Talk:Wong Kar Wai - Revision history

Licia K at 23:29, 17 April 2013

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	Dear Licia, it is still not long enough. For correctly indicating the sources of the images, please refer to the article on [[Qu Yuan]]. You may add some more things from your perspective, maybe in a separate section, especially how he developed, how he should be seen in comparison to the 5th generation directors from mainland China etc. [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 00:36, 5 March 2013 (CET)		Dear Licia, it is still not long enough. For correctly indicating the sources of the images, please refer to the article on [[Qu Yuan]]. You may add some more things from your perspective, maybe in a separate section, especially how he developed, how he should be seen in comparison to the 5th generation directors from mainland China etc. [[User:Root\|Root]] ([[User talk:Root\|talk]]) 00:36, 5 March 2013 (CET)
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		+	Hope this is better. [[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K\|talk]]) 01:29, 18 April 2013 (CEST)

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 Good luck! [[User:Root|Root]] 19:18, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
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 To me, this looks like a very good report Keely. Good job! I especially like the additional thoughts you added. I think it makes your  paper so much more interesting! I'm with you; I want to watch more of Wong Kar Wai's films. --[[User:Xiaoyi|Xiaoyi]] 01:26, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

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−	This is just the start. I will continue revising this article (and making it 1st person)later. I ~~did want~~ to get something on the page...-- [[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K\|talk]]) 02:20, 1 March 2013 (CET)	+	This is just the start. I will continue revising this article (and making it 1st person) later. I wanted to get something on the page...-- [[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K\|talk]]) 02:20, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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-This is just the start. I will continue revising this article later.-- [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 02:20, 1 March 2013 (CET)
+This is just the start. I will continue revising this article (and making it 1st person)later. I did want to get something on the page...-- [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K|talk]]) 02:20, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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	To me, this looks like a very good report Keely. Good job! I especially like the additional thoughts you added. I think it makes your paper so much more interesting! I'm with you; I want to watch more of Wong Kar Wai's films. --[[User:Xiaoyi\|Xiaoyi]] 01:26, 5 March 2012 (UTC)		To me, this looks like a very good report Keely. Good job! I especially like the additional thoughts you added. I think it makes your paper so much more interesting! I'm with you; I want to watch more of Wong Kar Wai's films. --[[User:Xiaoyi\|Xiaoyi]] 01:26, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
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		+	This is just the start. I will continue revising this article later.-- [[User:Licia K\|Licia K]] ([[User talk:Licia K\|talk]]) 02:20, 1 March 2013 (CET)

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	Things are looking really good. I would just make a simple change on your References part. Make sure to ''italicize'' your books and magazines (''Time Magazine World.'' and ''Chinese Films in Focus II.''). they have that button at the top of the text box. I don't think it is a big deal but i would just change it to make sure. [[User:Zhongwen dianying\|Zhongwen dianying]] 22:49, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Things are looking really good. I would just make a simple change on your References part. Make sure to ''italicize'' your books and magazines (''Time Magazine World.'' and ''Chinese Films in Focus II.''). they have that button at the top of the text box. I don't think it is a big deal but i would just change it to make sure. [[User:Zhongwen dianying\|Zhongwen dianying]] 22:49, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
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		+	To me, this looks like a very good report Keely. Good job! I especially like the additional thoughts you added. I think it makes your paper so much more interesting! I'm with you; I want to watch more of Wong Kar Wai's films. --[[User:Xiaoyi\|Xiaoyi]] 01:26, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

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	Thanks again!		Thanks again!
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		+	Things are looking really good. I would just make a simple change on your References part. Make sure to ''italicize'' your books and magazines (''Time Magazine World.'' and ''Chinese Films in Focus II.''). they have that button at the top of the text box. I don't think it is a big deal but i would just change it to make sure. [[User:Zhongwen dianying\|Zhongwen dianying]] 22:49, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

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	I've been using your page as a template for my own. Well done. -Jon		I've been using your page as a template for my own. Well done. -Jon
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	Hey Keeley, I think this looks so great! The only thing I would maybe change is that I don't think you need to use both names when crediting a source paranthetically. For example, instead of saying (Scott Tobias), I think you only need (Tobias). Everything else looks fantastic!! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 03:27, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Hey Keeley, I think this looks so great! The only thing I would maybe change is that I don't think you need to use both names when crediting a source paranthetically. For example, instead of saying (Scott Tobias), I think you only need (Tobias). Everything else looks fantastic!! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 03:27, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I've been using your page as a template for my own. Well done. -Jon

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	Thanks for the feedback! I went ahead and deleted the [4] and I tried to add a bit more to my thoughts section in regards to what I enjoyed about In the Mood for Love. --[[User:Keeley X.\|Keeley X.]] 03:19, 4 March 2012 (UTC)		Thanks for the feedback! I went ahead and deleted the [4] and I tried to add a bit more to my thoughts section in regards to what I enjoyed about In the Mood for Love. --[[User:Keeley X.\|Keeley X.]] 03:19, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Hey Keeley, I think this looks so great! The only thing I would maybe change is that I don't think you need to use both names when crediting a source paranthetically. For example, instead of saying (Scott Tobias), I think you only need (Tobias). Everything else looks fantastic!! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles\|CharlotteCharles]] 03:27, 4 March 2012 (UTC)