Difference between revisions of "Talk:Jin and Yuan Dynasties"
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[[User:Oprah wind fury| Oprah wind fury]]([[User:Oprah wind fury|talk]]) 23:26, 15 April 2013 (MST) | [[User:Oprah wind fury| Oprah wind fury]]([[User:Oprah wind fury|talk]]) 23:26, 15 April 2013 (MST) | ||
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| + | Dear Colby, the map is good, but it would be great to have more illustrations. Also I am missing all the references and the source for the map. I am also missing your ppt. And the article should be at least 7 screen pages. I am sorry, the contents is quite good, but all these minor things effect your grade. Best, --[[User:Root|Root]] ([[User talk:Root|talk]]) 03:26, 22 April 2013 (CEST) | ||
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I really like your article Colby, the information is really solid and your pictures are great. You could use a few more pictures though my good sir. Pokemon Trainer Red
It looks like you have a lot of good information, could maybe use a couple more pictures. Leo1299 (talk) 06:50, 16 April 2013 (CEST)
You still need some references for the article. That is really important to back up what you are saying. Oprah wind fury(talk) 23:26, 15 April 2013 (MST)
Dear Colby, the map is good, but it would be great to have more illustrations. Also I am missing all the references and the source for the map. I am also missing your ppt. And the article should be at least 7 screen pages. I am sorry, the contents is quite good, but all these minor things effect your grade. Best, --Root (talk) 03:26, 22 April 2013 (CEST)