Talk:Zhang Jie (born 1937)

Looks great! Very well formatted too. Pips 04:19, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, really long, You really do know your subject well. But on the other hand you still have quite a few grammar problems to work out, but that's ok. If you're looking to shorten your content, just get rid of some of the background info about Mao Zedong and the communist government. It's good stuff, but it's not so important when your discussing just this author. But if that's not what you want to do, that's ok too. Mingemperor 06:53, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

I enjoyed the paper. I thought the grammar was fine. I particularly enjoy the lay out of it and the pictures. This paper helps you to know what else was going on during the time of the author.Reddragon 07:38, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

Love how much work went into the writing of this paper. It gets a little off track at times, something that can be fixed by eliminating unneccessary content not pertaining directly to Zhang Jie. All together a great display of how much work you are willing to put into your paper. Great Work--Foot 07:02, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

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