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Also, what is your thesis statement? I think it would be good if you put your thesis in the introduction, and then tried to carry it into each of your sections, and then made a final conclusion combining your mini conclusions from each sections. [[User:Name|Name]] 07:54, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | Also, what is your thesis statement? I think it would be good if you put your thesis in the introduction, and then tried to carry it into each of your sections, and then made a final conclusion combining your mini conclusions from each sections. [[User:Name|Name]] 07:54, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
| + | :I'm working on it- My thesis statement is still a little vague but it is in there- just not in the intro- next section. Hopefully, by the time I finish, the argument will seem clear. Right now, I think there will be two "conclusions" one for the first person part and one for the over all paper- and there, I plan to recap the paper's argument. Thanks for your suggestions.I need all the help I can get! [[User:Licia K|Licia K]] 08:47, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Hello!
The poem, White Egret, seems to have every other line in a giant box. I don't think this is what you intended! I'll post more comments when they arise. Thanks~
--Checksum 18:34, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
Instead of a simple list of facts, I think your paper should read more like an essay, with full sentences and paragraphs. Name 07:51, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Also, what is your thesis statement? I think it would be good if you put your thesis in the introduction, and then tried to carry it into each of your sections, and then made a final conclusion combining your mini conclusions from each sections. Name 07:54, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
- I'm working on it- My thesis statement is still a little vague but it is in there- just not in the intro- next section. Hopefully, by the time I finish, the argument will seem clear. Right now, I think there will be two "conclusions" one for the first person part and one for the over all paper- and there, I plan to recap the paper's argument. Thanks for your suggestions.I need all the help I can get! Licia K 08:47, 4 March 2012 (UTC)