 (CEST)