1朱素珍：Appreciation of poetry translation in the cross-culture background

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Abstract

It is such a thoughtful question that how to translate poetry in the cross-culture background. It is not difficult to translate poetry, and large quantities of translators and writers have provided us uncountable excellent versions of translation of poetry. A professional translator has the responsibility to achieve the effects of three principles put forward by Yan Fu: faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance which are one of the important criteria for translation. This essay would mainly discuss the appreciation of poetry translation based on the three principles as discussed before with the analysis of different versions of translation of the same poetry. After the comparable analysis of these versions, whether the translators have obeyed the three principles as well as whether the cultural factor has been considered or not can be uncovered clearly. Furthermore, in the process of appreciation, people can also learn how to translate the poetry properly. Besides, such analysis is conducive to the appreciation of poetry translation in the cross-culture background, which is inspiring and instructive.

Key words

poetry translation; cross-culture background; Yan Fu’s three principles of faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance

Introduction

Poetry as an important part of human literature, experienced ups and downs in the long river of history from the period of Greece to the modern days. Human varieties of emotions and feelings can be recorded and transmitted by the form of poetry, which is the essential part of human life. For China, poetry has played a special and crucial role since the ancient times, with Tang dynasty as its prime priority period. Because of its strong function of expressing people’s feelings and amazing entertainment, it is preferred by thousands of poets such us Li Bai, Du Fu, Vans, etc. At the same time, piles of wonderful poetries have appeared like the mushroom after rain. Actually, poetry is universal and common for humankind, and it is being chosen by some western poets including Percy Bysshe Shelley, Robert Burns and Emily Dickinson, etc. According to Aristotle, literature should have the function of education, that is to say, instructing people’s mind. Poetry is positive and it provides chance for people to imitate and create their own lovely poetry, and during this period, their virtue can be promoted, so they can be more morally great. However, in Plato’s opinion, poetry is the second remove from reality, and it is the great danger for the unity of the state of philosophy. Moreover, the poets should be exiled, and there should be strict censorship for the publication of poetry. Different philosophers have different ideas about poetry. And different poets can create different kinds of poetries with rich titles and versatile structures. Besides, people speaking in different language and living in exotic culture are capable to write the poetry that is special to them. However, no matter what are the difference, one point is true: poetry is a powerful tool for people to know and create the world. Such special point is stemming from the difference of language and culture. People are not unfamiliar with Sapir Wolf’s Theory of Linguistic Relativity which put forward that language decides how people think. It is such a strong and even a little decisive theory. However, it at least uncovers the relationship between language and culture. It is understandable that language is to some extent reflects how people are thinking， and the thinking can further show the influence of culture in the process of communication. For example, in China, people would say” Have you eaten?” when they meet each other occasionally. But the Chinese are not intentionally asking whether the hearer has eaten or not, and they are only expressing a kind of greeting. Therefore, when the foreigners hearing such a sentence, they would get confused. This is a typical example showing the culture’s important role in communication. Except for the spoken communication, culture would also influence the translation of literary works, such as poetry, novel and play, etc. In the translation of poetry, a professional translator has to put the factor of culture into consideration well in order to achieve a high-quality translation effect. Actually, poetry cross-culture translation is always an inevitable issue for translation, especially today we are in a high-speed developing cross-culture Time, naturally how to appreciate the translation of poetry is of great importance.

Comparative analysis of different version of translation of poetry

In this part, it is necessary to make some comparative analysis between different versions of translation. As we all known, translation is also a process in which the translators try to create and translate. Translators are the creators at the same time. Because of their different culture background, educational background, their translation experience and some other factors, different translators can create different versions of poetry. Therefore, in this process we can experience how the translators construct and create the translation based on their embodied experience and professional quality. It is not uncommon that the same poetry may have different versions of translation. And the appreciation of translation is to analyze how the translators translate it and why they would try to translate in such a way. At the same time, translation appreciation is not just a process to appreciate it, it is also a process to learn. Translation can be seen as a bridge that relates the reader and the writer in different language background. Without translation, it is impossible to transmit the beauty and amaze of literary works to more people, not less achieving a grandeur and multi-cultural literature feast. The translators are like the builder of the bridge, and their subjective factors including attitude, spirit as well as objective factors involving building method, the natural factors and so on are a unified system that would influence how the builders construct the bridge. It is believed that there are no best versions of translation, but better one. Therefore, the unlimited nature of translation makes it possible for us to make a comparison between kinds of versions, because there is no best translation but better one.

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