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| + | It's great! I like all the pictures, it makes it easier to imagine how you were in real life. If you are looking to add more material to your paper I would add more about his "rise to power" (your youth etc.). Also, the paragraphs could transition a little more smoothly and be more defined as a whole. Good job and good luck!! | ||
Revision as of 05:49, 8 December 2011
Hooray!! I figured it out- how to insert pictures into the wiki article - Qianlong
No citations yet? Dekeo 19:47, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
I would like to hear a bit more about your private life. Was there anyone you were great friends with? Did you have a favorite consort? What did you like to do in your free time? I would like to see the deeper side of Qianlong's character. Maybe you can find a really emotional quote from when Qianlong was particularly angry, happy or sad. Dei 05:01, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
The pictures really add character to the presentation, and you did a great job presenting Qianlong to the class. Maybe just add a little more information on your written presentation. C lindsay 04:18, 17 October 2011 (UTC) 22:17, 16 October 2011
I'm not sure how this works yet... This is just a test. Santa Clause
It's great! I like all the pictures, it makes it easier to imagine how you were in real life. If you are looking to add more material to your paper I would add more about his "rise to power" (your youth etc.). Also, the paragraphs could transition a little more smoothly and be more defined as a whole. Good job and good luck!!