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This is a nice start. Perhaps you could add some pictures and a little more detail (for example, how about a map of the silk road, and maybe a picture or two of some of the art you mentioned)? [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 22:08, 11 October 2012 (UTC) | This is a nice start. Perhaps you could add some pictures and a little more detail (for example, how about a map of the silk road, and maybe a picture or two of some of the art you mentioned)? [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 22:08, 11 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | OK- so the Silk road and the art pictures would be about ancient Chinese society and economy- still, a picture or two would be nice. If you need help to put in a picture, check the other papers (or previous classes works) and click on "edit" so that you can find the proper format for inserting pictures.[[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 19:36, 12 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | It's the beginning of a good page I can tell! [[User:Winghei|Winghei]] 20 October, 2012 | ||
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| + | Dear Jessica, it looks very nice, although there are still a few things which needs to be improved for the next time: | ||
| + | *The article is far too short | ||
| + | *The dragon is not cited correctly, we cannot see that it is creative commons license or license free. | ||
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| + | I hope these comments help. Best, [[User:Root|Root]] 11:31, 23 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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This is a nice start. Perhaps you could add some pictures and a little more detail (for example, how about a map of the silk road, and maybe a picture or two of some of the art you mentioned)? Dekeo 22:08, 11 October 2012 (UTC)
OK- so the Silk road and the art pictures would be about ancient Chinese society and economy- still, a picture or two would be nice. If you need help to put in a picture, check the other papers (or previous classes works) and click on "edit" so that you can find the proper format for inserting pictures.Dekeo 19:36, 12 October 2012 (UTC)
It's the beginning of a good page I can tell! Winghei 20 October, 2012
Dear Jessica, it looks very nice, although there are still a few things which needs to be improved for the next time:
- The article is far too short
- The dragon is not cited correctly, we cannot see that it is creative commons license or license free.
I hope these comments help. Best, Root 11:31, 23 October 2012 (UTC)