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Good Job! It may need a little more substance and content to take up the 20 min needed to present to the class. [[User:C lindsay|C lindsay]] 04:26, 17 October 2011 (UTC) 22:26, 16 October 2011 | Good Job! It may need a little more substance and content to take up the 20 min needed to present to the class. [[User:C lindsay|C lindsay]] 04:26, 17 October 2011 (UTC) 22:26, 16 October 2011 | ||
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| + | I agree, please change it to first-person narrative and elaborate on it further. It would also be good to have more works cited and made more references to the cited works in the text. [[User:Root|Root]] 13:50, 20 October 2011 (UTC) | ||
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This is supposed to be a first-person narrative, so I think that you should really change it to first-person . It should only take a couple minutes to change all of the "he"s to "I"s and I think you'll get a better grade. Dei 02:59, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
Good Job! It may need a little more substance and content to take up the 20 min needed to present to the class. C lindsay 04:26, 17 October 2011 (UTC) 22:26, 16 October 2011
I agree, please change it to first-person narrative and elaborate on it further. It would also be good to have more works cited and made more references to the cited works in the text. Root 13:50, 20 October 2011 (UTC)