Talk:Zhang Jie (born 1937) - Revision history

Mark at 11:57, 15 June 2016

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Ericaangie at 17:37, 6 December 2012

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Ericaangie at 17:36, 6 December 2012

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Reddragon at 07:39, 5 December 2012

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Reddragon at 07:38, 5 December 2012

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Foot at 07:02, 5 December 2012

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Mingemperor at 06:54, 5 December 2012

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Mingemperor at 06:53, 5 December 2012

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Pips: Created page with 'Looks great! Very well formatted too. ~~~~'

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Created page with 'Looks great! Very well formatted too. ~~~~'

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Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

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	I have read each one of your comments. I wanted to 'thank you' for your valuable insides! I have gone and made all of the corrections you have suggested. It has been a true pleasure meeting you all, ''"Thank you for helping me to continue to become."'' Erica Angie Bazalar-Oaks		I have read each one of your comments. I wanted to 'thank you' for your valuable insides! I have gone and made all of the corrections you have suggested. It has been a true pleasure meeting you all, ''"Thank you for helping me to continue to become."'' Erica Angie Bazalar-Oaks
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		+	It's rich in context and include some life details in it which makes it more attractive. Good job!--[[User:Mark\|Mark]] ([[User talk:Mark\|talk]]) 11:57, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

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−	I have read each one of your comments. I wanted to 'thank you' for your valuable insides! I have gone and made all of the corrections you have suggested. It has been a true pleasure meeting you all''"Thank you for helping me to continue to become."'' Erica Angie Bazalar-Oaks	+	I have read each one of your comments. I wanted to 'thank you' for your valuable insides! I have gone and made all of the corrections you have suggested. It has been a true pleasure meeting you all, ''"Thank you for helping me to continue to become."'' Erica Angie Bazalar-Oaks

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	Love how much work went into the writing of this paper. It gets a little off track at times, something that can be fixed by eliminating unneccessary content not pertaining directly to Zhang Jie. All together a great display of how much work you are willing to put into your paper. Great Work--[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 07:02, 5 December 2012 (UTC)		Love how much work went into the writing of this paper. It gets a little off track at times, something that can be fixed by eliminating unneccessary content not pertaining directly to Zhang Jie. All together a great display of how much work you are willing to put into your paper. Great Work--[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 07:02, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I have read each one of your comments. I wanted to 'thank you' for your valuable insides! I have gone and made all of the corrections you have suggested. It has been a true pleasure meeting you all''"Thank you for helping me to continue to become."'' Erica Angie Bazalar-Oaks

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 Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
-I enjoyed the paper. I thought the grammar was fine. I particularly enjoy the lay out of it and the pictures. This paper helps you to know what else was going on during the time of the author. Reddragon[[User:Reddragon|Reddragon]] 07:38, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
+I enjoyed the paper. I thought the grammar was fine. I particularly enjoy the lay out of it and the pictures. This paper helps you to know what else was going on during the time of the author.[[User:Reddragon|Reddragon]] 07:38, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
 Love how much work went into the writing of this paper. It gets a little off track at times, something that can be fixed by eliminating unneccessary content not pertaining directly to Zhang Jie. All together a great display of how much work you are willing to put into your paper. Great Work--[[User:Foot|Foot]] 07:02, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

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	Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)		Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
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		+	I enjoyed the paper. I thought the grammar was fine. I particularly enjoy the lay out of it and the pictures. This paper helps you to know what else was going on during the time of the author. Reddragon[[User:Reddragon\|Reddragon]] 07:38, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

	Love how much work went into the writing of this paper. It gets a little off track at times, something that can be fixed by eliminating unneccessary content not pertaining directly to Zhang Jie. All together a great display of how much work you are willing to put into your paper. Great Work--[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 07:02, 5 December 2012 (UTC)		Love how much work went into the writing of this paper. It gets a little off track at times, something that can be fixed by eliminating unneccessary content not pertaining directly to Zhang Jie. All together a great display of how much work you are willing to put into your paper. Great Work--[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 07:02, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

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	Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)		Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Love how much work went into the writing of this paper. It gets a little off track at times, something that can be fixed by eliminating unneccessary content not pertaining directly to Zhang Jie. All together a great display of how much work you are willing to put into your paper. Great Work--[[User:Foot\|Foot]] 07:02, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

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	Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips\|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)		Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips\|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

−	Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it ~~doesn~~'~~t really apply specifically to~~ this author. But if not, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)	+	Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

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	Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips\|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)		Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips\|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
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		+	Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it doesn't really apply specifically to this author. But if not, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor\|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)