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Lots of sources and great pictures! [[User:Winghei|Winghei]] 20 October, 2012 | Lots of sources and great pictures! [[User:Winghei|Winghei]] 20 October, 2012 | ||
| − | Dear Jenessa, this is a phantastic paper bearing in mind that this is your first Wiki article. It is informative and well illustrated. I have fixed a few slight points, like the translation for the Kuomintang as "National People's Party" etc. Hope your next paper is similarly refreshing! [[User:Root|Root]] 11:08, 23 October 2012 (UTC) | + | Dear Jenessa, this is a phantastic paper bearing in mind that this is your first Wiki article. It is informative and well illustrated. I have fixed a few slight points, like the translation for the Kuomintang as "National People's Party" etc. Hope your next paper is similarly refreshing! |
| + | Things you can improve: | ||
| + | *You indicate some web sources, it would be better to have the references in the text so that the reader knows which source you used for which part of your paper. | ||
| + | *You also should give names to the web sources, now there are only URL addresses [[User:Root|Root]] 11:08, 23 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Looks good. Could you maybe put in some pictures? Dekeo 22:04, 11 October 2012 (UTC)
Thank you, I will fix that.Jenessa L 00:14, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
Lots of sources and great pictures! Winghei 20 October, 2012
Dear Jenessa, this is a phantastic paper bearing in mind that this is your first Wiki article. It is informative and well illustrated. I have fixed a few slight points, like the translation for the Kuomintang as "National People's Party" etc. Hope your next paper is similarly refreshing! Things you can improve:
- You indicate some web sources, it would be better to have the references in the text so that the reader knows which source you used for which part of your paper.
- You also should give names to the web sources, now there are only URL addresses Root 11:08, 23 October 2012 (UTC)