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Dear Colby, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 13:40, 25 February 2013 (CET) | Dear Colby, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [http://wiki.vm.rub.de/uvu/index.php/uvu:Community_Portal]. Good luck with your composition! Best, [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 13:40, 25 February 2013 (CET) | ||
| + | :Dear Colby, there are no pictures and the references are not quoted after each sentence/paragraph with page numbers. It is also just 2.2 pages instead of 7. Please contact me earlier if you encounter any problems. [[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 18:12, 4 March 2013 (CET) | ||
It is blank... Refer to above comment for guidance. [[User:Oprah wind fury| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST) | It is blank... Refer to above comment for guidance. [[User:Oprah wind fury| Oprah wind fury]] ([[User talk:Oprah wind fury|talk]]) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST) | ||
Latest revision as of 19:12, 4 March 2013
New comments in 2013
Dear Colby, please start by uploading your powerpoint presentation and then revise the existing article. The final version should be 7 pages. You need to stick to the 1st person narrative ("I", "me" etc.) and not only describe things, but also switch to the commentator role (maybe indicated by "Contemporary Commentator" and then evaluate and discuss the topic from different angles, put it into context, criticize etc.). If you want to write less, you can integrate more pictures. Please make sure to indicate your source after each sentence or, if there is a whole paragraph with the same source, after each paragraph. You can indicate it like "Smith 2009:345" and in the final section "References" write the long version "Smith, Jared, Confucius revisted, Yale University Press 2009, 415 pp." In the edit mode, section headers are indicated with "=" and sub section headers with "==". In the edit mode, paragraphs need to be marked with 2 line feeds ("Enter" key). 1 Line feed will not show up as a paragraph. For additional editing tips, including how to indicate sources and how to find copyright free pictures, please refer to [1]. Good luck with your composition! Best, Root (talk) 13:40, 25 February 2013 (CET)
- Dear Colby, there are no pictures and the references are not quoted after each sentence/paragraph with page numbers. It is also just 2.2 pages instead of 7. Please contact me earlier if you encounter any problems. Root (talk) 18:12, 4 March 2013 (CET)
It is blank... Refer to above comment for guidance. Oprah wind fury (talk) 15:12, 27 February 2013 (MST)
== I think it's a bit brief. That's probably because it needs. I like the relation you pointed out to the Roman Empire.Dr_who (talk) 28 February 2013
==I also liked the information that dealt with the realation to the Roman Empire, something I didn't know. You could add a couple pictures I think. Leo1299 (talk) 02:45, 1 March 2013 (CET)