Talk:Su Shi (Su Dongpo)

I suggest that you add in titles to separate information like this.

Title

but you don't have to

but overall it looks great, also make sure you use in text citations in addition to your list of refrences at the bottom and i would sugest instead of writting (source Edgar pg. 34) just have (Edgar pg. 34) you don't need to say source but it is really up to you.

Alchemist1330

Comment 2

I think you should make the poems clearer, as in "cleaner"? Like right now it seems to blend in with the rest of the text, I think it should be more distinctive. Thanks, --Checksum 04:53, 4 March 2012 (UTC)