Difference between revisions of "Talk:Xiao Hong (1911-1942)"
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Would like a little bit more information, but this is still very well written.--[[User:Foot|Foot]] 19:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC) | Would like a little bit more information, but this is still very well written.--[[User:Foot|Foot]] 19:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Sounds like she was quite a character. There are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that you really should fix- they call the reader's attention away from the information to focus on the errors instead. Also, which parts were comment from your sources and which were your comments? I had a difficult time trying to figure that out. [[User:Dekeo|Dekeo]] 21:35, 12 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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It looks good! Do you have any images? Ellafitzgerald 05:32, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
yeah, it doesn't look too bad, but kind of lacking on pictures. Did you look on Wiki Commons or Flickr? Mingemperor 17:34, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
I agree it needs more images but also maybe a little bit more information.Pips 17:41, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
Would like a little bit more information, but this is still very well written.--Foot 19:56, 10 October 2012 (UTC)
Sounds like she was quite a character. There are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that you really should fix- they call the reader's attention away from the information to focus on the errors instead. Also, which parts were comment from your sources and which were your comments? I had a difficult time trying to figure that out. Dekeo 21:35, 12 October 2012 (UTC)