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Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
 
Looks great! Very well formatted too. [[User:Pips|Pips]] 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
  
Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it doesn't really apply specifically to this author. But if not, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
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Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. [[User:Mingemperor|Mingemperor]] 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

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Looks great! Very well formatted too. Pips 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. Mingemperor 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)