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Hey Holly, it's looking great! I agree that pictures would be fantastic, but have been having a hard time finding good ones for mine. Are you having the same problem? I think with your parenthetical citations you don't need commas though. Just (Palmer 187). <- example. It's also looking a little funky at the bottom. You've got a parenthetical citation with no citation, plus there are weird spacing issues. Also a couple grammatical issues at the top (no spaces after commas, the skyscraper "The skyscraper, etc.) Nice work with incorporating the actual Chinese characters though! I have no idea how to do that haha! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:40, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | Hey Holly, it's looking great! I agree that pictures would be fantastic, but have been having a hard time finding good ones for mine. Are you having the same problem? I think with your parenthetical citations you don't need commas though. Just (Palmer 187). <- example. It's also looking a little funky at the bottom. You've got a parenthetical citation with no citation, plus there are weird spacing issues. Also a couple grammatical issues at the top (no spaces after commas, the skyscraper "The skyscraper, etc.) Nice work with incorporating the actual Chinese characters though! I have no idea how to do that haha! :) [[User:CharlotteCharles|CharlotteCharles]] 03:40, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | I think I was working on my wiki page about the time these comments were made. I added pictures and hopefully I fixed the funky things at the bottom and fixed the grammar issues. Thanks for the feedback and helpful comments.--[[User:Hollyspendlove|Hollyspendlove]] 05:35, 5 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Will there be more content? Also, given the beauty of the movie, images would greatly help the paper. --Ming Ming 03:24, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Hey Holly, it's looking great! I agree that pictures would be fantastic, but have been having a hard time finding good ones for mine. Are you having the same problem? I think with your parenthetical citations you don't need commas though. Just (Palmer 187). <- example. It's also looking a little funky at the bottom. You've got a parenthetical citation with no citation, plus there are weird spacing issues. Also a couple grammatical issues at the top (no spaces after commas, the skyscraper "The skyscraper, etc.) Nice work with incorporating the actual Chinese characters though! I have no idea how to do that haha! :) CharlotteCharles 03:40, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
I think I was working on my wiki page about the time these comments were made. I added pictures and hopefully I fixed the funky things at the bottom and fixed the grammar issues. Thanks for the feedback and helpful comments.--Hollyspendlove 05:35, 5 March 2012 (UTC)