Talk:Han Han

Looked like you went well into depth in your presentation, and I assume that your paper will be equally as brilliant. --Foot 06:59, 5 December 2012 (UTC)

The version I got by email looks good to me. However, there are some similarities and even taken over parts from Wikipedia. Also the sources should be mentioned in a more detailed way, sometimes you only mention article title and journal title, without year, issue etc. Best, Root 21:02, 6 December 2012 (UTC)