Talk:Xi Jinping

This is supposed to be a first-person narrative, so I think that you should really change it to first-person . It should only take a couple minutes to change all of the "he"s to "I"s and I think you'll get a better grade. Dei 02:59, 17 October 2011 (UTC)

Good Job! It may need a little more substance and content to take up the 20 min needed to present to the class. C lindsay 04:26, 17 October 2011 (UTC) 22:26, 16 October 2011

I agree, please change it to first-person narrative and elaborate on it further. It would also be good to have more works cited and made more references to the cited works in the text. Root 13:50, 20 October 2011 (UTC)