Difference between revisions of "Talk:A Beautiful Life"
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| − | Looks like you've put some work into revising this article. Not an easy task I know! | + | Looks like you've put some work into revising this article. Not an easy task I know! A couple of points on the plot synopsis: It's a plumber, not cook that Fang is pasted off as and he uses the police car to follow the married lover (boss), not exactly smart (it is using the vehicle for personal use) but not exactly shady either. |
| + | OK, on to more serious matters. I don't see any citations. Not on the pictures and not in the written parts. Unless you personally created all this material, you really do need to tell us where you got it; to give credit to the original sources. And, unless you got all the info from one source, you should have a citation after every section, if not every paragraph. Also, while online sources can be good, it doesn't hurt to add a written one or two (the texts used for class mention a few things related to this show). Don't give up! It is a good article, or will be when you get the citations in![[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] ([[User talk:Dekeo|talk]]) 04:05, 16 April 2013 (CEST) | ||
Revision as of 04:19, 16 April 2013
Looks like you've put some work into revising this article. Not an easy task I know! A couple of points on the plot synopsis: It's a plumber, not cook that Fang is pasted off as and he uses the police car to follow the married lover (boss), not exactly smart (it is using the vehicle for personal use) but not exactly shady either. OK, on to more serious matters. I don't see any citations. Not on the pictures and not in the written parts. Unless you personally created all this material, you really do need to tell us where you got it; to give credit to the original sources. And, unless you got all the info from one source, you should have a citation after every section, if not every paragraph. Also, while online sources can be good, it doesn't hurt to add a written one or two (the texts used for class mention a few things related to this show). Don't give up! It is a good article, or will be when you get the citations in!Dekeo (talk) 04:05, 16 April 2013 (CEST)