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I agree, the section "what is ten thousand word memorial" could be more broken up with smaller headings. Your page looks good though. I also wouldn't mind reading more under the biography section. It was kind of short, but maybe it's hard to find information about him, i don't know. But nicely done! It looks great and the pictures are fun. Good choice --[[User:Chameleon|Chameleon]] ([[User talk:Chameleon|talk]]) 22:10, 15 April 2013 (CEST) | I agree, the section "what is ten thousand word memorial" could be more broken up with smaller headings. Your page looks good though. I also wouldn't mind reading more under the biography section. It was kind of short, but maybe it's hard to find information about him, i don't know. But nicely done! It looks great and the pictures are fun. Good choice --[[User:Chameleon|Chameleon]] ([[User talk:Chameleon|talk]]) 22:10, 15 April 2013 (CEST) | ||
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| + | If the original 10k word memorial is a copy of the original document or primary text, perhaps a way to set that apart to make it more apparent? Otherwise, well done. As stated before, nice use of pictures. [[User:Ignatius J Reilly|Ignatius J Reilly]] ([[User talk:Ignatius J Reilly|talk]]) 02:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST) | ||
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Your page looks very good. The organization is specifically very strong. The layout is interesting and the information is presented in a logical and understandable way. I especially liked the author notes on the biography. I think more commentary could definitely add to the piece. Also, I think you section "What is 'Ten Thousand Word Memorial?'" could be divided into smaller categories. You can make smaller headings by putting a different number of "=" around your headings. Five "=" marks
makes a bolded, unobtrusive heading, like this,
which can be effectively added in to strengthen an already strong page. Cappuccino (talk)
I agree, the section "what is ten thousand word memorial" could be more broken up with smaller headings. Your page looks good though. I also wouldn't mind reading more under the biography section. It was kind of short, but maybe it's hard to find information about him, i don't know. But nicely done! It looks great and the pictures are fun. Good choice --Chameleon (talk) 22:10, 15 April 2013 (CEST)
If the original 10k word memorial is a copy of the original document or primary text, perhaps a way to set that apart to make it more apparent? Otherwise, well done. As stated before, nice use of pictures. Ignatius J Reilly (talk) 02:39, 16 April 2013 (CEST)