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| + | Matt! The information is interesting. I would suggest adding more information though. The second paragraph particularly felt like a list rather than an actual paragraph so I would suggest using bullet points when you list information that way. Also the article is rather short so I wouls also suggest adding more information so the article is more complete. [[User:Samantha S|Samantha S]] ([[User talk:Samantha S|talk]]) 00:04, 1 March 2013 (CET) | ||
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Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important works of that time. Also provide a picture or two. Try and find some stuff from the time period that will really wow the class. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 00:21, 28 February 2013 (CET) | Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important works of that time. Also provide a picture or two. Try and find some stuff from the time period that will really wow the class. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 00:21, 28 February 2013 (CET) | ||
Mat- Some images would be nice so that the reader can get a better feel of whats going on. I think it would also be nice to know a little more about the prominent people of the time and maybe examples of their works. You also have a couple broken links in the page, but those are easy to fix.--[[User:TaraDFroisland|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland|talk]]) 00:47, 28 February 2013 (CET) | Mat- Some images would be nice so that the reader can get a better feel of whats going on. I think it would also be nice to know a little more about the prominent people of the time and maybe examples of their works. You also have a couple broken links in the page, but those are easy to fix.--[[User:TaraDFroisland|MerchantThief]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland|talk]]) 00:47, 28 February 2013 (CET) | ||
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Comments for 2013
Matt! The information is interesting. I would suggest adding more information though. The second paragraph particularly felt like a list rather than an actual paragraph so I would suggest using bullet points when you list information that way. Also the article is rather short so I wouls also suggest adding more information so the article is more complete. Samantha S (talk) 00:04, 1 March 2013 (CET)
Matt, You have some decent information here but try and go in depth on your subjects. I want to know more about all of them. Give more quotes and poems of the important works of that time. Also provide a picture or two. Try and find some stuff from the time period that will really wow the class. A Nonny Mouse (talk) 00:21, 28 February 2013 (CET)
Mat- Some images would be nice so that the reader can get a better feel of whats going on. I think it would also be nice to know a little more about the prominent people of the time and maybe examples of their works. You also have a couple broken links in the page, but those are easy to fix.--MerchantThief (talk) 00:47, 28 February 2013 (CET)