Difference between revisions of "Talk:Terra Cotta Army"
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If you are looking for more content, I think it may be interesting to read more about the production process- what terra cotta is, how it is made, and how each soldier was assembled. Also, what kept this artwork preserved for such a long period of time. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:28, 3 March 2012 (UTC) | If you are looking for more content, I think it may be interesting to read more about the production process- what terra cotta is, how it is made, and how each soldier was assembled. Also, what kept this artwork preserved for such a long period of time. [[Jimmerica|Jimmerica]] 02:28, 3 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Thanks for your feedback, I just added the information on how the soldiers were made.[[chris1|chris1]] | ||
Another comment on Content, where is your argument? So far, this is just a description of what happened. And, be sure to proofread this. You have some punctuation issues and many of your sentences don't make sense, the way they are written. Try reading it out loud, I think you'll see what I mean. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:21, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | Another comment on Content, where is your argument? So far, this is just a description of what happened. And, be sure to proofread this. You have some punctuation issues and many of your sentences don't make sense, the way they are written. Try reading it out loud, I think you'll see what I mean. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 09:21, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Great! I just made some grammar corrections.[[chris1|chris1]] | ||
Add the video you found on youtube. Also, I can see your statement on the top that this is one of the greatest discoveries, but where is the content to support that strong statement? Be more descriptive in the size of the army and where it is kept. It would be good to describe the surrounding area or that there are possibly more armies and the tomb of Qin on that land. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 17:59, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | Add the video you found on youtube. Also, I can see your statement on the top that this is one of the greatest discoveries, but where is the content to support that strong statement? Be more descriptive in the size of the army and where it is kept. It would be good to describe the surrounding area or that there are possibly more armies and the tomb of Qin on that land. [[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 17:59, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Yes, I just added more information on the rest of area around the emperors tomb.[[chris1|chris1]] | ||
And say why they haven't uncovered the rest of the burial place.[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 18:00, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | And say why they haven't uncovered the rest of the burial place.[[User:Linksys|Linksys]] 18:00, 4 March 2012 (UTC) | ||
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References
You should add your references using MLA format. Jimmerica 02:27, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
Content
If you are looking for more content, I think it may be interesting to read more about the production process- what terra cotta is, how it is made, and how each soldier was assembled. Also, what kept this artwork preserved for such a long period of time. Jimmerica 02:28, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for your feedback, I just added the information on how the soldiers were made.chris1
Another comment on Content, where is your argument? So far, this is just a description of what happened. And, be sure to proofread this. You have some punctuation issues and many of your sentences don't make sense, the way they are written. Try reading it out loud, I think you'll see what I mean. Dekeo 09:21, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Great! I just made some grammar corrections.chris1
Add the video you found on youtube. Also, I can see your statement on the top that this is one of the greatest discoveries, but where is the content to support that strong statement? Be more descriptive in the size of the army and where it is kept. It would be good to describe the surrounding area or that there are possibly more armies and the tomb of Qin on that land. Linksys 17:59, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
Yes, I just added more information on the rest of area around the emperors tomb.chris1
And say why they haven't uncovered the rest of the burial place.Linksys 18:00, 4 March 2012 (UTC)