Difference between revisions of "Talk:The Warring States Period"
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Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. [[User:Oprah wind fury| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST) | Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. [[User:Oprah wind fury| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST) | ||
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| + | == I like your brevity and incorporation of pictures. It flowed well.[[User:Dr_who|Dr_who]] ([[User talk:Dr_who|talk]]) 28 February 2013 | ||
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== I would like to see how some of the ideologies mentioned affected the warring states rather than just listing them. This leaves a lot of loose ends for the reader to track down.Anonymous5 (talk) 21:29, 27 February 2013 (CET)
Your presentation of information is nice. It does not look like it is long enough though and I'm not sure if you are still supposed to use the first person since your paper is about a period. I would email the professor about that. Oprah wind fury (talk) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)
== I like your brevity and incorporation of pictures. It flowed well.Dr_who (talk) 28 February 2013