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Pei Mengjiao: /* PMJ */

2024-02-11T11:26:04Z

PMJ

Li Meilin: /* LML */

2024-02-10T20:53:27Z

LML

Tian Xiaolong: /* TXL */

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TXL

Wang Meifen: /* WMF */

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WMF

An Kairong: /* AKR */

2024-02-08T11:50:11Z

AKR

Ai Xi: /* AX */

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Jin Yue: /* JL */

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Yan Li: /* YL */

2024-02-05T18:34:44Z

Wei Yuxin: /* WYX */

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WYX

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 ==PMJ==
 一个叫大喜的胖姑娘见了他就咳嗽，直咳得脸色赤红才算罢休。大喜做活总不利索，她洗粉丝，常有一团团青白的粉丝落在冷水盆跟前。她咳着，见素走过去狠狠地踢了那团粉丝一脚。她立刻不咳了，可是又打起嗝来，两眼直盯盯地瞅着见素。见素大步从她面前跨过去，崭新的长筒胶靴发出“阔阔”的声音。姑娘们打过哈欠就懒洋洋地做起来，一下一下晃动着筛粉渣的罗子，雪白的围裙在变浓了的雾气中飘动着。粉丝房里特有的芬芳飞快地漾开来，很像是胭脂的香味儿。一个底上钻了无数洞眼的铁瓢就悬在高处，里面盛满了稀溜溜的淀粉糊糊，有人用手在上面拍打，无数条银色的粉线就漏下来。粉线跌入热气腾腾的锅里，立刻变为晶莹透亮的粉丝了。坐在高处拍打铁瓢的是一个黑汉，他刚刚醒来，呐喊一声就摇头晃脑地打起来。整个粉丝房里都是一种节奏分明的声音：“砰砰砰、砰砰砰！”
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	见素重新回到了粉丝大厂。张王氏全面接管了“洼狸大商店”。她每天定时在柜台后面坐上两个钟头，做成的买卖却与以前相同。她还偷偷往酒坛里放了橘子皮，也多少添一点冷水。余下的时间被她精心安排，除了做些家里杂事，天蒙蒙亮时还要放下一切去为四爷爷捏背。一切她都能应付自如，唯有捏背近来使她怵心。四爷爷再有两年就六十岁了，无比健壮，虎气生生。可是他毕竟肥胖起来，背肉越来越厚。捏背的人就怕背厚。张王氏为四爷爷捏了几十年背，这双捏泥老虎的手掌指法灵活，曾经给了四爷爷无限欢乐。可是她近来渐渐觉得有些力不从心了。含章是四爷爷的干女儿，张王氏常常在四爷爷屋里遇见她。有一次张王氏一边捏背，一边说今后该让含章捏背了。当时四爷爷卧在炕上，光光的上身蒙了一块白布。他听了，胖胖的身子烦躁地扭动一下，鼻子里发出“呣”的一声。张王氏从此再不敢提让含章捏背的事了。她每天从四爷爷屋里出来，又圆又红的太阳也正好升起。她直奔店里，站在柜台后面还稍微有些喘息。		见素重新回到了粉丝大厂。张王氏全面接管了“洼狸大商店”。她每天定时在柜台后面坐上两个钟头，做成的买卖却与以前相同。她还偷偷往酒坛里放了橘子皮，也多少添一点冷水。余下的时间被她精心安排，除了做些家里杂事，天蒙蒙亮时还要放下一切去为四爷爷捏背。一切她都能应付自如，唯有捏背近来使她怵心。四爷爷再有两年就六十岁了，无比健壮，虎气生生。可是他毕竟肥胖起来，背肉越来越厚。捏背的人就怕背厚。张王氏为四爷爷捏了几十年背，这双捏泥老虎的手掌指法灵活，曾经给了四爷爷无限欢乐。可是她近来渐渐觉得有些力不从心了。含章是四爷爷的干女儿，张王氏常常在四爷爷屋里遇见她。有一次张王氏一边捏背，一边说今后该让含章捏背了。当时四爷爷卧在炕上，光光的上身蒙了一块白布。他听了，胖胖的身子烦躁地扭动一下，鼻子里发出“呣”的一声。张王氏从此再不敢提让含章捏背的事了。她每天从四爷爷屋里出来，又圆又红的太阳也正好升起。她直奔店里，站在柜台后面还稍微有些喘息。
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		+	In this paragraph Zhang Wangshi starts working in a big factory and takes over managing a "Walida" shop. She works behind the store counter and sometimes secretly adds orange peel and water to the wine barrel. The rest of the time she performs various household chores and goes to massage master's back. Eveb though he's sixty years old and very healthy his back is getting more thick. Even though Zhang massaged his back for many years it's becoming harder and harder for her. Master's stepdaughter is said to be the one who should be massaging the masters back but he doesn't want to. Each day she works in the store, goes to massage back and by the time she finishes massage and goes back to the store the sun is rising and she is tired.

	==AHY==		==AHY==

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	这以后张王氏每天都要到店里来，在柜台上一个一个摆弄她的泥老虎。生意越来越好，不知多少老太太来给家里的娃娃买泥老虎玩。如果是娃娃们自己来，张王氏就教他们新的玩法：让一群小泥虎攻击大泥虎，头颅相撞。不过几下子小泥虎的头就破了。娃娃们问怎么办？“让你家奶奶买新的。”张王氏说。买卖渐渐白天做不尽，夜里还要点上油灯，有一天快半夜了，还有一群老头子围坐在酒坛边，手捏一块咸菜喝酒。见素常常伏在柜台上睡过去，张王氏就吸足了一口烟，对准他红润的嘴唇吹一下。见素觉得张王氏真是一个好帮手，商店的兴隆也有她一份功绩。张王氏说：“有老虎保佑我们呢。”见素听了，怀疑地盯着那一溜儿缩着嘴角的泥老虎。张王氏加上一句：“虎是山神。”他们没事了就天南地北地闲扯，张王氏常常说到隋不召。她一说到这里就笑，露出黑黑的牙根。她说：“老东西瘦成一把骨头了，还坏。早些年多少水光溜滑的大姑娘乐得凑付这把骨头。我也凑付过。老东西从根就没胖过，不过从根就是把好手。		这以后张王氏每天都要到店里来，在柜台上一个一个摆弄她的泥老虎。生意越来越好，不知多少老太太来给家里的娃娃买泥老虎玩。如果是娃娃们自己来，张王氏就教他们新的玩法：让一群小泥虎攻击大泥虎，头颅相撞。不过几下子小泥虎的头就破了。娃娃们问怎么办？“让你家奶奶买新的。”张王氏说。买卖渐渐白天做不尽，夜里还要点上油灯，有一天快半夜了，还有一群老头子围坐在酒坛边，手捏一块咸菜喝酒。见素常常伏在柜台上睡过去，张王氏就吸足了一口烟，对准他红润的嘴唇吹一下。见素觉得张王氏真是一个好帮手，商店的兴隆也有她一份功绩。张王氏说：“有老虎保佑我们呢。”见素听了，怀疑地盯着那一溜儿缩着嘴角的泥老虎。张王氏加上一句：“虎是山神。”他们没事了就天南地北地闲扯，张王氏常常说到隋不召。她一说到这里就笑，露出黑黑的牙根。她说：“老东西瘦成一把骨头了，还坏。早些年多少水光溜滑的大姑娘乐得凑付这把骨头。我也凑付过。老东西从根就没胖过，不过从根就是把好手。
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		+	From that day on, Zhang Wangshi was to the shop on a daily basis to fiddle with her clay tigers. The tigers sold very well, as more and more old women started buying them for their grandchildren. When children themselves came to the shop, Zhang Wang taught them how to play with clay tigers in a way that they broke quickly. Once they broke, old women would simply buy some new. Therefore tigers sold so well that the shop had to be open day and night. Jiansu would often fall asleep on a counter and wake up to the feeling of Zhang Wangshi’s smoke blown over his face. When they had nothing better to do, they’d chat all night. One night the old woman said that the tiger has blessed them, only to add later that it was in fact a mountain god.

	==WMF==		==WMF==

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	“说到底也就是为那么一点点东西。那几年洼狸镇比现在还热闹，你没经过。太热闹的地方男人没有一个老实的，你记住我这句话。他们不老实，有点力气都使到女人身上了，干正经事倒有气无力。你叔父他们连一个三十斤的粉坨子也扛不动，小腿绊呀绊呀，噗哧一声就把粉坨摔成一堆雪。大伙儿那个笑。那些跑船的人一上了码头，就跟狼狗差不多，眼睛都是红的。他们个个样子吓人，真和他们好起来倒也没什么。你叔父对付人的法儿，有不少就是从跑船的那儿学来的。老隋家就出了这么一个不学正经的人。不过他也真是为咱镇上人做了点好事情。怎么说呢？他从船上弄来一块黑溜溜的脏东西，又香又臭，听说是麝香又加进了什么别的东西。谁家姑娘肚子胖起来，你叔父就把那块东西拳在掌心里，对在她的鼻子上。就这么几下子，姑娘家呕泻几次，也就和原来一样了。你说这有多么省心。		“说到底也就是为那么一点点东西。那几年洼狸镇比现在还热闹，你没经过。太热闹的地方男人没有一个老实的，你记住我这句话。他们不老实，有点力气都使到女人身上了，干正经事倒有气无力。你叔父他们连一个三十斤的粉坨子也扛不动，小腿绊呀绊呀，噗哧一声就把粉坨摔成一堆雪。大伙儿那个笑。那些跑船的人一上了码头，就跟狼狗差不多，眼睛都是红的。他们个个样子吓人，真和他们好起来倒也没什么。你叔父对付人的法儿，有不少就是从跑船的那儿学来的。老隋家就出了这么一个不学正经的人。不过他也真是为咱镇上人做了点好事情。怎么说呢？他从船上弄来一块黑溜溜的脏东西，又香又臭，听说是麝香又加进了什么别的东西。谁家姑娘肚子胖起来，你叔父就把那块东西拳在掌心里，对在她的鼻子上。就这么几下子，姑娘家呕泻几次，也就和原来一样了。你说这有多么省心。
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		+	Wang Zhang shares a story about the uncle's experiences in Wali Town. He reflects on the town's liveliness in the past and comments on the dishonesty of men. He describes the uncle as physically weak but resourceful in dealing with people, mentioning an incident involving a piece of musk that he uses to help girls relieve nausea. This passage provides insights into the uncle's character and the dynamics of the town.

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	这一次足足折腾了五天，虽然比几年前的那一次损失小多了，可也让赵多多惊慌失措。他三番五次地进老磨屋，求隋抱朴出任大厂的技术员。抱朴都拒绝了。他一下一下用木勺摊着湿胀的绿豆，摊完之后，又坐在那只看磨人坐了几辈子的方凳上。老多多走出磨屋就骂起来，说早晚把这个木头人一枪干掉。成了木头人了，为什么不把他干掉？土改以后的几十年里，老多多一直是高顶街的民兵头儿，可干掉了一些人。他觉得现在老隋家的这个人最好还是干掉。不过他老了，也没有了枪。		这一次足足折腾了五天，虽然比几年前的那一次损失小多了，可也让赵多多惊慌失措。他三番五次地进老磨屋，求隋抱朴出任大厂的技术员。抱朴都拒绝了。他一下一下用木勺摊着湿胀的绿豆，摊完之后，又坐在那只看磨人坐了几辈子的方凳上。老多多走出磨屋就骂起来，说早晚把这个木头人一枪干掉。成了木头人了，为什么不把他干掉？土改以后的几十年里，老多多一直是高顶街的民兵头儿，可干掉了一些人。他觉得现在老隋家的这个人最好还是干掉。不过他老了，也没有了枪。
		+	Since the opening of the Big Factory, the first occurrence of cylinder reversal took place. It lasted for five days, causing panic for Zhao Duoduo. Despite repeated requests, Sui Baopu refused to become the technician of the factory. Frustrated, Zhao Duoduo sat on the old stool, pondering. He vented his anger, expressing a desire to eliminate Sui Baopu, reminiscent of his past actions during the land reform. However, being old and lacking a gun, he couldn't execute his plan.

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 This is a description of an elderly woman named Zhang Wangshi.
-She had entered a large store with her handcrafted products such as clay tigers and small iron whistles. We can know from the description that she's in her sixties, her neck is as thin as an arm and her face covered in dust and she smokes cigarettes. Despite her age and physical fragility, she is skilled in craft, particularly in molding clay tigers which have reached a level of perfection. She could even shape them to resemble herself. She suggested the owner to put her clay tigers and other items on the counter for sale. She was willing to pay a consignment fee for the service.
+She had entered a large store with her handcrafted products such as clay tigers and small iron whistles. We can know from the description that she's in her sixties, her neck is as thin as an arm and her face is covered in dust. Additionally, she smokes cigarettes. Despite her age and physical fragility, she is skilled in craft, particularly in molding clay tigers which have reached a level of perfection. She could even shape them to resemble herself. She suggested the owner to put her clay tigers and other items on the counter for sale. She was willing to pay a consignment fee for the service.
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	匾额终于没有写成。见素不得不去求了镇小学的校长长脖吴。校长五十多岁，颈肉出奇的松弛。写匾额时，他不用瓶装墨汁，而让见素在一个半尺长的老砚台上研墨。见素整整研磨了一个钟点。长脖吴取出一杆秃头大笔，蘸饱了墨就在崭新的红纸上揉动起来。见素看到他瘦瘦的手腕上突然就凸起三道青筋，当青筋慢慢消下去的时候，“洼狸大商店”五个大字已成。其中有三个字与所有人的写法都不同。看着这几个字，不知怎么老让人想起生了锈的铁器。匾额悬到门上，身材颀长、面孔白皙的隋见素斜倚在门框上，看上去这个店多少有些怪异。开张的前一个星期只卖出三瓶香油、一盒香烟。隋不召第一个走进侄子的店里当顾客了，他四下里看着，临走时建议店里要卖零酒及下酒用的咸菜，墙壁上还要用油漆画个大酒坛。见素一一采纳，并且能够举一反三，在门侧外墙上贴了电影女演员的画。洼狸镇上的老人都在庙会上蹲着喝过零酒，酒坛勾起了他们一片怀旧之情。这样店里先多了老头子，接上又有了年轻人拥进来。一个店开始热闹起来了。		匾额终于没有写成。见素不得不去求了镇小学的校长长脖吴。校长五十多岁，颈肉出奇的松弛。写匾额时，他不用瓶装墨汁，而让见素在一个半尺长的老砚台上研墨。见素整整研磨了一个钟点。长脖吴取出一杆秃头大笔，蘸饱了墨就在崭新的红纸上揉动起来。见素看到他瘦瘦的手腕上突然就凸起三道青筋，当青筋慢慢消下去的时候，“洼狸大商店”五个大字已成。其中有三个字与所有人的写法都不同。看着这几个字，不知怎么老让人想起生了锈的铁器。匾额悬到门上，身材颀长、面孔白皙的隋见素斜倚在门框上，看上去这个店多少有些怪异。开张的前一个星期只卖出三瓶香油、一盒香烟。隋不召第一个走进侄子的店里当顾客了，他四下里看着，临走时建议店里要卖零酒及下酒用的咸菜，墙壁上还要用油漆画个大酒坛。见素一一采纳，并且能够举一反三，在门侧外墙上贴了电影女演员的画。洼狸镇上的老人都在庙会上蹲着喝过零酒，酒坛勾起了他们一片怀旧之情。这样店里先多了老头子，接上又有了年轻人拥进来。一个店开始热闹起来了。
		+	The plaque was not written in the end by Paobu and instead Jian Su went to ask the principal of school for help. It was a struggle but finally he managed. The plaque was hung in the shop. Not a lot was sold that week but then Paobu said that he should sold wine and pickles. That attracted customers to his shop.

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 隋见素终于辞掉了粉丝大厂的工作。很多人都对老隋家的一个人离开了这个行当感到惊讶。隋见素却无比轻松。他到工商部门去申请，又多次找高顶街书记李玉明和主任栾春记，终于在大街上设了个烟酒小摊。一个月之后，他又寻了一间临街的闲房，准备开一个商店。他几次到老磨屋里请哥哥跟他一起干，抱朴总是摇头。见素沮丧地说：“你的字好，那就给店写个匾额吧。”
 老磨隆隆地转动。抱朴取起见素拿来的笔，大声问：“什么店名？”见素一字一顿地说：“‘洼狸大商店’。”抱朴在方木凳上伸展着纸，手突然抖个不停。他去蘸墨，手抖得更厉害了。
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	老多多仰躺在温热的炕上，只穿一件黑布裤头。黑布又厚又硬的样子，闪着亮光，令人厌恶。老一茬洼狸镇人，除了隋不召几乎都无一例外地肥胖起来了。老多多肚子光光绵绵，让人怀疑有些肿胀。他胡须斑白，满脸横肉，两腮有些奇怪的紫斑。有些发绿的嘴唇微微开启，一颗食牙从里面显露出来。见素看着这张脸，突然发现左边的一只眼是睁着的，心立刻怦怦跳动起来。他脚步牢牢地挺住，伸出一根手指在左眼上方移动，那半睁的眼睛一动不动。他轻轻地舒了口气。老多多粗粗地喘着，巨大的喉结活动不停。紧贴土炕的窄窄的窗台上，莫名其妙地放了一把砍骨刀。这把刀铁锈斑斑，刀背有指头那么厚，但刀刃儿极其锋锐。见素看着砍骨刀，突然脸上没有一点血色。他呆呆地站了一会儿，最后无声无响地退出门去。		老多多仰躺在温热的炕上，只穿一件黑布裤头。黑布又厚又硬的样子，闪着亮光，令人厌恶。老一茬洼狸镇人，除了隋不召几乎都无一例外地肥胖起来了。老多多肚子光光绵绵，让人怀疑有些肿胀。他胡须斑白，满脸横肉，两腮有些奇怪的紫斑。有些发绿的嘴唇微微开启，一颗食牙从里面显露出来。见素看着这张脸，突然发现左边的一只眼是睁着的，心立刻怦怦跳动起来。他脚步牢牢地挺住，伸出一根手指在左眼上方移动，那半睁的眼睛一动不动。他轻轻地舒了口气。老多多粗粗地喘着，巨大的喉结活动不停。紧贴土炕的窄窄的窗台上，莫名其妙地放了一把砍骨刀。这把刀铁锈斑斑，刀背有指头那么厚，但刀刃儿极其锋锐。见素看着砍骨刀，突然脸上没有一点血色。他呆呆地站了一会儿，最后无声无响地退出门去。
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		+	Duoduo lay back to warm up, wearing only a pair of black trousers. Duoduo's belly appeared swollen, and his face was covered in wrinkles, with purple spots on his cheeks. His lips parted. Upon noticing one eye open, his heart raced. He cautiously approached, relieved when the eye didn't move as he touched above it. A rusty butcher knife lay on the narrow windowsill. Though rusted, its blade remained sharp. Seeing the knife, color drained from his face. He stood motionless for a before silently leaving the room.