Talk:Xiao Hong (1911-1942) - Revision history

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It looks good! Do you have any images? [[User:Ellafitzgerald|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:32, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

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	* Photos must be assigned to their source and the kind of license must be indicated (for old photos, they are license free, for newer ones, you can only use CC licensed ones, like you can find on Commmons.Wikimedia or Flickr with CC indicated, for an example see [[Gong Li]].		* Photos must be assigned to their source and the kind of license must be indicated (for old photos, they are license free, for newer ones, you can only use CC licensed ones, like you can find on Commmons.Wikimedia or Flickr with CC indicated, for an example see [[Gong Li]].
	Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] 12:06, 23 October 2012 (UTC)		Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] 12:06, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
		+	Although the picture looks a little horrifying，I think the structure is very clear，we can make a very detailed understanding of her~ good job！

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	There was very little content, I understand the struggle to find English sources. It's too bad that her history with men had to be so bad. [[User:Random1\|Random1]] 02:03, 19 October 2012 (UTC)		There was very little content, I understand the struggle to find English sources. It's too bad that her history with men had to be so bad. [[User:Random1\|Random1]] 02:03, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Dear Philip, I second the comments above, the article is already very good, but you may consider the following for the next paper:
		+	* A little bit more contents
		+	* Please indicate each paragraph where you got the information from. It is not enough just to list the sources at the end.
		+	* Photos must be assigned to their source and the kind of license must be indicated (for old photos, they are license free, for newer ones, you can only use CC licensed ones, like you can find on Commmons.Wikimedia or Flickr with CC indicated, for an example see [[Gong Li]].
		+	Best, [[User:Root\|Root]] 12:06, 23 October 2012 (UTC)

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	Sounds like she was quite a character. There are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that you really should fix- they call the reader's attention away from the information to focus on the errors instead. Also, which parts were comment from your sources and which were your comments? I had a difficult time trying to figure that out. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] 21:35, 12 October 2012 (UTC)		Sounds like she was quite a character. There are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that you really should fix- they call the reader's attention away from the information to focus on the errors instead. Also, which parts were comment from your sources and which were your comments? I had a difficult time trying to figure that out. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] 21:35, 12 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	There was very little content, I understand the struggle to find English sources. It's too bad that her history with men had to be so bad. [[User:Random1\|Random1]] 02:03, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

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	Would like a little bit more information, but this is still very well written.--[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 19:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC)		Would like a little bit more information, but this is still very well written.--[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 19:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Sounds like she was quite a character. There are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that you really should fix- they call the reader's attention away from the information to focus on the errors instead. Also, which parts were comment from your sources and which were your comments? I had a difficult time trying to figure that out. [[User:Dekeo\|Dekeo]] 21:35, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

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	I agree it needs more images but also maybe a little bit more information.[[User:Pips\|Pips]] 17:41, 9 October 2012 (UTC)		I agree it needs more images but also maybe a little bit more information.[[User:Pips\|Pips]] 17:41, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Would like a little bit more information, but this is still very well written.--[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 19:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

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	yeah, it doesn't look too bad, but kind of lacking on pictures. Did you look on Wiki Commons or Flickr? [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 17:34, 9 October 2012 (UTC)		yeah, it doesn't look too bad, but kind of lacking on pictures. Did you look on Wiki Commons or Flickr? [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 17:34, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I agree it needs more images but also maybe a little bit more information.[[User:Pips\|Pips]] 17:41, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

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	It looks good! Do you have any images? [[User:Ellafitzgerald\|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:32, 9 October 2012 (UTC)		It looks good! Do you have any images? [[User:Ellafitzgerald\|Ellafitzgerald]] 05:32, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
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		+	yeah, it doesn't look too bad, but kind of lacking on pictures. Did you look on Wiki Commons or Flickr? [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 17:34, 9 October 2012 (UTC)