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Revision as of 22:41, 4 March 2012
Good luck! Root 19:18, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
Dear Karly, can you look into handout2.doc and try to add some more genuine thoughts, the article so far looks pretty descriptive and encyclopaedic to me. Thank you very much! Root 19:25, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
Hey i noticed that you have a "[4]" in your rewards section "1997 Cannes Film Festival, Best Director (Happy Together)[4]." I would also add more to the thoughts section about maybe a few more things that you really enjoyed about the film. Can you think of specific scenes in which he demonstrated those great visual and intellectual brilliance? I say that because i agree with you on that part. Zhongwen dianying 20:58, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback! I went ahead and deleted the [4] and I tried to add a bit more to my thoughts section in regards to what I enjoyed about In the Mood for Love. --Keeley X. 03:19, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Hey Keeley, I think this looks so great! The only thing I would maybe change is that I don't think you need to use both names when crediting a source paranthetically. For example, instead of saying (Scott Tobias), I think you only need (Tobias). Everything else looks fantastic!! :) CharlotteCharles 03:27, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
I've been using your page as a template for my own. Well done. -Jon
Thanks again!