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Great job on the paper and remembering to put it into first person. I am sure if you added a couple of pictures it would help you get a better grade. [[User:C lindsay|C lindsay]] 04:28, 17 October 2011 (UTC) 22:28, 16 October 2011 | Great job on the paper and remembering to put it into first person. I am sure if you added a couple of pictures it would help you get a better grade. [[User:C lindsay|C lindsay]] 04:28, 17 October 2011 (UTC) 22:28, 16 October 2011 | ||
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| + | Nice little rant about the unfairness of Cixi- I'm pretty sure He did feel that way. In a further revision, you might want to spend a little less time explaining your philosophies. With a quick summary to whet our appetites, we can then go look up your writings for further info. As mentioned by others, some pictures would help- I don't know what you looked like! [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 19:15, 21 October 2011 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Awesome work! I would proof read your paper just to get some little glitches (repeated words, "is" instead of "it", that kind of a thing). I found about five or six. Overall I think your paper is good to go. ...Oh, and don't forget to cite and do intext citations. [[User:Santa Clause|Santa Clause]] 04:40, 8 December 2011 (UTC) | ||
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Does anyone know how to format this? I can't seem to figure it out.
Put a space between each paragraph but DON'T indent the paragraph. If you do that, it will look good.:) I will make some paragraphs in your paper to show you how its done, ok? Dei 18:24, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
If you can't find out how to put pictures in, just post the url on this page and I will upload them before midnight to your report.:) Dei 18:39, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
Great job on the paper and remembering to put it into first person. I am sure if you added a couple of pictures it would help you get a better grade. C lindsay 04:28, 17 October 2011 (UTC) 22:28, 16 October 2011
Nice little rant about the unfairness of Cixi- I'm pretty sure He did feel that way. In a further revision, you might want to spend a little less time explaining your philosophies. With a quick summary to whet our appetites, we can then go look up your writings for further info. As mentioned by others, some pictures would help- I don't know what you looked like! Dekeo 19:15, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
Awesome work! I would proof read your paper just to get some little glitches (repeated words, "is" instead of "it", that kind of a thing). I found about five or six. Overall I think your paper is good to go. ...Oh, and don't forget to cite and do intext citations. Santa Clause 04:40, 8 December 2011 (UTC)