Difference between revisions of "Talk:China Economy"
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The PowerPoint looks interesting-Who's is this? You need to "sign" it remember? (click on"~" 4 times to sign). Also, it would be nice if there was a little written material (and maybe a picture) too. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 22:20, 11 October 2012 (UTC) | The PowerPoint looks interesting-Who's is this? You need to "sign" it remember? (click on"~" 4 times to sign). Also, it would be nice if there was a little written material (and maybe a picture) too. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 22:20, 11 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | I think, it is a little bit short. [[User:Root|Root]] 11:16, 23 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Don't forget to list your sources. You mention some, in the body of your text, but, until you list sources (for example, how did you find out about the "green city"? If it was online, you could list the website at the end of the paper). Until you do, it is just your opinions. Also, it would be good to check the spelling- it is "Tiananmen Square "; you can look words up online to verify them (the spell checker isn't always right when it comes to foreign words!). Nice job.[[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 17:03, 5 December 2012 (UTC) | ||
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The PowerPoint looks interesting-Who's is this? You need to "sign" it remember? (click on"~" 4 times to sign). Also, it would be nice if there was a little written material (and maybe a picture) too. Dekeo 22:20, 11 October 2012 (UTC)
I think, it is a little bit short. Root 11:16, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
Don't forget to list your sources. You mention some, in the body of your text, but, until you list sources (for example, how did you find out about the "green city"? If it was online, you could list the website at the end of the paper). Until you do, it is just your opinions. Also, it would be good to check the spelling- it is "Tiananmen Square "; you can look words up online to verify them (the spell checker isn't always right when it comes to foreign words!). Nice job.Dekeo 17:03, 5 December 2012 (UTC)