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Maybe some visual examples will give insight to this. Other examples would be nice as well. Its really interesting to see what these individuals would do to prove themselves! --[[User:TaraDFroisland|TaraDFroisland]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland|talk]]) 00:28, 28 February 2013 (CET) | Maybe some visual examples will give insight to this. Other examples would be nice as well. Its really interesting to see what these individuals would do to prove themselves! --[[User:TaraDFroisland|TaraDFroisland]] ([[User talk:TaraDFroisland|talk]]) 00:28, 28 February 2013 (CET) | ||
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| + | More information would be a great addition. Pictures would be good to see as well, I know that they might be pretty gruesome to search for but it could help a lot. Your presentation had some really amazing stuff about that girl who wrote in her own blood and to see more on her would be great including the video clips you showed in class. [[User:A Nonny Mouse|A Nonny Mouse]] ([[User talk:A Nonny Mouse|talk]]) 00:46, 28 February 2013 (CET) | ||
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New comments in 2013
Dear Lela, please go to your google.docs page, click on "File" and "Save as" and save it as pptx. Then upload your powerpoint presentation and extend the existing article. Now it is still too short. The final version should be 7 pages. You should not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [1]. Good luck with your composition! Best, Root (talk) 13:53, 25 February 2013 (CET)
Maybe some visual examples will give insight to this. Other examples would be nice as well. Its really interesting to see what these individuals would do to prove themselves! --TaraDFroisland (talk) 00:28, 28 February 2013 (CET)
More information would be a great addition. Pictures would be good to see as well, I know that they might be pretty gruesome to search for but it could help a lot. Your presentation had some really amazing stuff about that girl who wrote in her own blood and to see more on her would be great including the video clips you showed in class. A Nonny Mouse (talk) 00:46, 28 February 2013 (CET)
Old comments
Creepy yet good. a Picture or two would be nice. Alchemist1330
Comment 2
In the FILIAL PIETY section, why does cutting off fingers mean devotion? And why must Zhou write in blood? She can just sit and do nothing. --Meh 07:37, 19 April 2012 (UTC)